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Masked Feelings CH 78 Unsettled
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Alice – What the fuck, Dana. What exactly do you want me to do?
Dana – I want you to tell Roxy to take a fucking hike.
Alice – I’ll talk to her…. ok?
Dana – You’ll be too nice about it. You’re too soft with her as it is… or maybe that’s how you want it.
Alice – What?!
Dana – Come on… you know you love her attention or this wouldn’t be happening now. What I can’t figure out is when she became more important than me.
Alice turned and walked towards the door. Dana was hot on her heels, grabbing her by the arm and pulling her back. Alice wouldn’t even look at her. She stepped in front of Alice, finally seeing the tears in her eyes. Dana had no words. She didn’t know what to do…. so she let go of her arm and let her walk out. Dana heard the front door close. It sounded so final…. the silence resounded in her ears.
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That night…..
Dana figured that Alice would be gone for a few hours, but she wasn’t expecting this. She would leave after having fights, but she had always come back. It was getting late and had already surpassed the normal amount of time that she’d be gone. Dana hadn’t heard from her the entire day. She had Alice’s cell phone in her hand when she walked out, so she couldn’t call her. There was no way to know where she could’ve gone. It was time to swallow her pride and call her friends. Maybe Alice was with one of them.
She called Bette and Tina at home, but they weren’t there. Next, she called Bette on her cell phone and Tina picked up.
Tina – Hey Dana.
Dana – Hey….
Tina – Are you still there?
Dana – Yeah.
Tina – Good, I thought I lost you. We’re in the car and we could lose reception at anytime.
Dana – Where are you going?
Tina – Out of town for the weekend.
Dana – Oh… then I won’t bother you.
Tina – What’s up, Dana?
Dana – Have you heard from Alice today?
Tina – Not for several days actually, but you can always check with Shane. Did something happen?
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Hey hun, I just wanted you to know that my comment last time didn’t in any reflect on your skill as a writer. Hell, I know plenty of people who’ve stayed in abusive relationships (not that I’m saying this one is…well, maybe borderline emotionally) and you’re writing it well. And over the top isn’t meant to be an insult, you’d be a great drama writer for TV. All your chapters are very episodic, which is totally a compliment. Anyway, love this one and happy almost two years writing!
Great chapter!! All I can say is where the hell is Alice? Dana must have really struck a nerve!! I can’t say I blame her though because Alice didn’t deny anything she said. I hope she comes back so they can kiss and make up. Can’t wait for the halloween/anniversary edition.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, Roxy got bitten by a dog. I know for a fact that it hurts like hell. This chapter was full of drama and I love drama:-)) But I’m not a drama queen, lol. Alice’s exit was very dramatic when I stay on topic here. But it was the right decision to do so and I’m glad she followed through instead of having another long and exhausting conversation with Dana. If I were her I would act the same way. Leaving was exactly the best thing to do although it left Dana caught off guard, sad and speechless. That’s actually what I call a silent treatment. Where did Alice go though? To a striptease club to cheer herself up a bit? Guess, it wouldn’t be a great idea. Maybe she’s in one of Oprah Winfrey’s talk shows? Did she go to a psychologist to analyze her relationship with Dana? Or what would be even worse….she’s been kidnapped by Mr. Psycho and is being imprisoned in a dark, foul and sound proof basement with no possibility to escape. I wish I knew but I have no clue. Alice should take her time to think it all through considering what Roxy and Dana mean to her. She can’t trust both but she loves each woman differently and her feelings are beyond friendship when it comes to Roxy. This kinda scares me. Don’t want to think what might happen if Al chooses Roxy over Dana eventually. World War III. That’s what I see coming, lol. Hope it all works out at some point although I still believe (and yes, I’m repeating myself one more time) that Dana and Al should have a long break. You can kill me now, lol. I’m glad that the police didn’t find the drugs in Dana’s sports bag. Thanks to Kristen…she’ll get plus points for that, lol. Roxy must be very upset about it and now that she found out that Al’s missing she’ll be definitely trying to find her. Damn, Dana…get your ass in your car and search your woman! Can’t wait to see what you planned for your Halloween installment. Hope to see my favorite guy back:-)) And I don’t mean Tony, lol. This was an utterly kick-ass chapter. You never dissapoint, my dear. Just bring it on, lady. And by the way….the Red Sox suck!!!! No offense…but I had to say that, lol.
Therapy might work for Dana and Alice but they need time for that to work and they haven’t hardly anytime in almost two years to catch their breath with all the psychos coming after them. Hopefully Al is getting her head together and is not anywhere near David. pps
wow almost 2 years congratulations!! well done and every chapter has been better than the last ur a talent man good job!!!:) hmm where is alice im thinking motel her feelings were prob hurt, alone time for her perhaps? i hope so anyway poor dana she cant catch a break can she lol well as long as she has alice she’ll be fine another great chap cant wait for their halloween chap :)