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MET Obsession
“Oh God you smell so good.” Tina said in a voice heavily saturated with desire.
As Tina’s hands slowly traced the outline of Bette’s chest and torso Bette opened her eyes. Bette looked beyond Tina at the men’s urinal, thought about the purpose of the urinal and broke free of the spell that had over taken all reason.
“Jesus, I can’t fucking do this right here right now.” Bette thought.
Bette imagined a humiliating front page story featuring images of the men’s urinal and their faces. Tap tap tap read the headline. Bette extracted her body from Tina, forced herself to take a step back and exhaled loudly as she attempted to regain her composure.
“What am I doing? Remember you promised to spend the evening with Kit.” Bette thought regretfully.
Tina adjusted her top and looked silently at Bette with a puzzled and somewhat embarrassed expression on her face. As their intake of breath decreased to a normal state, they stood frozen in silence drinking in the sight of one another. Suddenly, Tina shook her head and made a mad dash for the bathroom exit.
“Don’t leave me!” Bette thought.
Bette pursued Tina and instinctively pulled her into a tight embrace before she reached exit. Tina’s back was pressed securely against Bette’s chest but she made no effort to move when Bette loosened her grip.
“Please don’t run away from me again Tina. Did you think I didn’t recognize you from the Met?” Bette said with great emotion.
Tina gasped in response and turned around to face Bette breaking free of her embrace. A questioning expression took hold of Tina’s face.
“I want. It’s. I really don’t know what to say.” Bette said softly as she ran her right hand across her brow and dropped her arm by her side.
Tina felt her heart skip a beat. She gazed intensely at Bette’s face, silently imploring her to continue.
“I’m not going to pretend I can explain this it’s different and I think you sense it too. I’ve been searching and thinking about you ever since that night at the Met and when I saw you tonight.” Bette’s voice trailed off. She had spoken so softly that Tina had to hold her breathe to make out the words.
Bette studied Tina’s face. She forced herself to remain silent and still until Tina responded by nodding yes. As Bette opened her mouth to speak, the bathroom door suddenly thrust open hitting the wall with a loud bang.
“Bette! Girl what is taking so long.” Yelled Kit.
Kit paused to look at her sister and the disheveled blonde standing next to her. She knew her sister, the little blonde cutie was just her type.
“Umm hmm. I think I understand what’s been holding you up little sister.” Laughed Kit.
“You’re Kit Porter.” Tina said to Kit with a surprised look.
“Wait. Kit is your sister?” Tina mumbled to Bette.
For the first time in her life, Tina knew she was in deep deep trouble. Although they were strangers, she felt equal feelings of terror, lust and love for the woman standing next to her. Whatever it took, whatever happened she understood she was cornered and would have to play this out. She wasn’t sure how she knew but she did know with certainty this was it. This woman was the one.
Finis.
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Kat, welcome aboard. Nice to see you spreading your writing wings here. Very sweet short story. I’m with Bette, a public restroom is not the ideal place for a first kiss, but what a kiss it was. I hope you write more stories and share them with us. Keep on writing, you have a talent.
p.s., glad you took the advice (yes, that was me).
Thanks Cella. I appreciate the advice and was pleasantly surprised to find your response here. I am exploring all of the tips you listed elsewhere.
I just started the writing thing and am looking forward to creating more tales.
Hi! Story looking interesting.
I understand it’s a single part tale, but maybe you’ll want to continue?
Hi Zhenya,
I will definitely consider expanding the story. To be honest, I have not plotted out the rest of the story. I will need to put on my thinking cap before I post additional chapters of this story.
Hi Kat, welcome aboard!
It was a short story but very well written and i hope for more.
Sincerly bibi28
Thanks Bibi28.
Hi, Welcome Aboard,
I think this has the makings of a longer story.
Enjoyed reading it and your characters are well written.
Thank you, hope to read more.
SG
Thank you SassyGran. I’m glad you found the characters and story entertaining.
Hello Kat and Welcometo the site. Enjoyed your story, certainly hope you expand this story,please keep Tina from bolting from Bette and Kit. She needs to stay and talk to them maybe in Kit’s dressing room or someplace other than the bathroom. Very interesting story. Please continue. Thanks for posting.
I agree, these girls need to get the heck out of that restroom.
There is the David setup an interview factor. So we should learn more about Kits past and her estrangement from her father. Many possibilities need to be explored and plotted for TiBette too before the next installment.
Thank you letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Great story and I want to read more. Maybe Bette invites Tina to her apartment for a stir fry dinner??
Hmm…I think you may have tapped into something. LOL.
Great and PLEEEEEZE do not let Candace anywhere near the museum!!!!!
This was a refreshing one off, haven’t seen this in a long while so good job!
Thank you CestMoi.