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Masked Feelings Ch 24 Take control….
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Dana – Funny.
Roxy – Lets talk about what you’re going to say to her tomorrow, before she gets out. By the way, I haven’t forgotten about your reaction to the photo album. But I’ll save that discussion for another time.
Dana sighs.
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Alice was in rare form. She was well on her way to being drunk. The occasional man would comeover and try to hit on her. Many of them, buying her drinks. She was feeling no pain now, but she was going to have one hell of a hangover in the morning.
The last man that came over refused to leave her alone. He kept trying to put his arm around her and putting his hand on her leg.
Alice – I’m not interested, loser. Find someone drunker than me. Leave me alone!
” You heard the lady, SCRAM.”
He grabs the man by the back of his coat and forcibly removes him from the booth.
“Bother the lady again and you’ll really regret it.”
Now turning his attention to Alice….
“You won’t have to worry about him again.”
Alice – Hey…… I know you.
“Can I buy you a drink, beautiful?” he said, flashing that smile, and those dimples.
Yes…. Tony was back and was looking to have a good time….
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Dana thought she was pretty clear on what she was going to say to Lara. The mood had lightened considerably since Dana had given Lara what she wanted….. the words. She meant them, but not the way Lara interpreted them. Truth be told…. only one person truly lit up her world that way….. Alice. While Lara was busy on the phone with her mother, Dana opened up her hope chest. She was digging for something. Finally finding the velvet box. It was Alice’s birthday tomorrow and Dana was feeling especially vulerable since she saw the photo album out. The box contained a necklace, matching the earrings she had already given her. Dana knew that she had to return it. She couldn’t give it to her now. This was a gift you gave to your lover. Alice wasn’t even her friend anymore. Lara would never receive it cause she would never be the great love of her life. You only have one….. and her’s was gone….
Dana closed the chest and went back out to be with her friend, Roxy and her wife, Lara. Dana was beginning to feel the effects of the pill kicking in. With the couple glasses of wine she had earlier, she knew she would be out like a light.
Lara was still on the phone with her mother. Roxy was reading a magazine.
Dana – Hey, I’m feeling the pill…. I’m going to bed.
Roxy – You should sleep good. You look tired enough. By the time she gets off the phone I don’t think you’ll have to worry.
Dana – Thanks for being here. I know the tension was a bit much.
Roxy – You need me. I can deal with a little tension. Remember, you have to have that talk with her. Don’t put it off.
Dana – I won’t. Good night, Roxy.
Roxy – Good night, Dana. Sweet dreams….
TBC – I know…. you want action. It will come….. Do you like the all feeling Dana? The poor girl is just a bundle of confused feelings. Keep the comments coming. Tell me what you think…..
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Hiya…as always great suspense. I waiting for the action…he,he…I do like the all feeling Dana ’cause she’s not doing so in S3. I can’t wait for the next chap. Your AWESome dude…Peace
Lara is such a whore!! Yes i would love to kill her!! I cannot believe how this story totally brings out the homocidal maniac in me. I love Roxy I really hope she starts to help the situation and I think Dana should follow her heart not her twat. She should give Alice the necklace and try to talk to her. Keep writing as much as you torture me i am sure you will please me as well…….yummy
great story keep em commin alice needs to hurry up and find the tape and get dana back x
Another great update! I’m glad that you’re addicted to writing this story because I’m addicted to reading it. I do love Roxy she is great! Poor Dana she is a wreck! I also think that Dana should go to see Alice and attempt to give back the necklace…Can’t wait for the update!
Gret update. I’m glad Roxy was there to give wisdom to Dana. I hope Dana tells Lara off. Tony…..uhhh! I hope Alice doesn’t fall for him. It would be really bad.
Ok, I admit it … you were right about Dana. I still say the poor girl is seriously lacking in the self-control department, but hey … she’s Dana!
hey, very interesting development. really like it… bloody hate lara though :P Please for the love of god let Alice & Dana meet up soonish… it’s killing me!
yeah all the bad does make the good seem better, I do like the all feeling dana its about time she admits she loves alice cause i couldnt tell if she strill did..i cant believe she gave up on her though.
ooh, i just had a thought. dana w/ lara is like the dana that was in the closet. she’s miserable and trapped! brteyes – let her out honey; let her out.
I like this update…Dana is getting more in touch with her real feelings…thanks to Roxy!
I love it and I can’t wait to see what lara does next and what will alice do and will dana have that talk with lara please post soon can’t wait this is great
Are you kidding me? How could I not love you when it’s over? I need you silly! Don’t worry about the email, I hope you got it though. It took me forever to write it. I had a lot to say but I didn’t expect you to sit there and read a novel. lol Great update baby, I think things are starting to turn around. I really hope Tony doesn’t take advantage of Alice, I’d die. I agree with one of the other commenters, it’s nice to see Dana feeling SOMETHING, as she feels so little in S3, or at least that’s all we can assume. Gah, you should’ve written S3. I think it would’ve kept people happy, :) I say you and all the other fabulous writers on this site, ban together and write S4. That would be a season to remember. =P Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon. I can’t wait for the next update. And don’t worry, something tells me you’ll always be able to tug at my heartstrings sweetie. Until next time,
hmmm…what to say…well, good thing roxy was there. thanks to that sleeping pill, lara won’t be gettin any lol. whatever dana’s speech is going to be, it’s going to make lara flip out. dana should give alice that necklace. it could give her back some hope. now what is tony planning to do? ok, a couple of chapters ago you gave me a little bit of action. i admit that i went crazy waiting for more. i’ve calmed down, so you can continue writing at any pace you want. btw, i’m starting to like dana again. she’s slowly coming to her senses. what happened to tina, private eye?