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“True.” I admitted quietly. Then we got into the comfortable silence that Shane is known for. She silently smoked her cigarette and sipped her beer. I played with the bottoms of my tattered jeans and stared into my cup of Guinness.
“Ive never fought with her.”
“Bette?”
“Yes. I mean shes older than me, and more put together than I am. But shes always treated me as an equal. It really hurts that I dont see eye to eye on this with her. I want to be on her side Shane, but shes making it impossible.”
“My advice is that if youre going to stay in the middle of this, than dont take sides. As for Bette, she may look like a mighty person, but she isnt afraid to party with the commoners.”
“Commoners? I would hardly call you guys that.”
“Alices name for us when shes referring to Bette. But Bette likes to party.”
“I used to think that was true. But when she used to come and visit, she would look all serious. Like the party had ended a long time ago.”
“Responsibility will do that to you.”
“Well fuck that.” I said holding up my cup in a salute.
“Just wait until you get some of that.”
“Like hell.”
“Well well see. Hows Dani?”
“Fine.”
“Good answer.”
“Why is that?”
“Because thats exactly what you should say if Alice ever ask you.” She answered getting up and going back into the house.
“Just bring the whole case back, Shane. Ill pay you back.”
“Yeah right. And how will you do that exactly?”
“Ill get Bette to give it to me.”
She was laughed and continued in her house. I have half a mind to get up and go get the case myself. But with the two full cups on beer in an hour that Ive had. I know that Id just end up falling on my ass or falling down these steps cracking my head open.
Just as Shane was coming out of the house, case in hand, Danas car pulled up.
“Hey Dane.” She said giving Dana tight hug.
“Hi Shane.” She smiled her toothy smile in return.
“Hiya gorgeous.” I said making room for her to take a seat on the stoop.
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Jude is a cute girl. But she’s more like Angie’s cousin, hoho.
Oh gosh, will they just get on with speaking or yelling or whatever they plan to do to the other. I must stop commenting I was just about to repeat myself from another story. Thanks for the post, enjoying the story.
Damn, Damn, Damn!!! How can two people who still love each other continue to hurt one another the way that these two do. Both of these women need to see that the others are only trying to help them. Thanks for the story and I sure hope that Bette and Tina can get their act together and at least sit down and talk (which will lead to the bedroom, oh your story, sorry).
Whoa, I thought that Tina was going to have the papers delivered? By showing up she may have just nudged Bette a little further away.
Truly enjoying this story! Thanks!
jus caught up on ur story and its awesome!! love jude aswell
I love your new character Jude. She brings the right amount of comedy into a very serious conversation. Plus how can you not like anyone who is trying to get B&T together? Great story!
Hey Go-Go13, I’m loving every word of your story… and Jude with Alice and operation snake bite… what a hoot. The comedic elements in this story are marvellous. Please keep it coming.
WOW!!! That was just GREAT!!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE
Well Go you sure know how to bring the drama. In real life this person would have known to not show up at the house without Angelica. Bette would have found it more difficult to slam the door in the face of her child. Stupid move Tina, real stupid but let’s just add that right along with the rest. Jude needs to stop but I guess that’s the drift of your story huh? It’s not all about Bette and Tina in this one it’s about us getting between them. Great read Go…..
Damn they need to talk !