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Missing. 7
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“You have no idea how much I missed you….its like I was in another world or something…everything was the same…..but everything was different…..you wanna see something cool?”
“Please don’t show me your new jagged scar….I’ll see it soon enough.”
“That is very presumptuous of you Miss Morales…”
“How did…you?”
“I heard you talking while I tuned the doctors out…they where talking in German anyway…what the old bag want?”
“What did she want? She wants a favor repaid….and she sorta paid for all of this….I mean I was paying for it at first but….she took care of all of it….Either way don’t think about it right now….just get better…..please ok?”
“Yes…ok….I will get better…see I am feeling better already. Carmen?”
“Yeah?”
“Do you ever think about what your life would have been like….I mean really…the path not taken?”
“I have thought about it. But I wouldn’t want it. As it is I barely want this life sometimes….so actually no…..I can’t think about what would have been when I am living it…you know?”
“Yeah I guess…..when can we get out of here…they didn’t really say anything to me?”
“In a week we will fly back to L.A meet with the old bag do her deed then finally get on with our lives…what do you say?”
“Sounds good…..Carmen?”
“Yes…”
“Please tell me you kept my father’s car?”
“It cost a bit of money but yes…..I love that car…but I can’t drive it…so its just sitting in the garage….”
Shane just smiles when I tell her that. Knowing Shane the way I do she probably takes it as a sign that I always wanted her to come back. She is half right. I pour her some water when she motions for the pitcher. She drinks the water down slow. She seems to happy to be alive. I half expected her to wake up and be pissed off to see me here.
“I want to go home tomorrow….”
“Shane you can’t we have to wait for the doctor to clear you.”
“I know…I just wanna get out of here….”
“Be patient….”
“Easy for you to say…..”
“No Shane its not easy for me to say….I thought you where going to die….there was so much blood…..and you looked like….”
“I was a goner…I know….I felt it”
“Get some rest you look really tired.”
“What about you?”
“There is a nice hotel waiting for me…don’t you worry I will be back as soon as I get some rest and food…”
“Promise?”
“Yes Shane I promise.”
TBC….
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Just got caught up…awesome as always! Love to see how they progress from this point on!
look you are the greatest writer there is ok !!! you are my fucking inspiration for real!!! i hope you get better . For the ending this story yea im very sad cause this is my reason to keep reading fanfic for real.. i do read but this just gets me pumping haha i loved this story and will always be my fav . still lovin it the updates are great. i dont think you sude stop writing cause your great i have told you before your the fucking best. Dont stop!! I love your other stories to dont get me wrong all of them are fucking tastic and i for sure will be reading enything you write. Maybe your right i mean i this stpry keeps giong and someday has to stop but let me tell you the intencity never stopped it keot getting better and better. I’ved cried laughed with this storie and man i think im gonna start reading it again!!! ok im gonna stop now. i hope you get better good luck with your muisc but dont stop writing!!! again you’re the best
I really don’t even know what to say…I’m in shock and probably denial as well…the thought of not being able to log on and read a new chapter of…anything by New Dawn Fades is, well…depressing. I don’t normally post here (why, I don’t really know) but I nearly fell off my chair when I read that you may be gone for good. This story arc has been one of the best things I’ve ever read…and I ‘m not just talking fanfics…I mean one of the best of EVERYTHING I’ve ever read. While I knew this arc had to end at some point (and I suppose if I’m honest with myself I’ve felt it coming), but you’ve also written so many other great stories (Now I’m Nothing, Night Returning, La Mer, Grey Hotel) that I guess I just figured I would still be able to get my NDF fix. So basically what I’m trying to say is…you are an amazingly talented writer and I will continue to thoroughly enjoy reading your work for as long as you afford me the privilege. I really hope you feel better…and thank you!
I hope you deciding to disappear for good is the fatique & delirium talking from you being sick. Seriously though I’m sure you need the mental rest from the wonderful stories that you’ve given us, so I ain’t mad at ya. Hope the muse hits you again. Will it be too optimistic of me too think we’ll get more of ‘Grey Hotel’. It’s been amazing reading your AU stories about my favorite couple from the L Word, at least you still have a few more updates to go. Thanx
Fucking amazing! This could totally be turned into a movie you know, all your series and stories. All of it’s very clever and well written, great job!
You’ll be gone? You’ll be missed if you go. Really. And about the whole thing of topping yourself, every time you finish a part to this storyline, I think the same thing. I think that there’s no way it can get any better. No way. But then you write something like Scorpio Rising, then you write A means to an End, then you write Missing, and I’m proven wrong every time. But if you feel that this epic is coming to a close, then you’d be right to have it come to its natural end instead of dragging it along and having the story suffer. Just know that if you find new inspiration, you’ll have *much* support, and your other stories will get much support as well. Oh, almost forgot to mention: I loved the update (and knowing that it’s one of the last updates, I appreciate it even more).
Well, that gives new meaning to the terms “shock therapy” ! Looking forward to the next chapters… For as long as they keep coming. Thank you for this.
To say that you will be missed if this is the end of the line would be a severe understatement! Your writing is always fresh and unpredictible and this sage has been a joy to read. I hope that you continue to feel better and find new inspirations.