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MET Obsession
“Oh my God! It’s the brunette!” Tina thought.
In her adrenaline induced state, Tina bolted from the sink but had forgotten about the small puddle of water beneath her heels. Like Bambi on ice, each foot slid in a slightly different direction. Tina swung her arms helplessly before losing her balance and tumbling downward making a loud whacking sound as she connected with the floor.
“Are you all right?” The woman said worried.
Somehow, Tina managed to push out the word yes but it was breathy and higher pitched than her normal speaking voice. Tina grabbed hold of the sink, stood up and winced in pain.
“No. I don’t think you are well.” The brunette said.
The brunette paused for a moment and with a concerned expression continued speaking, “My name is Bette. Why don’t you sit for a moment on the bench.”
When she didn’t respond Bette offered another option. “Would you like me to call someone?”
“No really, I’m feeling much better.” Tina half lied.
Bette observed that her face had begun to regain color and she had released her hand from the sink but the Blonde woman appeared to be a little shaky.
“I think you should sit down for a little while. I promise I’ll stay with you until we’re sure you are fully recovered. Is that ok?” Bette replied.
Tina nodded yes, walked with Bette to the bench and sat down. As her head began to clear, disassociated thoughts raced through Tina’s mind. She finally had a name to go with the beautiful face, her leg hurt and she felt absolutely humiliated.
Bette examined the Blonde woman closely. It had been months, but she was certain the woman sitting in front of her was the cute Blonde from the Obsession Exhibit. That night, when she had detected the Blonde woman eyeing her, Bette had decided to play it coy. But she had been a very willing participant in the cat and mouse game. She’d even pulled a ridiculous Angelina Jolie move and pivoted to expose her leg to the Blonde.
Bette considered herself to be a pro at the seduction game and was positive the Blonde woman had been signaling her interest. Unfortunately, just as she was about to reel in her fish, her damn date had showed up. Bette had watched in frustration as her attractive date clutched the Blondes waist, kissed her and dragged her off.
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Kat, welcome aboard. Nice to see you spreading your writing wings here. Very sweet short story. I’m with Bette, a public restroom is not the ideal place for a first kiss, but what a kiss it was. I hope you write more stories and share them with us. Keep on writing, you have a talent.
p.s., glad you took the advice (yes, that was me).
Thanks Cella. I appreciate the advice and was pleasantly surprised to find your response here. I am exploring all of the tips you listed elsewhere.
I just started the writing thing and am looking forward to creating more tales.
Hi! Story looking interesting.
I understand it’s a single part tale, but maybe you’ll want to continue?
Hi Zhenya,
I will definitely consider expanding the story. To be honest, I have not plotted out the rest of the story. I will need to put on my thinking cap before I post additional chapters of this story.
Hi Kat, welcome aboard!
It was a short story but very well written and i hope for more.
Sincerly bibi28
Thanks Bibi28.
Hi, Welcome Aboard,
I think this has the makings of a longer story.
Enjoyed reading it and your characters are well written.
Thank you, hope to read more.
SG
Thank you SassyGran. I’m glad you found the characters and story entertaining.
Hello Kat and Welcometo the site. Enjoyed your story, certainly hope you expand this story,please keep Tina from bolting from Bette and Kit. She needs to stay and talk to them maybe in Kit’s dressing room or someplace other than the bathroom. Very interesting story. Please continue. Thanks for posting.
I agree, these girls need to get the heck out of that restroom.
There is the David setup an interview factor. So we should learn more about Kits past and her estrangement from her father. Many possibilities need to be explored and plotted for TiBette too before the next installment.
Thank you letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Great story and I want to read more. Maybe Bette invites Tina to her apartment for a stir fry dinner??
Hmm…I think you may have tapped into something. LOL.
Great and PLEEEEEZE do not let Candace anywhere near the museum!!!!!
This was a refreshing one off, haven’t seen this in a long while so good job!
Thank you CestMoi.