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Lucky – Chapter 16
“I’ll just be in the other room waiting for you, OK T?” The brunette says with a hint of meaning behind that comment.
After finishing up Tina walks out in to the bedroom seeing Bette sitting on the armchair in the corner of the room.
The blonde instantly feels vulnerable seeing that the brunette had put on some dark grey jogging bottoms and a cream tank top. All though the blonde had spent the last hour or so naked, at least for the most part Bette was nude too. She guessed this was Bette’s plan to make the blonde feel even more exposed.
“Please could you fetch a pillow and bring it to me Tina” the brunette asks.
Tina walks slowly to the bed, and back towards Bette holding out the pillow, and taking a few steps back.
“Thank you Tina. Now do you know what is about to happen?” Bette says sounding very much in control.
“You’re, you’re” Tina swallows. She is suddenly embarrassed at the fact she is about to be spanked for the first time in her life. Her parents had never really believed in it when she was younger. “You’re going to punish me?” She asks questioningly.
“Yes Tina, and why am I going to punish you?” Bette says making sure Tina realizes she will only ever get punished if she steps out of line.
“Because I was cheeky” Tina smiles, relaxing for a moment.
Bette grins too. “Well yes, you’re allowed to be cheeky Tina, but it’s knowing when to be cheeky, and when to obey me”
Tina already feels like she’s squirming on the spot, loving this little game they were playing.
“Come here” Bette says placing the pillow on her lap.
“What are you gonna do?” Tina asks, a bit unsure of how the next part of the evening was going to play out.
“Forget about what I’m going to do for now. What I would like you to do, is come here and lay across my lap” the brunette says looking in to the blonde’s eyes.
The blonde takes a step forward. Bette notices Tina seems to be having an inner battle with herself.
“Tina, are you not comfortable with this?”
“It’s not that” Tina says looking over to the bed and back.
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(24 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
oh Tina wants to be bad…i say give her what she desires
I am laughing Tina is soo bad
Tina loves pushing Bette’s buttons. What’s next? Thanks for writing.
This is just great. THank you for this story.
I don’t care much for dominance. How is bette any better than Helena?
These are consenting adults. I wouldn’t personally consent to this but I am enjoying the story and I will continue to read it.
Some like some don’t,I’m on the like side of it… Realy enjoying the storie, it’s clear that Tina is ok with it so hey …. thanks for sharing looking forward to more :)
Excellent addition, and I eagerly await your next post. This is a very interesting chapter for character development, and I know it can be worrisome to post a scene some readers might find ‘scary’ or unsettling, but just try to be true to your intentions. The end of this chapter was a nice introdution into the next one, and I am hoping Tina pays dearly – then again, I’ve always loved a wicked payback scene. Thank you for posting this – it does take courage.
Tina knows what she is doing and Bette is the big softy.Great story.PPS
Hey Bayley, The shower scene was hot and wet. Bette and Tina are a real delight together.Their relationship is developing sweetly as they get to know each other’s needs and desire.It was good to have Bette pause to check out if Tina was happy to continue their game.A little spanking can be so arousing.I can’t wait to read how this all plays out.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
i am also enjoying this story… i like how tina pushes bette… i do feel sorry for tina… 20 slaps… dam that’s going to hurt… and leave a mark…lol…pps
I wouldn’t personally go there but love to read the story. people who do it like it and give their consent to it. I am enjoying the story and thinking how Tina can sit down after 20 slaps OUCH lol. PPVS
OMG Tina is so bad and naughty lol !