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Masked Feelings CH 47 A Night at Lara’s Sister’s house
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Bette – But there is something that can’t be over looked, Tina… and thats Roxy. She seems to have a strange hold over Alice and that won’t magically disappear. You really think Roxy is going to quit now that she’s gotten a taste of what she wants? Sometimes love isn’t enough.
Tina – Well it’s all they have right now and I’m praying that it’s enough.
Sara had shown Dana the guest room. They hadn’t talked much on the trip home. Dana was finally feeling the effects of the alcohol and she was winding down. Her eye lids grew heavy and she was close to passing out… but more of pure mental exhaustion then the alcohol she consumed.
Dana – You don’t have to put me up in here. I can always sleep on the couch.
Sara – Don’t be ridiculous, you’ll be more comfortable in here. Besides, we’re all early risers here.
Dana – We?
Sara – Yeah , I guess we never talked about that. I’m married and have two kids.
Dana – No kidding… thats great.
Sara – Yeah, thats why I’m putting you up in here… the kids get a little wound up in the mornings and I don’t want them to wake you.
Dana – I usually get up early myself, but thats gone out the window lately because of my injury. I’ve gotten really lazy since I’ve been forced to behave myself.
Sara – I don’t see you as being lazy, Dana and your body does need the time to heal.
Dana – Not anymore, I can do as I please now. And I plan to.
Sara – Are you talking about training?
Dana – Yeah… and other things.
Dana thought about what might have happened if that girl’s boyfriend hadn’t showed up…. and since when did she pick someone up and not remember her name. She shrugged her shoulders and thought it was best not to get to attached to anyone cause they were bound to disappoint you…. like Alice.
Sara – Don’t push yourself too hard… you have to ease back into these things.
Dana – Huh?
Sara – Promise to take it slow and not rush into anything… I’d hate to see you get hurt.
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I’m glad that we learned a little more about Lara, and that Sara didn’t hook up with Dana. She needs a friend right now.
Hey, nice chapter – all the drama is sure going full steam ahead… but it would be really, really good if Al & Dana could get back together soonish. Real good!
YAY :hugs Br: this was such a great chap ty so much. well consider me your cheerleader so there will be no giving up! but i know you wouldnt since what u got going here is way to awesome to give up. I must admit roxy is at the bottom of the list BUT its coool to see and try to understand about Roxy also why she has such a powerful wave over Alice! what a way to end! im on the edge of my seat here will Kristin say the magic words and bring dana home to Alice? i hope sooooo :) :waves poms poms: Brteyes brteyes she’s our gal! lol thats as far as my cheerleading skills go..
lol omg, you really do crack me up you know that? You give me all of this crap about how the chapter isn’t that great and how I’m going to be biased and here I am gasping and laughing my ass off, first off let me say before I forget, Alice’s comment to Tina “Do you think I would look like this if I did?” hilarious. And the fucking like a couple of rabbits…priceless. You threw me for a loop though, so Lara’s brother was in love with her? Nice angle, it makes for some incest that I’m hoping I don’t have to read but still nice angle. I would have never thought of it but then again I am not the greatness that is you. Perfect one would say, a vixen in the eyes of some. :) I loved the chapter, and to think some selfish bastard almost kept us from the priviledge of reading it. That person should be ashamed, trying to distract you from your work. You toil over a hot keyboard all day on your day off, she’s just uncaring only looking for instant gratification. But not me…not ClosetDana no no :) Great chapter, I can’t wait till next week….it’s going to be juicy I just know it.
the drama continues to unfold, i dig it. sara isn’t half bad which is a total relief. i’m truly enjoying how sinister lara is. it plays well with her wholesome looks. i can’t wait to read what comes next.
Really love the in-depth angle we’re getting on all the characters… When Alice confessed to Dana I wasn’t sure how the story was going to go on, but even though Danish has a broken heart I’m still enjoying reading because we’re getting to understand the decisions and consequences of each character’s actions and it’s really great! Looking forward to the twists in the next couple chapters, can’t wait to read more! :)
god I love this story and I can’t wait to see wha will happen next pleas post soon great update
Nice to have some background on Lara, but I’m so frustrated…I still don’t have the answers to my questions (*pouts like a small child who didn’t get an ice cream*)! :P I was jumping for joy when I read Sara wouldn’t be jumping Dana’s bones. :D Luckily Sara had a calming effect on Dana. Now it’s all up to Kirsten to talk some sense into her. Alice deserves a second chance. Go Kirsten! :) So, Sara has pyscho twins in her family. Something tells me that Dana is going to run into him (again) and maybe even Lara…. (*humming the theme from Psycho right now*) I think Alice could use some professional help, she has had a lot to deal with (some of it was really disturbing!). Hopefully it can help her to deal with it and live her normal daily life again. I don’t think that they’re both ready to have a talk yet. As much as I love them be together (as) soon (as possible), Dana still needs to deal with the anger and pain that is still left inside of her. I’ll be buckling up tight for the next chapter ’cause its going the one bumpy ride…and I don’t even like being in a rollercoasters…but I’ll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Here it goes: I thought it was great. Lara’s brother is a freaky one, I’ll bet good money that he or even Lara are bound to resurface at some point, probably when things are just about to seem like they are getting better. Dana and Alice apart is a heart breaker, it’s really so sad to see. I hope there is some way to bring them back together, some way that makes me go AWWW the same way you do. It’ll happen, I know it will, because I know you and you are a sucker for happy endings just like me, even if you’d never admit it. I seem to hate Lara more and more, you know I always did, even way back when in the first 10 chapters. This was a really great update and I’ll be waiting patiently for the next, no matter when it is. I think we both understand what its like to go through those dry spells. Hopefully we’ll both get something going. I’m sorry that bad moods make things tense, but stressing is not something you need to do. Just know that I’m still the same and happy about you. Love you.