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Masked Feelings Ch 20, What now….
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Dana – You’re right. I already made up my mind. What about you? What are you in for?
Roxy – Murder, and yes, I’m guilty.
Dana – Oh shit!
Roxy – I killed the bastard who killed my baby sister. Sometimes you can’t count on the system for justice. Everyone has their reasons for doing what they think is right. My motivation was love…… and for that I’ll never be sorry for what I did.
Dana reflected on what Roxy said….. not realizing later what it just might mean to her.
Roxy – Hey, you better get some sleep. We both have a long day tomorrow. If we ever get locked up together again, I’ll tell you my story.
Dana – Yeah…. I’m sure it’s an interesting one. Well, goodnight, Roxy.
Roxy – Goodnight, Dana.
About 4AM
Alice giving up on trying to sleep. Couldn’t stand not seeing her for one more moment. She parked a couple blocks from the police station. Sneaking in as part of the janitorial crew, she changed clothes to blend in. She made her way into jail cell section. Everyone was asleep. She found Dana at the far end……….with a cell mate of course. Alice stood there, for a few minutes just looking at her. That wasn’t enough, she wanted to touch her. She was taking a big risk, but she couldn’t help herself. She bent down and reached between the bars. Running her hand through her hair, brushing the hair from her face. Her hand felt wet. She looked at it and saw the blood. Dana had taken a blow to her head. Speaking very softly she said, “God, Dana…… what have I done. Saying I’m sorry is never going to be enough.” Alice took a rag and got it wet. Softly, she placed it on her head. Dana started to stir but that was because she was having a dream. “Alice….. please come back to me.” The words filled her heart and gave her hope. She needed to hear that she was still in Dana’s heart, even though she was only speaking from her dream. That would get Alice through, til they could finally be together. She wanted to stay but it was time to follow through with her plan. Alice touched Dana’s face once more and left. Roxy was awake watching the touching display. She didn’t have to guess who it was, she knew it had to be Alice. Hearing your words, I can tell you love her, too. I want to wake Dana to tell her you were here but you must have your reasons for doing what your doing. I understand that…………… I hope it works out, what ever you have planned. Good luck to the both of you.
TBC Did it pull at your heart strings? Such a connection those two have. Comment, please. Keep me going and on track…. I’m begging you.
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It seems that Alice has herself in a bit of a pickle. I like tough Dana though. Hopefully Alice gets that tape and quickly. If Dana does kill Lara, please let Danish run off to Canada or some unknown desert Island.lol Good work!
Would I stop reading such a wonderful danish fic? Of course not! Would I read before I went to sleep, then forget to come back and comment? Now that’s another story… I liked Roxy’s entrance into the story. Now I wonder what Alice will do next.
Hiya…this is the “new blood”. I just have to leave a comment. YOU R awesome, please keep my gals together even if it’s in their hearts. 3rd S. is already a disapointment. I have to get my Danish fix somewhere…lol Peace
Hhahah awsome chapter, maybe since Roxy knows ALice is up to something, before Dana leaves she can put in some ‘food for thought’ for Dana on the whole marrying Lara thing, this was great, hope you post soon!!
Sorry I’ve been missing for the past few chapters but finally caught up. You’re upping the stakes, I like! Now when is Dana going to kick some ass? Let Alice take care of Gina and give Lara to Dana hee
You totaly pulled at my heart strings. I love dana and alice so much thank you for this post please post again soon. KISSES
Your story is so wonderful. I hope that Alice’s plan comes through soon. I really wanna see Dana kick Lara’s ass. Update ASAP!!!!
Hey babe!Wow, I keep missing your updates, since when did I get a life eh? Anyways, I love them both. I love Dana’s new friend Roxy. I couldn’t tell you some of the thoughts I had going through my brain when she’s like “looks like you need to learn some manners.” lol Tina and Bette rock the house man, something tells me they are going to be a big help to Alice. I really hate Lara and Gina, but that’s no surprise right? Where is Shane btw? I hope she kicks some ass too. Aw I love this lovely story. And I love that you are back and updating regularly, I guess I’m just going to have to remember to check regularly. But no worries, you always keep me coming back. It will be so interesting to see how everything turns out. I hope you never stop writing too. There are some authors who write one great fic and then never come back. You can’t leave me! :) Eager for the next update. Promise to check sooner.
Ps. I’m glad you value my comments, that makes me feel all fuzzy. lol You rock my world
I loved the update! That was so much better than Alice just stopping by to see Dana, and I actually like the “tough prison bitch” qualities in Dana. I’m dying to find out Al’s plan of attack…update SOON!!!
brteyes, you are killing me…you are just killing me. i know you’re setting everything up for that glorious hellish moment, but i need the action NOW. PLEEEEAAAAASSSE…i am squirming in my seat as i’m typing this. btw, i really like roxy. will she be helping the two lovebirds out?
Go Roxy, at least she also has some sense. Seriously, this plan has to start running, we need some ass kicking and we need Danish again.
Love it! Looks like the story is going to get soo much better! I hope Gina & Lara get what they deserve and leave the Danish alone :o)
I still love this story very much!…that was a great update. I really hope they get back together!
I just hope that this works out how alice wants it to please post soon I love it