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Masked Feelings Ch 24 Take control….
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Alice’s apartment was an absolute disaster, no worse off then Alice’s heart though. Hearing the news of Dana’s marriage was so unexpected and it left her feeling helpless. Lara was the root of all that was evil…. choking out everything that was good and decent. Leaving in her wake, a disaster everywhere she went.
Dana was a victim in all this as much as Alice was. Alice couldn’t help but be angry at Dana anyways. Alice was about to experience her worst setback since her attack because she hurt so bad.
Bette holding her was little comfort to her. Those weren’t the arms she wanted holding her….
Once Alice stopped crying, she pulled away from Bette.
Bette – What happened here, Alice?
Alice – I don’t know. When I walked in…. well, look at the place.
Bette – Why would someone trash your place? Is anything missing?
Alice – No… I don’t think so. The police probably left the door unlocked after they searched the place, cause it wasn’t a break in. I’m sure it was a bunch of kids…. I’ll call my insurance agent and file a claim.
Bette – You better call the police.
Alice – I will, but right now I just want to clean up the mess.
Bette – I don’t think you should clean it up. The police might want to look around first.
Alice – I doubt they are going to find anything.
Alice starts to pick up.
Alice – Just go Bette. I can do this on my own.
Bette – You don’t have to do this on your own. I can help.
Alice – I don’t want your help.
Bette – You may not want my help but its obvious you need it. Its alright to ask for help or to have someone to lean on. You keep pushing your friends away and we might not be there one day when you need us.
Alice – Yeah, like you were there for me the other day. Defending Dana instead of believing me. I already know where my so called friends stand. I’m not alone, I have Gina.
Bette – She’s just there for you cause she wants you. So desperate for you to love her back, Alice. She’s just like Lara with Dana, a predator. Open your fucking eyes!
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Hiya…as always great suspense. I waiting for the action…he,he…I do like the all feeling Dana ’cause she’s not doing so in S3. I can’t wait for the next chap. Your AWESome dude…Peace
Lara is such a whore!! Yes i would love to kill her!! I cannot believe how this story totally brings out the homocidal maniac in me. I love Roxy I really hope she starts to help the situation and I think Dana should follow her heart not her twat. She should give Alice the necklace and try to talk to her. Keep writing as much as you torture me i am sure you will please me as well…….yummy
great story keep em commin alice needs to hurry up and find the tape and get dana back x
Another great update! I’m glad that you’re addicted to writing this story because I’m addicted to reading it. I do love Roxy she is great! Poor Dana she is a wreck! I also think that Dana should go to see Alice and attempt to give back the necklace…Can’t wait for the update!
Gret update. I’m glad Roxy was there to give wisdom to Dana. I hope Dana tells Lara off. Tony…..uhhh! I hope Alice doesn’t fall for him. It would be really bad.
Ok, I admit it … you were right about Dana. I still say the poor girl is seriously lacking in the self-control department, but hey … she’s Dana!
hey, very interesting development. really like it… bloody hate lara though :P Please for the love of god let Alice & Dana meet up soonish… it’s killing me!
yeah all the bad does make the good seem better, I do like the all feeling dana its about time she admits she loves alice cause i couldnt tell if she strill did..i cant believe she gave up on her though.
ooh, i just had a thought. dana w/ lara is like the dana that was in the closet. she’s miserable and trapped! brteyes – let her out honey; let her out.
I like this update…Dana is getting more in touch with her real feelings…thanks to Roxy!
I love it and I can’t wait to see what lara does next and what will alice do and will dana have that talk with lara please post soon can’t wait this is great
Are you kidding me? How could I not love you when it’s over? I need you silly! Don’t worry about the email, I hope you got it though. It took me forever to write it. I had a lot to say but I didn’t expect you to sit there and read a novel. lol Great update baby, I think things are starting to turn around. I really hope Tony doesn’t take advantage of Alice, I’d die. I agree with one of the other commenters, it’s nice to see Dana feeling SOMETHING, as she feels so little in S3, or at least that’s all we can assume. Gah, you should’ve written S3. I think it would’ve kept people happy, :) I say you and all the other fabulous writers on this site, ban together and write S4. That would be a season to remember. =P Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon. I can’t wait for the next update. And don’t worry, something tells me you’ll always be able to tug at my heartstrings sweetie. Until next time,
hmmm…what to say…well, good thing roxy was there. thanks to that sleeping pill, lara won’t be gettin any lol. whatever dana’s speech is going to be, it’s going to make lara flip out. dana should give alice that necklace. it could give her back some hope. now what is tony planning to do? ok, a couple of chapters ago you gave me a little bit of action. i admit that i went crazy waiting for more. i’ve calmed down, so you can continue writing at any pace you want. btw, i’m starting to like dana again. she’s slowly coming to her senses. what happened to tina, private eye?