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Mesmerized part 2
Alice eventually broke apart from me when the credits began to roll. I desperately wanted to sit there with her forever but Alice was looking at the clock and it seemed that she wanted go, much to my disappointment. “Wow, its late, I’d better go” She stood up and straightened out her clothes.
“Are you sure you’re ok Dane?” I obviously hadn’t done a very good job of convincing her I’m ok.
“Yes Alice!” I smiled at her, really wishing that she would drop it.
“Things alright with Lara?” Okay, so it was obvious. I decided I should just tell her the truth, or as much of the truth that I could.
“Well, to be honest, no. We had an argument before you came tonight. I don’t know what it is, we just seem to be drifting apart. I seem to be doing that a lot recently, drifting apart from the people I care about”. I looked Alice in the eyes, waiting for her reaction. I was trying to move the conversation away from Lara and had not really meant to bring up about me and Alice drifting apart.
“Hey, it will be ok Dane. I know me and you haven’t seen a lot of each other lately but tonight was fun wasn’t it? We’ll do it again soon, there’s no way I’m going to drift away from you again, I’m right here, ok? And as for Lara, you two will make it up, all couples have arguments. She would be a fool to drift away from you”. I smiled at her and pulled her into a hug, holding her close to me. It meant so much to me that things seemed to be nearly as they used to be.
She hugged me back, and didn’t make any motion to pull apart quickly. We held each other for a few minutes and finally broke apart. “Thanks Al, it’s great to have things back to normal”
“Yeah it is. Give me a call if you need to talk about anything ok.” I really appreciated this, the old Alice was back.
“Okay. Good night Dana” She leaned in and gave me a peck on the cheek. I grinned.
“Good night Alice”. I went to bed feeling content with my wonderful evening with Alice and although I should have been worried about things with Lara, I wasn’t.
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(26 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Nice update! Looks like Lara and Dana are on the rocks, sniff (I like the two of them together, although I am probs in the minority here. OH well, someone’s gotta do it:)). Dana is just not very nice to her. But will they make up? Dana seems to have plenty to be figuring out. So does Alice. I’m glad these two are friends though, hello tension! How will the drama continue? Inquiring minds want to know. Please let Lara have some dignity, no matter what happens:) This is a great fic, can’t wait to read more!
Oh yeah, I wanted to mention that I like the alternating first-person thing you’re doing.
They’re so into each other. I wonder when they’ll kiss.
Ohh, they were so close! :D I can’t wait to see how this will proceed.
yay no more Lara! or is she coming back to make up with Dana? plz say no, plzzz lol You’re doing a great job here so dont stop!
hmm, the ending line to this is pretty telling. I’m glad they managed to talk though things a little, but could you please make the soup chef go away? For me?