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Masked Feelings CH #9
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Dana came out of the bathroom, with a towel wrapped around her.
Dana – Did I hear the phone ring?
Lara – Wrong number.
Dana – Ok then, I’ll go get dressed.
Lara – Hold on.
Dana – What?
Lara – You, in a towel, this is too good to pass up.
Dana – Lara….. You know I don’t have time for this…..
Lara – Come on, Dane. This will be quick…
Lara didn’t give her a chance to turn her down. The towel had already dropped to the floor and Lara took full advantage of Dana’s naked body.
Dana – You are insatiable!
Lara – And you talk too much. We don’t have time…. remember?
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The phone call was just a start… Alice would have a surprise waiting for Dana. “There’s no going back now. I’ve fallen for you, Dana. I’m putting all my faith in you to make the right decision. Choose me, Please Dana, don’t break my heart…”
Alice would be on pins and needles all day, full of nervous energy. She would focus on getting her work done this time. By lunch time, she decided that she didn’t want to wait til Dana got back to talk to her. Alice wanted to drive to San Diego to be with Dana.
Alice didn’t leave work til late in the evening. She planned to get home, pack and leave for San Diego tonight. Alice called Tina on the drive home.
Tina – Hello.
Alice – Hi, Tina.
Tina – Good to hear from you. What’s the news?
Alice – I decided to take your advise…. I’m going to fight for her. I’m leaving for San Diego tonight to tell her how I feel.
Tina – I’m so happy for you. That’s great news, Alice.
Alice – I just hope that she gives me a chance.
Tina – Why wouldn’t she, Alice? She loves you. Have faith in her.
Alice – You’re right… Thanks for the pep talk. I gotta go.
Tina – Call me, so I know how it all turns out. I’m sure I already know, though.
Alice – I promise I will call you tomorrow. Talk to you then.
Tina – Drive safe.
Alice – I will. Bye, Tina.
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(67 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
OMG!!!! What the hell?!? Jesus Lara is just freakin sick. I mean jeez if I was Alice, I would have kick her ass if she had lets me go. Its a real good story though please keep writing. I wanna find out what happens to Alice and if Dana finds out.
woah! brteyes, babe, you are unbelievable! you’re right i am a little upset with you, but i know you’ll make things better. what goes on in your head? that was some sick s**t you had lara put alice through. alice has to fight like hell to get to dana, and hopefully dana will be able to meet her halfway. thx for the update.
I must hand it to you, I certainly did not see that coming. Dana’s gonna kill Lara isn’t she? ;)
Pao, lol. In a more serious issue, the rape between two women is rarely writing, maybe because is difficult, nothing pleasant and not politically correct. Well I hope that Dana know who Lara is, and give her what she deserves.
Wow I did not see the psycho, blood-licking, rapist Lara coming…great story though. And can’t wait to see Alice expose Lara to Dana…that should be fun! Update soon!
Hmm..this was a tad creepy, but I liked it. I want to see where this is gonna go. Nice Job. Can’t wait to Dana finds out….
holding my comments, but hoping you’ll be able to update soon – you do know you’re killing me…
oh no poor alice I just hope that dana finds out soon
woah! this Lara is so sick, blood licking bloody sick. ur wtiting’s good. I’m gonna have to keep reading, sorry I found this fic late. But, still, just in case u were to check, I want to say that ur awesome:)