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Missing. 7
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“I know….but I love her…..she is my second chance.”
“Yes she is. You know if you didn’t love her she would have no one…..that is a heavy responsibility….you have given this life to her…you have given her your life….. Your account is cleared….do you understand?’
“Yes I do. Its why we are so perfect together.”
“Yes. So wake up before she has a heart attack waiting on you. And do your self a favor don’t tell her what happened. Just love her.”
“I will….thank you.”
“Shane McCutcheon….thank you…..Thank you for your time…..”
I shake his hand and I suddenly feel like shit. My mouth feels like cotton balls. My side hurts worse than anything. I hate that feeling of that fucking tube up my nose. I watch the light of the monitor beep in green. I look at the plaster walls, the cross over my head. I look over at the TV. Carmen must have left it on. I see that the German’s like to dub Nightline. Because there it plain as day….weird……
“Carm……Carm….”
“Shane…..ummmmSHANE…..oh my god…..oh my god…..I am gonna…get…. I am gonna get the doctor….”
Ch 15
The doctor breaks the vacuum. The vacuum of the room with Shane almost dying in it. I didn’t know that you could almost forget to breathe. Scared. Yes definitely and a little crazy too. My Shane awake and not liking the food. Wanting a cigarette, making lovey dovey eyes at me when they kick me out to check her. She mouths I love you. And I smile at her.
Thank you god.
I call Florida and let them know that Shane is ok. I sit outside her room when I see the old bag and I have to say that I wasn’t expecting it.
“Well what are you doing here?”
“Miss Morales please……you two are very dear to me……and I was in the neighborhood…..”
“The neighborhood we are in Nürburg Germany stop bullshitting me….what do you want?”
“Well I wanted to see if you needed more help….and I wanted to extend the help if needed. I heard Ms. McCutcheon is in a very serious state.”
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Just got caught up…awesome as always! Love to see how they progress from this point on!
look you are the greatest writer there is ok !!! you are my fucking inspiration for real!!! i hope you get better . For the ending this story yea im very sad cause this is my reason to keep reading fanfic for real.. i do read but this just gets me pumping haha i loved this story and will always be my fav . still lovin it the updates are great. i dont think you sude stop writing cause your great i have told you before your the fucking best. Dont stop!! I love your other stories to dont get me wrong all of them are fucking tastic and i for sure will be reading enything you write. Maybe your right i mean i this stpry keeps giong and someday has to stop but let me tell you the intencity never stopped it keot getting better and better. I’ved cried laughed with this storie and man i think im gonna start reading it again!!! ok im gonna stop now. i hope you get better good luck with your muisc but dont stop writing!!! again you’re the best
I really don’t even know what to say…I’m in shock and probably denial as well…the thought of not being able to log on and read a new chapter of…anything by New Dawn Fades is, well…depressing. I don’t normally post here (why, I don’t really know) but I nearly fell off my chair when I read that you may be gone for good. This story arc has been one of the best things I’ve ever read…and I ‘m not just talking fanfics…I mean one of the best of EVERYTHING I’ve ever read. While I knew this arc had to end at some point (and I suppose if I’m honest with myself I’ve felt it coming), but you’ve also written so many other great stories (Now I’m Nothing, Night Returning, La Mer, Grey Hotel) that I guess I just figured I would still be able to get my NDF fix. So basically what I’m trying to say is…you are an amazingly talented writer and I will continue to thoroughly enjoy reading your work for as long as you afford me the privilege. I really hope you feel better…and thank you!
I hope you deciding to disappear for good is the fatique & delirium talking from you being sick. Seriously though I’m sure you need the mental rest from the wonderful stories that you’ve given us, so I ain’t mad at ya. Hope the muse hits you again. Will it be too optimistic of me too think we’ll get more of ‘Grey Hotel’. It’s been amazing reading your AU stories about my favorite couple from the L Word, at least you still have a few more updates to go. Thanx
Fucking amazing! This could totally be turned into a movie you know, all your series and stories. All of it’s very clever and well written, great job!
You’ll be gone? You’ll be missed if you go. Really. And about the whole thing of topping yourself, every time you finish a part to this storyline, I think the same thing. I think that there’s no way it can get any better. No way. But then you write something like Scorpio Rising, then you write A means to an End, then you write Missing, and I’m proven wrong every time. But if you feel that this epic is coming to a close, then you’d be right to have it come to its natural end instead of dragging it along and having the story suffer. Just know that if you find new inspiration, you’ll have *much* support, and your other stories will get much support as well. Oh, almost forgot to mention: I loved the update (and knowing that it’s one of the last updates, I appreciate it even more).
Well, that gives new meaning to the terms “shock therapy” ! Looking forward to the next chapters… For as long as they keep coming. Thank you for this.
To say that you will be missed if this is the end of the line would be a severe understatement! Your writing is always fresh and unpredictible and this sage has been a joy to read. I hope that you continue to feel better and find new inspirations.