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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 6
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A few minutes later Tina’s face broke into an exciting smile “Cathy turn around and look”
Catherine did what she was told and her eyes grew wide in pure delight “Oh wow!”
The twins were now looking at the beautiful group of white swans swimming on the lake
“See I told you you’re gonna like it!” Tina said smiling then put her hand inside her pocket
“They’re so beautiful Tina!”
“I know here” Tina took her sister’s hand
Catherine reluctantly shifted her gaze from the white swans to her hand and saw some corns then she looked at Tina, puzzled
“Wanna feed them?”
Catherine smiled eagerly then nodded “Oh yes!”
“Well go on then”
Catherine threw some corn to the water and in just a few minutes the swans began swimming to their direction. Tina emptied her pockets and gave all corns to her sister who was having a great time feeding the white swans after about twenty fifteen minutes the swans started to go away
“Hey we are you going?”
“They’re going home Cathy and so do we”
“Uh uh nope I don’t want to go home yet and I want you to follow them I want to see where their home is”
“But Cathy I’ve never sailed that far away before and besides it’s getting late I’m sure mommy is looking for us now”
“Don’t worry about mom I’ll take care of her”
Tina shook her head “No I don’t think it’s a good idea”
Catherine gave her best puppy eye look “Oh please Tina I’m really grateful that you’ve brought me here but I really want to know where those swans live, I bet its beautiful too don’t you want to see it?”
“Of course I do but I still don’t think it’s a good idea”
“Come on we’ll be quick… please… please…”
Tina sighed “Okay fine but the moment we see the place we’ll head back home alright?”
“Deal!”
And so Tina started to paddle to follow the group of swan
“Hurry up we’ll gonna lose them, hurry!”
“Stop shouting I’m doing my best here”
“Damn hurry up I can’t see them anymore…” Catherine stood up and walked towards the front of the boat and her hands holding the edge
“Sit down Cathy”
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Okay so new chapter has been posted and i sure hope you’ll like it… please let me know what you think, thanks! And oh to cellphone48– I wasnt supposed to post a new chapter today but woman you never failed to crack me up so i hope this can make your weekend a little brighter(-;
omg please continue and soon x
My weekend is definetly brighter NOW!!!! Thanks for posting :)
I love it! Where’s the continuation? #Bitin!
Thanks Phacey, I aim to please! Well, I awoke at 4am to pee and no post. Back to sleep I went then awoke again at 6am to pee. Low and behold there was your post. So, I HAD to read! Got a meeting at 8am. Guess I’ll be sleepy but it was worth it. This chapter took a turn for us all. By that I mean the sister. She was a spoiled bitch in my eyes. I don’t understand how a parent can favor one child over the other. Yes, you made my weekend much brighter. If you post again this weekend it will be over the mood. I will even take one day during the week. If not, until next Saturday. Be Blessed!
I have been looking forward to your post all weekend and you just leave me hanging again. Two weeks in a row, what a tease. I was wondering about Tina’s back story when she brought the lake house. Bette noticed a change in her persona as they were leaving. I’m not sure if I feel sympathy toward Tina because she is buying Bette’s services. I know she feels that she is returning the favor but she called Bette away from her child in the middle of the night, I wonder how Bette explained her late night appointment to Molly. What if she did not have anyone to keep Angie?How would Bette have come to Tina? Tina still carries her childhood tragedy and needs to seek help resolving her issues instead of controlling Bette. Bette knows she has made a deal with the devil. I wonder who is really going to profit from this year? The fact that English is not your first language does not prevent you from developing a story that intrigues me and other readers of this site. Keep up the great work and post again soon.
Phacey, Phacey, Phacey,
Feel my gratitude being extended to you.
After a long hour work week and being up by 4:45 am and receiving
a notification that you updated, made the work hours seem insignificant.
Then BAM you leave me hanging. How mean Phacey (picture me pouting
& giving you the evil eye now & begging for an update like today, so this
can be continued).
Tina had a twin sister- I love the story change….adds depth to the story as the
mysteries of Tina is being revealed.
Here’s hoping after I get home from work @ 1:00am that I have a treat waiting for me.
Thank you Again for sharing your time, your creativity and strength. Yes strength for it takes a lot to put yourself out there and receive comments etc
on your writing.
You’re quite the tease!! ;)
Thanks for the update Phacey! I enjoyed learning a bit about Tina’s background. I feel there was a tragedy on that lake that still affects Tina today. I don’t hate her at all since they were kids and I don’t believe there was any malice in her showing Catherine the swans. I am upset with her parents for how they favored Catherine over Tina to the point she knew it. What kind of guilt must she have carried or still carries over the accident? I don’t blame Bette for referring to the arrangement with Tina since she is nervous. Soon she will love Tina but for now I can’t blame her nervousness. You know we are all anxiously awaiting your next update. Don’t tease us too long! :-)
Eish you are a tease thx for th post pps
What a tease!! Love this story and GMAR – please update us soon on both. Thank you for your great stories!
