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Moving On Chapter 15
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God help me I love you Bette!!. I will love you forever. but we cant be together. I cant break-up your family, I cant!! Why would you even take the risk on me, on us, anyway?.you might not want me anymore?. We might not work anymore?. You went outside our marriage once. how will I know if you wouldnt do it again? Youre life with Kristie is simple and happy Thats what Jack needssimple and happy. its all about Jack now!!! Tina thought, *****, I wish you couldve told me why Bette?before we were unfortunately interrupted. I really need to know why?
Tina was feeling the beginnings of another migraine coming on, so she decided to head on back to Shanes, to take a much-needed nap.
Bette, Kristie and Jack arrived home about 30 minutes later. Bette got Jack cleaned up, from his adventure in the park and sat him down with his toys, Ok baby, mommy and Kristie need to talk for a little while, you play with your toys ok honey!! grinning at her over stimulated son.
Jack: (smiling back at his mom) Owkay Mommy every smile filled Bettes heart.
Bette walked into the kitchen and found Kristie sitting at the kitchen table, deep in thought, a sad expression on her face.
Bette walked over and sat in the chair next to her, taking Kristies hand into her own, (calmly) Ok baby whats all this about? What do you want me to talk to you about?
Kristie looked at Bette arduously, Bette I want to know what is going on with Tina Kennard. First I find out from Alice you were together for 7 years..7 years Bette and Id never heard of her.now your holding hands, looking at her, like you should only at me, and obviously deep in discussion about something mighty intense.. So I just want to know what youre feelingHow you feel about this Kennard woman and how you really feel about me Betteand I really need you to be honest too Bette.
Bette: (stunned, she never realized Kristies fears and concerns had progressed so far in such a short period of time) Wow!!!!!!!! You want to know a lot baby (smiling, trying to lighten the conversation just a little)why did you speak to Alice sweetie? Why didnt you just ask me?? Bette was a little hurt by that.
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Awww man! Cliffhanger! Come on please please please give us another one! Make Bette be honest about her love for Tina (sorry Kristie)
damn it another cliffhanger.
You have got to update again really soon or I’ll explode.
my dear mates….out hearts can’t take this….u must continue this tonight….please?…..i will beg if i have to….. **grins**
Is it possible for this story to get better and better chapter after chapter? Survey says…Yes. Freaking good Mates, more, more, more.
Oh come on! You can’t leave us sleeping with this cliffhanger in your heads? Sleep deprivation is not good for the body? Please……I am begging you! Thanks for posting…that chapter was the best!
You handled this really well. I’m so happy Tina has little Jack..
Dr. Hunter should be coming to town. Maybe thing will work out for her and Tina/ The only way that Bette will leave Kristie ,is for Kristie to leave. Dont see that happening thanks
Mates Honey how about I tape the tennis for you while you write and post how does that sound? Please another is needed A.S.A.P. So Let me know about the taping of the tennis
This story is simply getting better and better. An do enjoy the Australien open in tennins. It is afterall only 4 times a year there is a Grandslam. Made the best women win. Post soon
Great story, and each chapter just keeps us coming back for more. Thanks for moving it right along, for the most part. Tina is still Bette’s wife. She should look at it that way. So, if she doesn’t give Tina another chance, then she’s still going outside the relationship. Since, they never officially ended it. I know, just wishful thinking, but you got to give me credit for trying, right?! Please update soon, and keep the honesty going!
I don’t know who the Jerk is who is lowering the scores but that’s ridiculous especially on this story. Mates you’re doing an awesome job I love how you are telling this story please post again soon. I LOVE IT
Love your story and writing,you rock.
mates nice work as alaways… bust come on let bette confess her tru feelings now… :)
ok, bette is doing really good being honest, so let her being honest once more… it’s clear to kristie that bette still loves tina, and that the is such a strong connection that nothing, even 5 years had being able to broke it up, so… let’s bette being honest and tell kristie that some part of her wants tina
hmm.. i guess every writers here have mastered the art of leaving the readers cliffhangin’ eh? You sure did get me hooked. K.. looking forward to the next one.
Hi Mates, You sure know how to leave us hanging, brilliant chapter has always.
love this story mates,and i know how hard it is to read and watch the tennis(im in NSW) and read, let alone write! youve done good . and anyway its all a leisure thing ENJOY!!
OK I’ll be patient…but these cliffhangers are going to kill me! Awesome story!!!
SUPERB! Beautiful story…i love it.
Please let Bette be honest to Kristie about her feelings for Tina and the bye bye Kristie.Great story.
Hey, where’s the next chp?!? I’m getting withdrawal systoms over here :) I keep refreshing the page, waiting for the next update. I think i need professional help :P Seriously, great job!!
Jack has FOUR mommies – and TWO of them are doctors!
Oh man this is hard for Bette and what are she going to do to answer Kristie the question. Hope she willl find the right answer! Oh is that Dr. Hunter coming. Please post soon, thank you!