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Mesmerized part 14
Dana
As soon as Alice was released from her harness she thanked Mike quickly and ran over to us with the biggest grin on her face. I saw that she wasn’t going to stop and she ran straight at me, wrapping her arms around me and knocking the wind out of me slightly.
“You enjoyed it then Al?” I chuckled.
“I loved it! It was so amazing. Next time you’re coming up with me” I looked at Alice and saw that her tight plastic goggles had left obvious circles around her eyes, making me laugh even more.
“Oh I don’t know about that” I was not good with heights.
We were told that we would have to wait about an hour for them to finish making the video of Alice’s jump but I had already prepared for this and I told Alice to get changed while I went back to the car.
A few minutes later I came back with the picnic basket that I had packed that morning.
“I thought we could go and have some lunch on the field over there while we wait for your DVD”
Everyone else seemed to think that this was a good idea and we ambled over to the field, where I spread out a large checkered blanket for us to sit on. We then enjoyed a lazy lunch of baguettes, fresh strawberries and watermelon, chocolate and champagne, while chatting happily.
After lunch we got back into the limo and dropped off all the other ladies en route to the next destination. Alice and I were sitting close to each other, holding hands and Alice’s grip tightened when we turned in to see the front of a huge white brick hotel surrounded by freshly cut lawns and neat flower beds. We drove up the long gravel driveway past a fountain spouting a tall tower of water. Alice looked at me with a smiling face and reached across to kiss me, running her hands through my hair.
“I thought we could make it your birthday weekend, a days just not long enough” I told her and she kissed me again, this time harder. The limo pulled up outside the door and a porter came to help us in, I had managed to sneak a bag of stuff for us both without Alice noticing.
A few minutes later I was opening the door to the most expensive suite in the hotel and was happy to see that it was worth it. There was an enormous four-poster bed, draped in deep red silk sheets and one wall of the room was taken up by a large window facing out to the gardens of the hotel. Alice rested happily on the bed, lying flat before I ran over and jumped onto the bed next to her, before tickling her and making her giggle like a small girl.
Alice
Dana suggested that we went and had massages so that’s what we did. We were soon lying on beds next to each other, relaxing as we were gently massaged. I turned my head to look across at Dana and reached over to take hold of her hand as we smiled at each other.
“This has been the best birthday ever, thank you so much” It didn’t seem enough to just say thank you, she had done so much for me and I was overwhelmed with emotion.
“You’re welcome”
“I love you so much” I told her.
“I love you too. It’s not over yet though” Dana grinned across at me with a naughty look in her eye and I returned the smile, not being able to believe that there was yet more planned for me but looking forward to it immensely. We settled our heads back onto the beds and closed our eyes, relaxing while the masseuses worked their magic.
TBC
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(21 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
I giggled at the mental image of Alice looking like a pixie! hehe. This was really cute, I can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS xx
I love this chapter. Pleas continue soon!!!!