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Milagros (Miracles)
She placed Angel in his toddler chair and went to pour herself a cup of coffee. Angel grabbed his spoon and tried to feed himself. Carmen knew not to try to help him. He liked to be independent a trait that reminded Carmen of someone else. Actually a lot about Angel reminded Carmen of her. The one who left her at the altar, the person that changed her life for forever. Angel fixed his green eyes on Carmen and extended his hand.
Angel: Mami yum yum.
Carmen: No thank you.
Angel hoped down from his chair and ran into his room. She watched him leave and went to pick out her clothes for the day, before picking out Angel’s. Carmen put on her business suit and flat ironed her shoulder length bob so the ends were bumped under. Now off to get Angel ready. She walked into his room and found him dressed in his own little way. Angel had put socks on his hands, shorts on his bottom, and a jacket on.
Carmen: Angel what is this?
Carmen put her hands on her hips and looked jokingly stern. Angel shrugged his little shoulders, and looked down at his feet. The action tugged at Carmen’s heart. Carmen got Angel properly dressed and into the car. She pulled up to Mercedes drive way and got Angel out the car. Mercedes opened the door and when Angel saw her he smiled the widest smile ever. He ran to her awaiting arms.
Angel: Hola uela
Mercedes: Hola mi amor y es abuela. Carmen qué le tiene fue la enseñanza mi nieto. (Hi my love and it’s abuela. Carmen what have you been teaching my grandson?).
Carmen: Hola mamita.
Carmen kissed Mercedes plump cheeks and carried Angel’s bag into the house.
Carmen: Sea bueno por abuela. Yo él recogerá en seis. (Be good for grandma. I will pick him up at six.)
Carmen kissed and hugged Angel one last time before leaving. She hated to part from him but work called. Being a single mother meant she had to do it all. She could have had another choice but this was the path she choose.
Mercedes: Leave already I have him. I am going to make him some cookies.
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(33 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
I really want to know how Angel came to be. It sounds like he is Shane’s but o course I could be wrong. I always thought they should have written Jenny’s funeral into the finale, I honestly thought that was how Carmen, Tim, and Marina were going to appear. Oh well, this has me really intrigued.
Angel is so cute! And I love cute. I said that before, didn’t I? I too want to know how he came to grace us with his presence, since he seems to be a mini-Shane but Shane does not know about him.And I see you tried to make the Morales speak Spanish mostly, which I bet took some effort but it kinda makes it more believable so I appreciate it. Need any help with that? Cause I kinda feel bad just taking and never giving, haha… can’t really say reviewing takes much time of my life (although it does challenge sometimes my capacity to put my thoughts into words).I think Carmen should stop straightening her hair. Wavy works just fine for her. That’s my only complaint the whole chapter, ;)And that’s all I have for now. Quite a lot if you ask me :) especially considering I had to re-write this -thus having to remember what I wrote the first time- because my laptop acted up just when about to click to send the comment. Damn, I hate it when that happens.
I am definently coming back daily to check for updates! =) I love it when Carmen plays a motherly role. Great job, pps!!
wicked cool start!!
oh u got me with this ff!!! u HAVE to continue! ps: if u need help with ur spanish u just have to ask ;)