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    Milagros (Miracles)

    Story written on April 21, 2009 by bcoleman.
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    Carmen has to go back to WeHo for Jenny’s funeral but she isn’t coming back alone.

    Angel: galletas (cookies)

    Mercedes laughed and kissed Angel’s cheek.

    Mercedes: Go on now. You don’t want to be late.

    Carmen: Ok fine I am leaving. Bye honey.

    She ruffled his curly hair and Angel waved bye. Carmen ran to the car. Even if she was late it didn’t matter she was the boss. Carmen thanks to Russell owned Suga inc., the fastest growing Dj Company this side of L.A. She didn’t DJ as much since Angel came along because of the late nights but she did sometimes. Mostly her workers were the one doing the parties and Carmen just set them up. The day at work went by uneventfully. Jane one of her new workers was talking about her favorite author who just died a few days ago but Carmen didn’t stop to listen. It was time to go home and pick her up son. She raced to her mom’s house.

    Carmen: Donde esta mi bebe? (Where is my baby)

    Angel was hiding behind the door. He did this every time Carmen came to get him. He liked to run out and scare her.  She always made sure not to open the door all the way so she wouldn’t hurt him.

    Angel: Boo.

    Carmen clutched her heart in mock horror.

    Carmen: usted me espantó (you scared me)

    Mercedes came from the kitchen and handed Carmen a plate of food. She picked Angel up and sat him on her lap and put on his shoes.

    Carmen: Was he any trouble?

    Mercedes: Of course not. He really is an angel.

    Carmen:  That he is.

    Mercedes: Oh I almost forgot this came in the mail for you.

    Carmen looked at the envelope perplexed. All her mail came to her apartment. She opened the letter. It was from Bette informing her about Jenny’s funeral. Mercedes noticed the Carmen had gone completely white.

    Mercedes: qué es lo (What is it?)

    That’s the author Jane was talking about. Jenny had apparently drowned in Bette’s pool after taking sleeping pills. Bette said she didn’t have to come if she didn’t want to, just that she thought she should know. A million thoughts ran through her head but the biggest one was Shane, and how she would react to Angel. Would she resent Carmen or even care? Carmen took her son into her arms and put on his jacket.

    Carmen: I have to go to West Hollywood.

    Tbc tell me what you think.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    1. I really want to know how Angel came to be. It sounds like he is Shane’s but o course I could be wrong. I always thought they should have written Jenny’s funeral into the finale, I honestly thought that was how Carmen, Tim, and Marina were going to appear. Oh well, this has me really intrigued.

    2. Angel is so cute! And I love cute. I said that before, didn’t I? I too want to know how he came to grace us with his presence, since he seems to be a mini-Shane but Shane does not know about him.And I see you tried to make the Morales speak Spanish mostly, which I bet took some effort but it kinda makes it more believable so I appreciate it. Need any help with that? Cause I kinda feel bad just taking and never giving, haha… can’t really say reviewing takes much time of my life (although it does challenge sometimes my capacity to put my thoughts into words).I think Carmen should stop straightening her hair. Wavy works just fine for her. That’s my only complaint the whole chapter, ;)And that’s all I have for now. Quite a lot if you ask me :) especially considering I had to re-write this -thus having to remember what I wrote the first time- because my laptop acted up just when about to click to send the comment. Damn, I hate it when that happens.

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