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Masked Feelings CH 15
I know you care about me, Alice. You stopped her from going to the police station with you. Thank you, Tina. If it wasn’t for you, she might be at Gina’s. Then I’d never get to see Alice.
Tina – We should get going. Alice, you better get dressed.
Alice gave Gina a kiss good bye.
Dana snuck back into the bedroom.
Alice went to the bedroom to get dressed. She didn’t see Dana standing behind the door, until she closed it.
Alice – Dana… I thought you left.
Dana – I’ll never leave you, Alice. (smirking) Now that I know you care about me….
Alice – You need to go.
Dana – And you need to tell me how you really feel about me.
Alice – Go, Dana.
Dana – Ok. I’ll go but this doesn’t change anything. I’m not giving up til you admit to your feelings…
Dana hugs Alice and whispers in her ear, “I’ll be thinking of you and I know you’ll be thinking of me, Alice.” She gives Alice a kiss on the cheek, “Bye, Al.”
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The Police Station
Det. Landry – Ms. Pieszecki?
Alice stood up, walking to the detective’s door. Extending his hand, he shook Alice’s hand.
Det. Landry – I’m Detective Landry. I’ve been assigned to your case. Please have a seat.
Alice – Can my friends sit in on this?
Pointing to Bette and Tina.
Det. Landry – Afraid not, I need to question you alone. Your friends will be questioned as well. I don’t want anyone’s interview to be influenced by having another witness in the room. Understand?
Alice – I guess, but they weren’t there when it happened. They showed up after.
Det. Landry – I still have to go by the book. …. Now lets get started.
Alice – I really don’t remember anything. I don’t know what help I’ll be.
Det. Landry – Lets start by asking you a few simple questions. I’m guessing the incident happened in your apartment. I looked around the place and didn’t find anything out of the ordinary. No sign of forced entry. Do you keep all your doors and windows licked?
Alice – Of course, I do… when I’m not there.
Det Landry – What can you tell me about that day?
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(56 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
These women are truly evil. It feels like Dana and Alice are puppets being controlled by Gina and Lara. Thank goodness for Tina!
I love it but i do hope that they find out the truth soon and please post soon as i will not be looking forward to the long wait for the one after thanks I love it
Hey I’m just a silent reader most of the time, but I wanted to say that I think your story is great with Lara being evil and all. :) Keep up the good work!
i see you are going back to your evil ways, lol. i can’t tell who’s worse – gina or lara. is det. landry a dirty cop? hope you have a merry xmas!
listen i dont want to kill you, but you are driving my insane!! I need you to post like NOW!! I want Lara hanging from a rope tortured and Gina shot!! I still love ya thought just keep the posts coming and dont forget us!!
I don’t think Alice could ever believe that Dana hurt her like that. Good update.
holy crap. Damn Gina is evil! Having a psychiatrist plant thoughts in Alice’s head about Dana being the attacker…jeeze what a plot twist. I LOVE IT! Lol Gosh, i love this story. You should be proud to have a loyal fan like me eh? ;) lol Happy holiday’s btw, to you and yours. I hope you keep your creative juices flowing and come back to shock and amaze me.
I dont believe you will get lost,Ifa writer comes up and I have forgotten the story, I just go to the writer name and review the last chapter. Gina and Lara are playing Dana and Alice like a violin. Hope the police picks up Dana before Tony does. thanks