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“Making My Way Home” – Chapter 9
“But it wasn’t like that Al. Gabrielle just showed up and I tried to tell her to leave, but before that happened, Shane showed up and Gabrielle had her arms around my waist.” Carmen didn’t want to tell them that Gabrielle also had her lips on her. The situation was already fucked up and she didn’t want to fuck it up any more.
Mel chimed in. “I remember her always talking about a beach or somewhere she would just go to clear her mind. Any ideas of where that might be?”
All 4 stood in thought before Carmen spoke, “Dockweiler. We use to go there a lot. There is parking at the top where you can stare down onto the beach that’s as far as we would go. and then you have to drive down a bit to get to the beach.”
“Well, let’s go. She could be there!” Mark said as he grabbed his keys and his wife’s hand.
“It’s by LAX!” Carmen shouted.
“We’ll follow you.”
Mel let the employees know that she had to leave and for the manager to lock up and make sure everything was okay. Mark road with his wife as Carmen rode in Alice’s car. All were very worried because it was getting dark. The 4 pulled up at the top of the beach and parked on the side of the street.
“I don’t see her car.” Mel says.
“Look! Down there!” Mark points down towards the parking area as he spots Shane’s Lincoln Mark LT in the parking lot. The 4 made their way down to the empty beach and parked near Shane’s truck. They all got out and looked out onto the empty beach as they all became even more worried and afraid at the possibilities that could happen.
The beach was empty. It was dark and no one was seen. No one was heard but the 4 of them. Mark squinted his eyes as her averted them towards the water. “Is that… Is that…”
“Shane?!” Mel said looking at the body lying in the water. They all make their way towards the lanky girl.
It was a ways to run. Shane was half way into the ocean. “Girls, stay here!” Mark shouted stopping the girls 5 feet from the water as he was about to run into the water.
“Shane?! Oh my God! She’s not moving. Mark hurry!” Mel screamed towards her husband as the 3 girls all comforted each other and looked on worried and scared.
TBC
*Caramel4Vanilla – That’s just a little speed bump of drama. There’s more to come in a couple chapters. LOL!
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(38 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
love it as usual :)
great update. I love it too. Can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen. PPS
I see I see…I want more drama so i cant wait. I hope Shanes okay to be honest she’s in a bad place but Carmen can help her pull through it…I hope see much more dramatic scenes…I cant believe Shay saw Shane sniffing that must have hurt the both of them i just cringed because theres nothing worse than someone watching you ill themselves thinking that nooone caresz about them. Great update lovely and long i must admit…the longer the better.I know you have been MIA for a while but you come back with a long update so its defintely worth the wait there. It seems we like Vanilla Lmao.PPVS cant wait to see whats gonna happen next.