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Masked Feelings CH 95 Magnetism
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Dana – I guess I shouldn’t speculate and just wait for a reaction.
Irwin – Whatever it is… I’m sure you’ll get one.
Dana – I’ll call you tomorrow and see how things are.
Irwin – I know she’s got a women’s meeting tomorrow, so it might not happen.
Dana – I guess I can wait another day.
Irwin – Well, you could go ahead and tell me. Then I can tell your mother.
Dana – That would be great but I really want to do this in person. Besides… if mom ever heard second-hand news about me that I didn’t tell myself, she would kill me.
Irwin – Yeah, you are right about that one.
Dana – I better go. I’ll talk to you later.
Irwin – Yeah, I should go check on your mother.
Dana – Give her my best. I love you, daddy.
Irwin – I love you too, pumpkin.
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Kristen was hanging on by a thread and Marco felt helpless as to doing anything else but driving her to the nearest hospital. Head wounds always looked worse than what they actually worse. He was worried that she hadn’t moved since she barely looked at him minutes ago. Her body had taken so many blows recently and it appeared that this could be the last few breaths that she takes. The woman had lost so much. It wasn’t likely for her to have a chance this time since there was nothing left inside. Her fighting spirit was waning.
Marco had to pull over when she started convulsing and then just passed out… or at least that’s what he thought at first. He grabbed her wrist, feeling for a pulse and there was none. She was slumped over motionless. Marco quickly got out and opened the passenger side door. He pulled her out and laid he out on the pavement. He started CPR right away. Hopefully he was doing it right since it was a damn long time since the class. There were onlookers gathering around out of morbid curiosity.
A woman said that she called 911 and that someone was on the way. An older man came in and helped with the chest compressions as Marco continued to breathe life into her. You could hear the ambulance in the distance and it was there in a few minutes time. It seemed like an eternity when a life was teetering on the edge. Marco had a hard time pulling away when the paramedics came to the rescue. He stood closely by as they readied her for the ride to the hospital. Marco didn’t think twice when he jumped into the back of the ambulance.
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Well now you are just spoiling us, brteyes!! Not that I mind… Another superb update. I am glad that Roxy is alive-ish. Very curious to see if she survives getting back to civilization and how much of her (mentally and physically) is still in tact. And what is up with Sharon and that house? Looking forward to some answers there eventually. I am glad Dana has Irwin on her side. Marco/Kristen? That is a Grand Canyon sized wrinkle in the story. It will be interesting to see what happens when Bobby shows up. Dana/Alice? Very hot. And very scary. I know David is waiting in the wings somewhere for his moment to strike. Can you tell I am anxious to see more of this wonderful story? ;-D Thanks so much brteyes!!
excellent work!!
Brteyes, it could be so wonderful with you and I but you just stand yourself in the way, and your so called DanaVicious. Why don’t you give us a chance? Don’t I deserve one? You’ve been pretty blunt with your comment to me. We both know that your girl would never kick my butt, but if she tried she’d get it back a million times. She doesn’t need to know that we’re talking, right? So open your heart and let me in, brteyes. It’s not as difficult. You can consider until the next time you post. Last chance, woman. Don’t screw it up this time!