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    Lucky – Chapter 9

    Story written on April 27, 2010 by Bayley.
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    Detective Alice is on the case

    “Hey” Tina says pulling herself up to sit at the breakfast bar.

    “Hey you. Coffee?” Bette holds the cafetiere ready to pour.

    Tina nods, “Please”.

    “Feeling OK?” Bette asks while pouring.

    “Much better thanks” Tina says not getting eye contact, as she pours some cereal.

    Bette is not convinced as she looks worryingly across at the tired blonde. She decides that pushing the blonde would not do any good.

    “So final plans for the show today then?” Tina says trying to steer the conversation away from her. As she places the milk down she see’s Bette focusing on her wrist, and the bruises that have now turned purple. They both get eye contact for a moment, before Tina awkwardly looks away.

    “Yes. I mean the pieces are all in place, and most of the finer details have been resolved. I can’t wait for you to come and see my gallery.”
    “Your gallery?” Tina asks.

    ‘Shit, yes I have failed to mention that’ Bette thinks, remaining calm on the surface. “Yes”

    “I thought you were just in charge of events?” The young blonde asks scrunching her eyebrows.

    Bette is doing her best job at acting innocently. “Hmmm?” She pretends not to hear.

    “You run your own gallery?” Tina asks.

    “Yes, I told you that.”

    “No, Bette you didn’t”

    ‘No Tina I didn’t’ the gallery owner thinks, ‘Because then you would know that there is no way I needed to rent out one of my rooms.’ Bette clears her throat. “I’m sure I did”

    Tina is just shaking her head at the sneaky brunette, squinting her eyes.

    “And why are you looking at me like that Tina?” Bette asks trying to remain in control.

    Tina just raises an eyebrow. “Oh no reason” she says in a voice full of suspicion. ‘Hmmm, I wonder.’ Tina considers the thought that Bette is really so crazily kind that she would rent a room out to a complete stranger.

    “Right, well I have a busy day today.” Bette says standing

    Tina is still eyeing Bette suspiciously and shaking her head.

    “Look young lady, you can stop eyeing me so suspiciously. I can’t be blamed if you don’t pay attention.”

    “Whatever” Tina dismisses.

    “Excuse me?” Bette stops and looks back at the playful blonde, who decides not to respond. “That’s what I thought.”

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    6. love alice when she is playing detective… i have a feeling bette know helena and peggy… i bet they are big buyers at her galery… love this s tory… can’t wait for more…pps

    7. Oh boy, Alice was worth every bit of pain it takes to be her friend today. Next question, does Bette and Helena know each other and does Bette know Peggy and not Helena? Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Great update. PPS

    9. You just gotta love Alice. She can bring humor to any situation. I can’t wait to see what Bette and Alice plan for Helena. I wonder if they know her already…..

    12. Okay just caught up on this story, read all 9 chapters tonight. Although I am a Helena fan, in this story she is not becoming at all. It takes some good writing for me to not like her and kudos to you because I hope Bette will kick her butt in this one. Can’t wait to read next chapter.

    13. Love the way Bette with Tina, so wonderful and sweet. OMG Bette gonna kick some ass and that ass is Helena fucking Peabody, can’t wait to see it. Damn Alice is funny and just love her. Please post more, thanks!

    17. Hi Bayley, Now the real fun begins. I can’t wait to find out how Bette turns the tables on Helena and wins Tina’s heart forever.I think Helena needs some of her own medicine or a law suit.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. I shouldn’t be laughing because what Helena is doing is horrible but count on Alice to make any situation laughable. “Stalking Chicken to ObiWan, do you read me?” What the F* is that about?pmsl. Well, Bette answering that with “ObiWan here” doesn’t help pml. What kills me is when she said “Sir, yes sir! If you don’t hear from me again, tell Dana that I love her”. Have got belly ache for laughing to much.So now, does Bette know Peggy? I just hope Bette will take care of this, because it is sicking. PPVS

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