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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 6
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“I feel different…”
“Of course you’ll feel different you have a new hair! But do you like it, hate it?”
She carefully looked at herself then ran her fingers thru her soft new hair “I don’t know”
“You don’t know? C’mon Tina be honest”
“I feel… lighter”
“Okay that’s good…” Catherine nodded “… at least now unlike me you don’t have to spend a long time brushing your hair from the ends to the roots”
She then touched her nape; she had enjoyed having a long hair for it felt smooth and soft and it gave her a sense of comfort and protection but there were times that she felt like a spider crawling behind her back and neck which could make her a little creeped out
Tina smiled and answered “I guess you’re right”
The two sisters smiled at each other “What about you Cathy aren’t you going to cut your hair? I can do it also to you if you like?”
Catherine scrunched her face “No I don’t think so, I want to but it won’t look good on me as much as it looks good on you”
Tina couldn’t believe what she just heard “How can you say that when were twins?”
“Tina even if we’re twins there’s still difference between us and besides you look better than me”
Never once did Tina think that she looked prettier than her twin sister. Catherine was just ten minutes younger than her, even before cutting her hair, Catherine had more beautiful, longer golden locks. Almost all the boys in the school had crushes on her that’s why they would always tease her which something she really hated not because she envied her sister but because she didn’t want anybody making a play on Catherine.
“And mind you only a few girls can really carry a short hair” Catherine said then patted her hair
An idea crossed Tina’s head; now that she looked like a boy maybe she could pretend that she was her sister’s bodyguard so the boys in the school would stop teasing once they saw Catherine walking around with another boy. The idea brought a smile on her face
“What are you smiling about?” Catherine asked her brows furrowed
“Nothing, I just like my new hair, thanks!”
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Okay so new chapter has been posted and i sure hope you’ll like it… please let me know what you think, thanks! And oh to cellphone48– I wasnt supposed to post a new chapter today but woman you never failed to crack me up so i hope this can make your weekend a little brighter(-;
omg please continue and soon x
My weekend is definetly brighter NOW!!!! Thanks for posting :)
I love it! Where’s the continuation? #Bitin!
Thanks Phacey, I aim to please! Well, I awoke at 4am to pee and no post. Back to sleep I went then awoke again at 6am to pee. Low and behold there was your post. So, I HAD to read! Got a meeting at 8am. Guess I’ll be sleepy but it was worth it. This chapter took a turn for us all. By that I mean the sister. She was a spoiled bitch in my eyes. I don’t understand how a parent can favor one child over the other. Yes, you made my weekend much brighter. If you post again this weekend it will be over the mood. I will even take one day during the week. If not, until next Saturday. Be Blessed!
I have been looking forward to your post all weekend and you just leave me hanging again. Two weeks in a row, what a tease. I was wondering about Tina’s back story when she brought the lake house. Bette noticed a change in her persona as they were leaving. I’m not sure if I feel sympathy toward Tina because she is buying Bette’s services. I know she feels that she is returning the favor but she called Bette away from her child in the middle of the night, I wonder how Bette explained her late night appointment to Molly. What if she did not have anyone to keep Angie?How would Bette have come to Tina? Tina still carries her childhood tragedy and needs to seek help resolving her issues instead of controlling Bette. Bette knows she has made a deal with the devil. I wonder who is really going to profit from this year? The fact that English is not your first language does not prevent you from developing a story that intrigues me and other readers of this site. Keep up the great work and post again soon.
Phacey, Phacey, Phacey,
Feel my gratitude being extended to you.
After a long hour work week and being up by 4:45 am and receiving
a notification that you updated, made the work hours seem insignificant.
Then BAM you leave me hanging. How mean Phacey (picture me pouting
& giving you the evil eye now & begging for an update like today, so this
can be continued).
Tina had a twin sister- I love the story change….adds depth to the story as the
mysteries of Tina is being revealed.
Here’s hoping after I get home from work @ 1:00am that I have a treat waiting for me.
Thank you Again for sharing your time, your creativity and strength. Yes strength for it takes a lot to put yourself out there and receive comments etc
on your writing.
You’re quite the tease!! ;)
Thanks for the update Phacey! I enjoyed learning a bit about Tina’s background. I feel there was a tragedy on that lake that still affects Tina today. I don’t hate her at all since they were kids and I don’t believe there was any malice in her showing Catherine the swans. I am upset with her parents for how they favored Catherine over Tina to the point she knew it. What kind of guilt must she have carried or still carries over the accident? I don’t blame Bette for referring to the arrangement with Tina since she is nervous. Soon she will love Tina but for now I can’t blame her nervousness. You know we are all anxiously awaiting your next update. Don’t tease us too long! :-)
Eish you are a tease thx for th post pps
What a tease!! Love this story and GMAR – please update us soon on both. Thank you for your great stories!
