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    Lucky – Chapter 35

    Story written on November 8, 2010 by Bayley.
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    They become familiar with their new surroundings.

    Tina wonders how far she should go, she couldn’t help the grin pulling at the side of her mouth as she sticks our her tongue and blows the fruit away.

    Bette just simply glares, as the fruit falls to the floor. “Oh, really?” Bette looks to the fruit and in a swift movement forces Tina to her knees. She couldn’t believe the cheeky bugger had just done that.

    The blonde places her hands to the floor, feeling a strong hand guiding her head down. “Bette please”

    “Bette, who is Bette? Is that your girlfriend sweetie?” she teases. They both knew she wouldn’t make the blonde eat from the floor, but nonetheless the insinuation had the desired effect.

    “Please” Tina pleads.

    “Hun, if you don’t want to eat from the floor, then I suggest you swallow next time.”

    Tina just nods and then feels herself pulled to a standing position. They walk through the rest of the house, Tina being pushed and stumbling, always with Bette on hand to make sure she were safe.

    Bette is impressed. The property has a quality to it, every detail had been thoroughly thought through. It wasn’t too dissimilar to her home, though this place had been designed for enjoyment – there were little clues scattered about. The master bedroom is no disappointment; the huge light airy room all existed to frame the huge four-poster bed. She smiles at her cruelty to not let Tina witness any of this. The blonde was being surprisingly compliant, allowing Bette to push and pull her around.

    As they walk along the hallway from the bedroom they finally reach a locked door, the door she already held a key to, the room in which her little slave would be spending a lot of time if she misbehaved. At this point Bette decides to remove the blindfold.

    Tina adjusts again to the light, looking up to see Bette unlocking a door. She quickly turns looking down the hallway, instantly warming to the light colors, and tasteful décor.

    Bette pushes the door open, grabbing Tina by the arm. “You see that sweetie?” She holds her, both facing down the hallway. “That’s called freedom, and if you’re a good girl and do as I say you’ll see it again soon” And with that Bette pulls her through the door, closing it and they climb the 10 steps to the top.

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    2. As always, great to see a chapter from you! This getaway seems like quite the paradise for these two. I’m certainly looking forward to the next installment. I’ll be sad to see the last chapter, so hope you will keep writing more! Thanks for posting!

    4. I’m really enjoying this story. When first started reading it I was not show that continue because of the subject matter but you are an incredible writer that makes everything that Bette and Tina do together cover in love for each other. Even moments when I cringed like when Bette made Tina crawled on the floor like a dog but in the end I had no problem because of the way Tina act responded on the situation. And I love it because Tina is the submissve but she never completely give control to Bette without Bette having to fight for it and the story is really, really funny, I find myself laugh through out the play.

    5. What a wonderful surprise that you’ve posted the next chapter. I really do like this story, and not just for the darker content – which I truly do enjoy – but also for the humour you show here. There is a sort of comedy playing between the two of them that just brings a special aspect to this story. I agree that there’s no rush in ending it either, as it is wonderfully entertaining. I do so love a cheeky Tina. Almost as much as I love seeing her punished for it, haha. Well, in any case, thank you for the wonderful story, and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. It sounds quite promising.

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