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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 4
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She felt relieved upon seeing the smile on the brunette’s face “Okay, I’ll shut up now”
“Good… lately I’ve been thinking… this apartment has three rooms and more than enough for me and Angie. I’m wondering if you don’t mind living with us…”
Molly blinked three consecutive times and asked herself if what she was hearing was true
“I’m earning nicely right now with my new job so I’m thinking if you want to go finish high school I think we can manage and then after you can continue college and take that course that you want, what’s that again?…”
But Molly couldn’t speak, tears just flowing like river
“… Ah I know you wanted to be a chef! Right yeah I remember, you told me one day you wanted to be a chef”
Bette had also tears in her eyes by this time “So what do you think? Does becoming an official part of the Porter family sound good to you?”
“I-I really don’t know what to say…” Molly said sobbing; her life was a classic example of a sad and tragic story, a child who grew up without love in her life, no family to care for her. But the day she met Bette and her daughter Angie, even though she wasn’t really living with them she knew she found a home and a family.
Bette smiled “Just say yes”
Molly hugged Bette tightly and cried even harder “I love you Bette”
“I love you too sweetie”
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Tina took a sip on her glass of wine before putting it on the table to the side, and then placed her MacBook on her lap. It was just nine in the evening and she thought it was too early to hit the sack. Until now she could still feel that tingling sensation between her legs as she remembered her encounter with Bette in her office.
She turned on the electronic device and checked her email. She raised a brow when she noticed that the indecent advertisement that she posted still getting a lot of response. Without even bothering of looking at the replies, she hit the all mark button then clicked delete. Next thing she did was to deactivate her account, for she wouldn’t be needing it anymore.
The hazel eyed beauty took another sip on her red wine and checked the last email she received that day. It was from Brandy Collier. She opened the email and then the attachment and in just a few seconds the images of the beautiful lake house showed up on the screen.
She really liked the house and especially loved the gorgeous lake but when she saw the image of the master’s bedroom, her heart rate increased as she zoomed in the image.
Suddenly she saw Bette on the bed… lying on her stomach…the white blanket covering only from the waist down exposing her glorious back and her beautiful caramel colored skin. Then she turned to her side facing Tina, her head propped on her right elbow while her other hand holding the white blanket to her chest.
Bette gave her a very sexy smile and said
“Come here…”
to be continued…
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And oh one more thing… I work in a bank so I don’t know anything about law firms, so please excuse any errors that you may see and if you do, just let me know privately, LoL! Songs used are just borrowed and no copyright infringement intended (-;
I feel like diving in the lake right now..
Wow, great update! I like the fact that Bette is reaching out to Molly to help her improve her life by sharing her good fortune. Ironically Molly wants to model her life after Bette’s. She does not know the personal deal that Bette has used to get a step up in life. It seems that business deal between she and Tina may cause problems in Tina’s life. I think Tim’s bitterness and Randall political causes are going to make Tina’s life very difficult. Randall have apparently talked to her parents about getting married and has enlisted their help to pop the question. Tina needs to end things with Randall and realize that she wants more than just sex with Bette. Please continue to post. Thank you
You’re killing me here!!! ;)
Hi, this was the bomb! You know I love this story. I think Tim will be trouble also once Tina break it off with Randall. I also think the parents helped him and he’s going to ask the question at the dinner. Oh well! Our ladies will stand strong together. I was really touched when Bette asked Molly to move in. I feel we all should reach back and help someone when we get a blessing. Those songs fitted the scene wonderful. You are so great at picking them. I hope you continue to do that when they are alone in her office. Please let the first time they make love be at the lake house. Can’t wait until the next post. I know it want be until at least next Saturday. Will be waiting. Thanks again and PPS.
I was looking forward to the next chapter , and I think of the following is likely to be a week :-( I am sad. :-)
I know I said: I love this story! so fascinate me when I read.
The scene between Tina and Randall, it was strange to me ,
that is so inconsistent with Tina’s personality ( she is a strong, independent, confident and strong woman ) and yet she behaved meekly . I understand that she enjoys being together with him, but if Tina have never let him into her bed and he uninvited appeared on the flat? now,why ?
(especially, if Tina angry about the rumors their marriage )
Randall is a manipulative person and I feel he is very dangerous . Tina have to yet break up with him before dinner because it will be Randall and Tina’s parents join forces, so she will not have a chance.
The sexual tension was again high in between. It seems to Bette getting curious rather than afraid.
