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Masked Feelings CH 15
Dana – Just cut her loose…. you deserve so much better than her.
Alice – So am I suppose to be with you, Dana?
Dana – Yes, Al. Be with me.
Alice – I don’t see you cutting Lara loose. How many times have you been with her, Dana?
Dana – I guess I deserve that…. I let Lara stay because she was having work done on her apartment.
Alice – But its more than that, isn’t it. I know you’re sleeping with her, Dana. I saw you….. remember?
Dana – Can you just forget about that for a minute? Please…. I want to talk about us.
Alice – Forget it, Dana. I need to go, Gina’s waiting.
Dana knew if she wanted her chance with Alice, she had to cut Lara loose. It would not be easy. Dana knew Lara wouldn’t take it well. Lara made it clear….. she wanted her chance.
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Alice walks in to the livingroom.
Gina – Feeling better?
Alice – Yeah, Thanks.
Gina – Ready to go?
Alice – Where?
Gina – The police station, then you can go home with me.
Tina interrupted.
Tina – Alice is going with Bette and I. We decided that since we found her…. they might want to question us as well.
Gina – I guess that makes sense. I could still go though.
Alice – You’d only be sitting there, waiting for me to get done. I can tell you what happened later.
Gina – You can tell me when I take you home with me.
Tina countered again.
Tina – Gina, Have you really thought about what you’re saying? I know you’re looking out for Alice’s best interests but you can’t be there all the time. Alice was in bad shape when she got here. When she does start remembering, no one really knows how she’ll react. Someone will be with her 24/7 here. When she’s feeling more stable, she can go home with you.
Gina thought. Damn these people stick together. I’ll play along this time, don’t want to look like I don’t care.
Gina – Ok, fine. I will stop by later to see how it went.
Alice – I’ll tell you everything, I promise.
Alice gives Gina a hug. Dana heard the whole conversation and was grinning ear to ear.
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(56 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
These women are truly evil. It feels like Dana and Alice are puppets being controlled by Gina and Lara. Thank goodness for Tina!
I love it but i do hope that they find out the truth soon and please post soon as i will not be looking forward to the long wait for the one after thanks I love it
Hey I’m just a silent reader most of the time, but I wanted to say that I think your story is great with Lara being evil and all. :) Keep up the good work!
i see you are going back to your evil ways, lol. i can’t tell who’s worse – gina or lara. is det. landry a dirty cop? hope you have a merry xmas!
listen i dont want to kill you, but you are driving my insane!! I need you to post like NOW!! I want Lara hanging from a rope tortured and Gina shot!! I still love ya thought just keep the posts coming and dont forget us!!
I don’t think Alice could ever believe that Dana hurt her like that. Good update.
holy crap. Damn Gina is evil! Having a psychiatrist plant thoughts in Alice’s head about Dana being the attacker…jeeze what a plot twist. I LOVE IT! Lol Gosh, i love this story. You should be proud to have a loyal fan like me eh? ;) lol Happy holiday’s btw, to you and yours. I hope you keep your creative juices flowing and come back to shock and amaze me.
I dont believe you will get lost,Ifa writer comes up and I have forgotten the story, I just go to the writer name and review the last chapter. Gina and Lara are playing Dana and Alice like a violin. Hope the police picks up Dana before Tony does. thanks