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More Than Satisfies (2/2)
She had comfort in the knowledge that if they didn’t both experience some pretty bad moments in the past, this moment might not be real. The risk that was involved might have been too much. It might have been possible to just let the feelings pass and settle for the comfort of friendship. It’s strange, how the pain in the past can both shy you away from risks at times and at others totally make you realize when its so worthwhile.
After a few minutes Dana got up from the table and joined Alice in the kitchen. She picked up a dishtowel and started drying. Not a word was spoken, there was nothing that needed to be said. In a silent moment, they began working as one, and the symbolism was lost to no one.
After Alice handed Dana the last of the dishes she walked over to the other bag that still remained unopened on her counter. She felt a hand on her shoulder as she tried to peer into the bag.
“Not so fast, Piezsecki.” Dana said taking the bag and walking out of the room. “Wow, you really have no patience.”
Alice followed behind Dana, “Sure, just take all of the fun out, Dana. I just wanted to see what was in this secret bag of yours.” She said with the best pouty face she could muster. It didn’t work. She sat down on the couch next to Dana. “So are you going to show me what’s in the bag? You said it was for after dinner and you know Dane, dinner’s over.”
“You’re lucky you’re so cute when you pester me. You know that?” Dana said smiling. “Ok, for the bag. Like I told you, I brought your favorite things for dinner. Well, we have the same things for after dinner.”
Alice looked over at Dana, “Really? Like what?”
“OK, what’s your favorite thing to do when you’re all stressed or sick?”
“I color.” Alice asked as Dana pulled out a Bugs Bunny coloring book along with a 64 pack of crayons. “Bugs Bunny! And you got me the 64-pack! You know, the”
“Yeah, Al, I know, I’ve heard it enough, the 72-pack isn’t real, they can’t just decide one day to make up 8 new colors.” Dana said smiling watching Alice’s head bop up and down in agreement.
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(66 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
Very sweet story! I really enjoyed it!
I have a lump in my throat!
So well done. Thanks!
That was very nicely done, real and intimate. Thank you for this little story.
I so enjoyed this. Pure fun on many levels.
What a charming, loving dialog between Alice and Dana. It is so straight forward and honest. Dana personified and it was so good of Alice to see what it was and deal with it and not run away at a million miles per hour. Thanks for the telling.