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    Lucky – Chapter 9

    Story written on April 27, 2010 by Bayley.
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    Detective Alice is on the case

    Tina smiles, looking down into her cereal bowl.

    The gallery owner looks over, slightly relieved. She then walks over to the young blonde stopping in front of her.

    “T. You have my cell number. If you need me at anytime of the day, I will be on the other end. OK?” The brunette says sincerely, looking into the hazel eyes before her.

    Tina’s eyes slightly swell, at the thought of what she may have to face on her own today. All she can do is nod.

    Bette stands there for a moment; she wants to lightly stroke the vulnerable girls cheek, to take her in her arms again like last night and tell her everything will be ok. She looks into the girls eyes and sees such a need, before she realizes what she is doing she has reached out and lightly touches her face, Tina sharply inhales, a tear falls down her cheek, which Bette rubs away with her thumb. “Oh to hell with it” the brunette steps around and the pulls the blonde in gently. Tina instantly opens up to her, needing this piece of strength so much. Tina wraps her arms around Bette, sinking her head into her chest. Bette’s arms tighten around her shoulders, trying to pass strength from herself into Tina as she rubs her back. For a few seconds they remain like this, neither wanting to move. Bette eventually, pulls back, kissing Tina on the head, and ruffling her hair to try and ease the intensity of the moment.

    “Hey!” Tina grins, trying to straighten up her hair.

    Bette grins picking up her bag and heads to the door, turning back “I’m on the other end of the phone, OK?”

    Tina nods again, “Thanks Bette.”

    “Anytime T” Bette says as she leaves the house.

    Bette arrives at The Planet to find Alice already there. Her plan to keep this between her and Alice evaporates when she sees Dana there too. As if Alice could ever keep anything from Dana anyway, Bette thinks. Once she explains the situation to them both, they all head off in their separate directions.

    Alice is made for moments like these. It’s when she really comes in to her own. Dana had to convince her not to wear a stereotypical “detective” outfit when she had left the house that morning. She had eventually agreed, knowing Bette probably wouldn’t find it amusing.

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    6. love alice when she is playing detective… i have a feeling bette know helena and peggy… i bet they are big buyers at her galery… love this s tory… can’t wait for more…pps

    7. Oh boy, Alice was worth every bit of pain it takes to be her friend today. Next question, does Bette and Helena know each other and does Bette know Peggy and not Helena? Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Great update. PPS

    9. You just gotta love Alice. She can bring humor to any situation. I can’t wait to see what Bette and Alice plan for Helena. I wonder if they know her already…..

    12. Okay just caught up on this story, read all 9 chapters tonight. Although I am a Helena fan, in this story she is not becoming at all. It takes some good writing for me to not like her and kudos to you because I hope Bette will kick her butt in this one. Can’t wait to read next chapter.

    13. Love the way Bette with Tina, so wonderful and sweet. OMG Bette gonna kick some ass and that ass is Helena fucking Peabody, can’t wait to see it. Damn Alice is funny and just love her. Please post more, thanks!

    17. Hi Bayley, Now the real fun begins. I can’t wait to find out how Bette turns the tables on Helena and wins Tina’s heart forever.I think Helena needs some of her own medicine or a law suit.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. I shouldn’t be laughing because what Helena is doing is horrible but count on Alice to make any situation laughable. “Stalking Chicken to ObiWan, do you read me?” What the F* is that about?pmsl. Well, Bette answering that with “ObiWan here” doesn’t help pml. What kills me is when she said “Sir, yes sir! If you don’t hear from me again, tell Dana that I love her”. Have got belly ache for laughing to much.So now, does Bette know Peggy? I just hope Bette will take care of this, because it is sicking. PPVS

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