Great chapter, but what a tease!!! So now we see that Tina feels responsible for Catherine’s death (I assume) and because her parents favoured Catherine, she has tried to excel at everything to make her father proud of her. Bette is desperately fighting feelings she’s having for Tina by continuing to tell herself that it is all about the money. Can’t wait for your next update…ASAP please.
So good but so bad for leaving us hanging. Thanks, enjoyed it so much
i got too excited when i saw the new post and read it. now i wanna kick myself for doing so because ill be crazy thinking what happened to tina and her twin sister and what will happen after bette turned around. hahahaha.
please post soon.
Intriguing story line. Totally unexpected twist w/Tina’s twin sister. That type of trauma could rest on one’s mind forever. Lots of therapy needed! Please continue. Bette ‘s in a corner. She’ll have to come forward w/the “goods”, won’t she? No more cliffies!!
Thank you, phacey. I really blushed at the mention of my name.
you totally freshen up my weekend with this chapter. I have a cold, but I feel so much better that I read this.
It was a great chapter, I really liked it.
which turned out in connection with Tina’s twin sister explains a lot. It seems Tina has never really worked up about what happened in her childhood. I have a feeling, later, solution of this: Bette will be.
I have no brother, but the worst thing a parent can do if their one of child they love more. it’s just terrible.
I do not hate Tina, not even because of the contract, which she linked to Bette.
Bette was obviously nervous, which is understandable. but she react to Tina temptation. the money, can not be explained for this.
what a tease again! not nice! : P
If you’re posting a new chapter today or tomorrow, I’ll definitely be better :-)
Why why why you keep doing this to us, damn you killing me my friend. This is so good and please post more, thanks
You are an amazing writer and a big tease.Thank you for the update and PPS.
you are quite a tease and i love it! thank you for the update and please continue soon….
I can never hate Tina. What happened in the lake was nobody’s fault, those were kids and sometimes unexpected tragedy happens. So sad but the part when Tina and Catherine were struggling for survival was scary and i think Tina hold herself responsible for what happened thats why she always seek her parents approval. Great update as usual but again you left us hanging. Thanks my friend for sharing your talent and for keeping the tibette love in our hearts alive, your imagination never ceased to amaze me. and you deserved a big warm hug!
I can never hate Tina. What happened in the lake was nobodys fault those were kids and tragedies sometimes happen.So sad and the part when the twins were drowning was scary and i think Tina hold herself responsible for what happened.Great update as usual but you left us hanging again. Thanks my friend for sharing your talent and keeping the tibette love in our hearts alive.Your imagination never ceased to amaze me.
Thanks, thanks, thanks Phasey !!! : )
I could not write yesterday but I read very early the chapter.
I’m checking every day all week , you can not fail!
Shame is not a finished book to not stop until the end .
Your imagination goes a long way, waiting hurts.
I hope you follow Tina’s past counting, it´s strong, I agree that is a trauma for life.
Parents that prefer a child are hard to understand but it is quite common.
Bette has accepted the job, abused Tina’s patience with answers .
Good weekend for you and for all and do not stop!!!
I am enjoying this story a lot. Nice change having an alpha Tina. I hope Tina will have the courage to stand up to her parents and not try to live up to their expectations anymore. Looks like Bette is falling for Tina too.
Looks like you have left us hanging again. Thanks for the post!
Nice update! Thanks! Hoping Tina will be open and honest with Bette and share her feelings of guilt and unworthiness and that Bette will help Tina to be strong enough to stand up for herself against everyone. Bette can tell herself that this is just for money but she already knows how she is reacting to Tina’s touches and even just the sound of her voice, and that has nothing to do with money. Kind of hope that they take time to talk instead of rushing straight into sex but perhaps that ship has already left the shore. In any case I’m waiting for the next wonderful update.
Great comments everyone and please keep them coming. I guess its safe to say that most of you are waiting and anticipating for their ”first time” to happen but some like and much preferred the slowburn. Does anyone even noticed that they havent kissed yet? :-) Ok on a serious note, despite the storyline i hope you recognize the deeper message im trying to convey with this story… Btw sorry for the cliffy but im aiming that the next chapter is worth all the wait;-) Cheers!
I often wonder about the extent of imagination of human mind, that enables it to create such a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it Phacey.. Anticipating your next update..
I love this story! The tension is so great and you are teasing us. That was tragic what happened to Tina’s sister, but you really didn’t say if she died or not (did you?) I may have to go back and read again. Tina is very possessive of Bette when it comes to being around Shane but will any men at her company take an interest in Bette. A jealous Tina is so hot. I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for posting.
Oh! I noticed they haven’t kissed! I’m just waiting for the fireworks to go off when they do kiss. Especially when they make love and not fuck! That will come later! PPS and I know it ain’t Saturday yet:( Just wishing on a star!!
Wheeeewwww yes make it happen! Here we go…first let say they twist in the story with Tina sister was fantastic sounded like a lil small movie within a story awesome…I really hope Bette first time be okay I kinda feel bad for her seems like she feel shes being used and she is…but I lovvveee it lol