Bette to help Molly did great things , and I hope she manages to make the most of the situation .
thnak you! I hope posting soon
Saying TOO SHORT a chapter….will that entice you to write a longer one as soon as possible?
Thanks!!!
I think Tim is going to make a play for Bette and that will cause some major problems and drama..
Loved it, thanks
I read the scene in the office with fear, if Tina insists, soon everyone will know what’s going on.
Thank you phacey for giving us another exciting chapter.
While waiting I reread your other open stories.
Phacey, you write beautifully despite English not being your primary language. I love the way you have managed to take a similar theme and make separate and distinctively different stories of it. Please continue them. I await your next updates.
That’s awesome and please next post make them have they first kiss. Please post more, thanks
OMG Phacey, it should be against fanfic rules that when a story is as exceptional as this one is, it should only be posted in full completion.
This is the 2nd time I have come to read this update in one day.
1) The thought occurred to me that Tina’s parents may be anti gay….. Goodness I
hope they are not.
2) Bring on the break up with Randall and Tina.
3) Bring on the opportunity of Bette & Shane being seen by Tina & having Tina
become jealous etc.
4) Bring on Bette’s “move”- we know she is capable and she is also curious now.
5) Time for the girls to exchange numbers
6) Would love to read Tina’s POV in an initially unseen encounter with Bette,
Angie and Molly, followed by an introduction at said encounter.
IS THE NEXT UPDATE UP ALREADY????????
Tension filled scene in the office. Thanks for the post. Looking forward to the next chapter!
You write this story beautifully. Their emotions are so well described. Bette doesn’t understand her conflicting feelings . Randall will cause trouble and difficulty. Tina better break it off now while there’s still time before it gets so complicated that Tina will have a hard time extricating herself from the situation. Bette was kind w/her offer to Molly. Yes, pay it forward!
I am a silent reader but I had to tell u that this story is awesome. You are a very good writer. I love the tension between them. Please update soon.
Ok Tina’s employees really do have the worse timing. But this slow burn will be week worth the payoff once Bette and Tina can really be together. Also, it’s just so sweet how Bette has made Molly a part of her and Angie’s family. Thanks for the update, post soon please.
Another great chapter and I agree with the other readers tina needs to end this relationship with randall before the dinner with her parents I think she knows something is going on and I would hate to think he only wants to marry her for his career.And I hope shane is careful I think if tina get wind of her friendship with bette she may lose her job because I can see tina being jealous and im not to sure about tim I haven’t figured him out yet also love the relationship between molly bette and angie so pps..
Oh my god this chapter is explosive!!! I love that you gave us several scenarios here. Randall scares me, what will happen if Tina breaks up with him? I LOVE LOVE LOVE that scene in the office is soooo HOT!!!! and i cant wait for them to have their first time. Bette offering Molly to be part of the family was really touching. I imagine Tina meeting boo, oh phacey i cant believe i have to wait another week for a new update, but you know i always wait but please dont let us wait that long sweetie!
Another great chapter,wish you could post more offten can’t get enough of this story! Thanks so much for sharing :)
I just wanted to let you know that i am completely in love with this story which makes it super hard to have to wait a week for each post! I was also a bit angry when Tina allowed Randall to continue in her bed even though they hadn’t ever before. That being said, PPS! Thanks for posting!
It was written beautifully. Such a great post although you’re teasing us with Bette and Tina moment. Loved it, thanks for your effort for writting this beautiful story.
Thanks to all who left their comments and for sharing me your thoughts, super appreciate them (-; It’s already past 1 in the morning in my place right now and sleep is so elusive, uggh!. I was thinking of watching a movie but changed my mind so i’ll just go ahead and start writing another chapter and hopefully it’ll be ready by either Saturday or Sunday. Hope you ladies wait for that (-;
Thank you for sacrificing your rest to bring us pleasure. This great story is due to your unselfishness. Bravo!
Sorry to hear you can’t sleep, but jippie for us, a new chapter is on his way. Hope you have sweet dreams hen your finished eith the chapter. Thx for posting
Encouragement phasey!!!
We are many waiting for your creation.
I no longer count the times I’ve reread this chapter, previous, and your other stories.
(please forgives translation)
‘m with Jalex, Phacey! We miss you. Sure hope you will post this weekend!
I’ve been trying to post chapter 11 since this morning but it would always show incomplete text. I tried to re do it several times but it wouldnt work. I cant even bring up chapter 10 I’ll try again tom or when issue is finally fixed. Thanks for all your continous support
Loving it, especially the scene in the office. I agree with the gang Tina needs to end things with Randall.