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Lucked Up
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God, women have become so superficial and egocentric, it makes me sick. Shallowness is what completely turns me off and leaves me questioning myself whether I’m doing something wrong for I continue to attract such women like a magnet.
I plop down beside her and throw my arm across the backrest. I watch her facial features as she ends the conversation she’s having on her phone.
She turns to me with a haughtily raised chin, ”Alice or what’s her face let you go at last?”
I smile a nonchalant smile, ”It was hard for her, but yeah, she did.”
Nadia scoffs and stands up, looking down at my nude frame, ”I was just about to leave actually.”
I maintain a long pause, waiting if she would get it on, but she just keeps staring at me. I suppress a laugh and pretend to be upset by her announcement, ”Oh, that’s so sad. I was hoping we could have some more fun…” I let the sentence trail on purpose.
She swallows visibly, her facial features softening whereas she seems to be waiting to receive more begging from me.
”Well, some other time then,” I rise to my feet a little too eagerly, grinning like an innocent child at her. Her blue eyes harden all over again and she has this very shocked look on her face, which I find amusing and make strong attempts not to burst out laughing at.
For the next few minutes I guide a reluctant and clearly taken aback Nadia toward the front door and try to set her straight with as much tact as possible. ”Hopefully we’re going to be fine at work. I mean, we don’t have to mix business with pleasure, don’t you think so, babe?” I sweet-talk her, when, in fact, it should be her first priority to tell me that, because I’m not the one, who’s going to be fired in case my mother figures out the essence of our not so business affair.
”I guess,” she mumbles distractedly.
”I really had a nice time with you last night, Nadia, and I hope there’s more of it in store for us,” I woo her in my best honeyed voice, brushing a lock of fallen blonde hair from her eyes. ”I’ll see you on Monday, ’kay?”
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Oh my God Valerie, i just love this story!
Thank you for the amazing 16 pages, Bette is so funny and full of herself, she is almost annoying, but deep down i know there is a wonderful, vulnerable and loving heart that is waiting to come out for the right woman and she knows that she met her, our beloved Tina.
But don’t you dare to give me a freaking scare again with Bette being intimate with Nadia, Kelly or whoever that isn’t Tina. I truly hope i don’t get a nightmare tonight. Kidding, but please give me a warning so i can skip those parts.
I am truly happy you updated, thank you!
Haha, sorry for that! No more scares, promise! :)
Loved it, thanks
Wow Valerie, that was really good, from the beginning to the last word, I like so much how messy and cocky Bette is and how promising the fall would be, I will waiting for a new update for this and for your other fascinating story.
Thanks again
Wow! adoravel from beginning to end.
Bette Porter, vanity in person, has
his first meeting with Tina … I am very anxious
to know what will happen.
The entire constellation.
What a fun read! Well written and clever. Can’t wait for more. :-)
Great story! Catces from the very beginning. Have been waiting for this update. Please post soon!
I love it I hope you can post soon. I was happy to see sixteen pages also. Bette is so vain and aggravating. Lol she think luck but Tina just doesn’t want to get sued. She will see that she is not as liked on this date and that Tina is not one that she can just play with and dump. I can’t wait to see that next chapter lol.