Great chapter, but what a tease!!! So now we see that Tina feels responsible for Catherine’s death (I assume) and because her parents favoured Catherine, she has tried to excel at everything to make her father proud of her. Bette is desperately fighting feelings she’s having for Tina by continuing to tell herself that it is all about the money. Can’t wait for your next update…ASAP please.
So good but so bad for leaving us hanging. Thanks, enjoyed it so much
i got too excited when i saw the new post and read it. now i wanna kick myself for doing so because ill be crazy thinking what happened to tina and her twin sister and what will happen after bette turned around. hahahaha.
please post soon.
Intriguing story line. Totally unexpected twist w/Tina’s twin sister. That type of trauma could rest on one’s mind forever. Lots of therapy needed! Please continue. Bette ‘s in a corner. She’ll have to come forward w/the “goods”, won’t she? No more cliffies!!
Thank you, phacey. I really blushed at the mention of my name.
you totally freshen up my weekend with this chapter. I have a cold, but I feel so much better that I read this.
It was a great chapter, I really liked it.
which turned out in connection with Tina’s twin sister explains a lot. It seems Tina has never really worked up about what happened in her childhood. I have a feeling, later, solution of this: Bette will be.
I have no brother, but the worst thing a parent can do if their one of child they love more. it’s just terrible.
I do not hate Tina, not even because of the contract, which she linked to Bette.
Bette was obviously nervous, which is understandable. but she react to Tina temptation. the money, can not be explained for this.
what a tease again! not nice! : P
If you’re posting a new chapter today or tomorrow, I’ll definitely be better :-)
Why why why you keep doing this to us, damn you killing me my friend. This is so good and please post more, thanks
You are an amazing writer and a big tease.Thank you for the update and PPS.
you are quite a tease and i love it! thank you for the update and please continue soon….
I can never hate Tina. What happened in the lake was nobody’s fault, those were kids and sometimes unexpected tragedy happens. So sad but the part when Tina and Catherine were struggling for survival was scary and i think Tina hold herself responsible for what happened thats why she always seek her parents approval. Great update as usual but again you left us hanging. Thanks my friend for sharing your talent and for keeping the tibette love in our hearts alive, your imagination never ceased to amaze me. and you deserved a big warm hug!
I can never hate Tina. What happened in the lake was nobodys fault those were kids and tragedies sometimes happen.So sad and the part when the twins were drowning was scary and i think Tina hold herself responsible for what happened.Great update as usual but you left us hanging again. Thanks my friend for sharing your talent and keeping the tibette love in our hearts alive.Your imagination never ceased to amaze me.
Thanks, thanks, thanks Phasey !!! : )
I could not write yesterday but I read very early the chapter.
I’m checking every day all week , you can not fail!
Shame is not a finished book to not stop until the end .
Your imagination goes a long way, waiting hurts.
I hope you follow Tina’s past counting, it´s strong, I agree that is a trauma for life.
Parents that prefer a child are hard to understand but it is quite common.
Bette has accepted the job, abused Tina’s patience with answers .
Good weekend for you and for all and do not stop!!!
I am enjoying this story a lot. Nice change having an alpha Tina. I hope Tina will have the courage to stand up to her parents and not try to live up to their expectations anymore. Looks like Bette is falling for Tina too.
Looks like you have left us hanging again. Thanks for the post!
Nice update! Thanks! Hoping Tina will be open and honest with Bette and share her feelings of guilt and unworthiness and that Bette will help Tina to be strong enough to stand up for herself against everyone. Bette can tell herself that this is just for money but she already knows how she is reacting to Tina’s touches and even just the sound of her voice, and that has nothing to do with money. Kind of hope that they take time to talk instead of rushing straight into sex but perhaps that ship has already left the shore. In any case I’m waiting for the next wonderful update.
Great comments everyone and please keep them coming. I guess its safe to say that most of you are waiting and anticipating for their ”first time” to happen but some like and much preferred the slowburn. Does anyone even noticed that they havent kissed yet? :-) Ok on a serious note, despite the storyline i hope you recognize the deeper message im trying to convey with this story… Btw sorry for the cliffy but im aiming that the next chapter is worth all the wait;-) Cheers!
I often wonder about the extent of imagination of human mind, that enables it to create such a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it Phacey.. Anticipating your next update..
I love this story! The tension is so great and you are teasing us. That was tragic what happened to Tina’s sister, but you really didn’t say if she died or not (did you?) I may have to go back and read again. Tina is very possessive of Bette when it comes to being around Shane but will any men at her company take an interest in Bette. A jealous Tina is so hot. I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for posting.
Oh! I noticed they haven’t kissed! I’m just waiting for the fireworks to go off when they do kiss. Especially when they make love and not fuck! That will come later! PPS and I know it ain’t Saturday yet:( Just wishing on a star!!
Wheeeewwww yes make it happen! Here we go…first let say they twist in the story with Tina sister was fantastic sounded like a lil small movie within a story awesome…I really hope Bette first time be okay I kinda feel bad for her seems like she feel shes being used and she is…but I lovvveee it lol