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Moving On Chapter 15
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Kristie: (hesitantly, staring longingly into Bettes eyes) Bette, Im sorry for disturbing you like this.. I thought I could do this. but I cant(tears trickled down her cheeks, Bette affectionately wiped them away with her thumb). I need you to come home with me now and talk to me babyI need to know whats going on here (waving her hand from Bette to Tina) .I need to know how you are feeling sweetie(her heart beating erratically) whether Im just wasting my time here?. Kristie couldnt continue, her voice cracking.
It was so unlike her to get thisINSECURE! Bette was undoubtedly the love of her life and ever since they were together as a couple, she was more than secure in their relationship. That was until Tina Kennard arrived back in town. What was it about Tina and Bettes interaction that made Kristie act like this? She needed to figure that out, she hated feeling.. like such a girl!!!
Bette could see that Kristie was visibly upset, (reassuringly) Of course youre not!! Look sweetie; just give me one minute ok? Ill tell Tina and grab Jack, then well go home alright baby.(smiling into Kristies eyes) and we can talk! giving Kristie a warm hug. Kristie hugged Bette back tightly, whispering, ok!
Bette called out, Hey Jacksweetie, come over to mommy! See whos here baby? Come and say hello to Krissy!!
Jack spotted Kristie and jumped off the swing, sprinting over, jumping into Kristies arms with the biggest grin. Jacks enthusiasm immediately put a smile on Kristies face, Well hello there little man, now thats the kind of greeting I like!!!!
Tina looked perplexingly at Bette, calling the doctor, Krissy to Jack. What is that all about? Krissy is not mommy? Tina thought; she couldnt help the hopeful smile that graced her lips.
Bette walked over to Tina, (politely and formally, so as to not make Kristie more upset) We will continue this later .if thats ok? (sympathetically) Im sorry, I know we were making progress.Well also need to work something out about Jack?.(slightly hesitantly) UmCan I call you?
Tina: Yeah ok Tina took out a pen and a scrap of paper, scribbling down her number for Bette, Or you can reach me at Shanes.
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Awww man! Cliffhanger! Come on please please please give us another one! Make Bette be honest about her love for Tina (sorry Kristie)
damn it another cliffhanger.
You have got to update again really soon or I’ll explode.
my dear mates….out hearts can’t take this….u must continue this tonight….please?…..i will beg if i have to….. **grins**
Is it possible for this story to get better and better chapter after chapter? Survey says…Yes. Freaking good Mates, more, more, more.
Oh come on! You can’t leave us sleeping with this cliffhanger in your heads? Sleep deprivation is not good for the body? Please……I am begging you! Thanks for posting…that chapter was the best!
You handled this really well. I’m so happy Tina has little Jack..
Dr. Hunter should be coming to town. Maybe thing will work out for her and Tina/ The only way that Bette will leave Kristie ,is for Kristie to leave. Dont see that happening thanks
Mates Honey how about I tape the tennis for you while you write and post how does that sound? Please another is needed A.S.A.P. So Let me know about the taping of the tennis
This story is simply getting better and better. An do enjoy the Australien open in tennins. It is afterall only 4 times a year there is a Grandslam. Made the best women win. Post soon
Great story, and each chapter just keeps us coming back for more. Thanks for moving it right along, for the most part. Tina is still Bette’s wife. She should look at it that way. So, if she doesn’t give Tina another chance, then she’s still going outside the relationship. Since, they never officially ended it. I know, just wishful thinking, but you got to give me credit for trying, right?! Please update soon, and keep the honesty going!
I don’t know who the Jerk is who is lowering the scores but that’s ridiculous especially on this story. Mates you’re doing an awesome job I love how you are telling this story please post again soon. I LOVE IT
Love your story and writing,you rock.
mates nice work as alaways… bust come on let bette confess her tru feelings now… :)
ok, bette is doing really good being honest, so let her being honest once more… it’s clear to kristie that bette still loves tina, and that the is such a strong connection that nothing, even 5 years had being able to broke it up, so… let’s bette being honest and tell kristie that some part of her wants tina
hmm.. i guess every writers here have mastered the art of leaving the readers cliffhangin’ eh? You sure did get me hooked. K.. looking forward to the next one.
Hi Mates, You sure know how to leave us hanging, brilliant chapter has always.
love this story mates,and i know how hard it is to read and watch the tennis(im in NSW) and read, let alone write! youve done good . and anyway its all a leisure thing ENJOY!!
OK I’ll be patient…but these cliffhangers are going to kill me! Awesome story!!!
SUPERB! Beautiful story…i love it.
Please let Bette be honest to Kristie about her feelings for Tina and the bye bye Kristie.Great story.
Hey, where’s the next chp?!? I’m getting withdrawal systoms over here :) I keep refreshing the page, waiting for the next update. I think i need professional help :P Seriously, great job!!
Jack has FOUR mommies – and TWO of them are doctors!
Oh man this is hard for Bette and what are she going to do to answer Kristie the question. Hope she willl find the right answer! Oh is that Dr. Hunter coming. Please post soon, thank you!