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Lucky – Chapter 16
Bette hazards a guess at what is wrong. “Tina did you expect me to handcuff you to the bed, and spank you like that?”
Tina nods and smiles.
“Aaah ha, I see. You would rather I force you than freely submitting to me?
Tina nods, and smiles as she realizes that was true, Bette had summed it up in one.
“T, being punished isn’t just about the pain of being spanked, and me dominating you, it’s all about trust, and giving yourself to me.” Bette says, looking at Tina for a moment “Hey come here, and just sit down” Bette pats her lap.
Tina walks forward and sits on Bette’s lap.
“It’s OK babe”, Bette says tucking a strand of hair behind Tina’s ear. “We can go at your pace, maybe I’m rushing things”
The blonde looks at Bette; feeling like her heart had just grown a bit more. She leans forward kissing Bette on the lips tenderly, and pulling back looking in to her eyes. “I love you, and I do trust you, more than I have ever trusted anyone” Tina put her hands either side of Bette’s head and gently pulled her in for another gentle kiss. The brunette happily lets Tina control the situation.
“You know you act all tough, but really you’re a big softy” Tina says, wanting to get them back in to a playful mood again.
Bette raises an eyebrow. “Is someone trying to be cheeky?”
“What are you gonna do about it, huh roomy?” Tina challenges.
Bette is now unsure of what to do. She wants Tina to willingly submit to her, she won’t force the blonde over her knee. Tina nods, as if urging the brunette on.
“Tina, I want you to lay across my lap”
The blonde grins, her fears and insecurities now replaced with her love for the understanding brunette. She slowly stands up, and faces the brunette who adjusts the pillow and slightly opens her legs. Tina lowers herself down, resting her upper body across Bette’s legs, with her legs dangling on the floor. Bette take’s Tina’s wrists which are under Tina’s head and grips them together with her free hand.
“OK, now I’m going to go to twenty OK?”
The blonde nods.
“And with each one I want you to count. Now I’m going to go easy on you as this is your first time”
“I can take it” The blonde jests, unaware of how being spanked twenty times in a row could feel.
“I suggest now is not a good time to be cocky” The brunette says gripping Tina’s wrists and starting to massage her buttocks with her other hand.
The blonde let’s out an overly animated breath, and then without warning Bette’s hand comes down for the first time, ‘SMACK’. Tina’s eyes widen, as the stinging sets in. She then smiles sneakily to herself, thinking it wasn’t that bad. Little did she know the brunette had barely begun…
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(24 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
oh Tina wants to be bad…i say give her what she desires
I am laughing Tina is soo bad
Tina loves pushing Bette’s buttons. What’s next? Thanks for writing.
This is just great. THank you for this story.
I don’t care much for dominance. How is bette any better than Helena?
These are consenting adults. I wouldn’t personally consent to this but I am enjoying the story and I will continue to read it.
Some like some don’t,I’m on the like side of it… Realy enjoying the storie, it’s clear that Tina is ok with it so hey …. thanks for sharing looking forward to more :)
Excellent addition, and I eagerly await your next post. This is a very interesting chapter for character development, and I know it can be worrisome to post a scene some readers might find ‘scary’ or unsettling, but just try to be true to your intentions. The end of this chapter was a nice introdution into the next one, and I am hoping Tina pays dearly – then again, I’ve always loved a wicked payback scene. Thank you for posting this – it does take courage.
Tina knows what she is doing and Bette is the big softy.Great story.PPS
Hey Bayley, The shower scene was hot and wet. Bette and Tina are a real delight together.Their relationship is developing sweetly as they get to know each other’s needs and desire.It was good to have Bette pause to check out if Tina was happy to continue their game.A little spanking can be so arousing.I can’t wait to read how this all plays out.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
i am also enjoying this story… i like how tina pushes bette… i do feel sorry for tina… 20 slaps… dam that’s going to hurt… and leave a mark…lol…pps
I wouldn’t personally go there but love to read the story. people who do it like it and give their consent to it. I am enjoying the story and thinking how Tina can sit down after 20 slaps OUCH lol. PPVS
OMG Tina is so bad and naughty lol !