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Moving On Chapter 43
That sensual touch mixed with the feel of Tinas hardened nipples rubbing against her shirt had Bettes body involuntarily gasping, and as Bette lifted Tina out of her pyjama pants she felt her knees go weak and her balance became unsteady, resulting in her stumbling and almost bringing them both crashing to the floor.
Bette instinctively regained her balance, grabbing Tina tightly, guiding her safely back onto the bed. She looked suggestively into Tinas eyes, Youre going to pay for that Tee. You know what that does to me!!! bringing her lips to Tinas in a scorching kiss, while her hands gently explored Tina familiar yet new body.
Tina was now resting her back against the bed head rest, her naked and vulnerable body on fire, held prisoner by Bettes tender, arousing touch.
Tina didnt know how much more she could take, when Bette suddenly stopped what she was doing, desperate to feel Tinas bare skin against her own. She got up off their bed; gazing back at her beautiful wife, seeing the lustful look in Tinas eyes.
Tina: (groaning cheekily) Where do you think youre going babe?
Bette began to strip hurriedly, (sexily) Im not going anywhere. I want to feel closer to you baby.
Tina looked on mesmerised, (softly) Baby slow down, let me watch? I would love to watch you bare that ***** body of yours.
Bette took a deep breath and smiled wantonly at Tina. She began to strip slowly, deliberately, as Tinas eyes never wavered from Bettes or her highly inviting body, and in no time she was standing before Tina, clothe less and full of desire.
Tina grinned reaching out her hand to her wife. Bette took it, carefully crawling back up the bed, delicately kissing, caressing, and simply loving Tinas body. She methodically worked her way from Tinas toes, to her calves, to her thighs, Tina couldnt feel her touch but she could see what Bette was doing and with every kiss, every tender caress her body became more and more alive.
Bette opened up Tinas legs, breathing in the unique scent of her Tee, briefly brushing her nose over Tinas *****. Tina could feel Bettes breath, she could feel Bettes nose teasing her *****, that was the first sensation Tina felt, her body jolting as the desire coarsed through it.
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(69 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
Very nicely done…glad to see that they were able to overcome their trepidation about who makes the first move, as well as the ability to overcome Tina’s fear. (Nice, also, that Tina remains an active participant, so to speak, in this part of her life.) ‘grats on the award.
Mates, I havent read this chapter yet….but I just wanted to congradulate you on your award….you soooo deserve it…….keep em comin…….
Mates!!! congratulations for the award!!! I’m really proud of you… because in my opinion you deserve it… Love the chapter, well written as usual… can’t wait for the next post…
OH OH Oh I just can’t tell you how great this is. I am positively tingling myself. You have the two of them so good together thanks for posting early. Congrates on your award it is so so well earned.
That was well worth the wait, and very HOT!! I just reread the previous chapter this afternoon, and I was pleasantly surprised when I loged onto the site tonight. Thank you, and the award was well deserved!!!
Woo, nice. I totally love this story. More!
Woo, nice. I totally love this story. More!
Mates congrats on your well deserved award. As I read this installment I found myself wiping beads of perspiration from my brow. This was so sensual, loving and spicy hot. Your writing is always on target. Thank you for everything and most importantly, sharing your diverse talents with us.
Congratulations on your ff award. It is well deserved. And this story…..whoa so hot and amazing. thank you for writing and please continue.
Thanks for another amazing chapter. Glad to see these two moving forward and reconnecting. Can’t wait for the next one!
Congratulations on your very well deserved honour! You’re the tops Mate!
Great chapter here. Very hot!
Wonderful chapter – and congrats on the award – thanks for giving us all your fabulous stories.
Fantastic, as always. Congrats on the award. Keep up the great work.
“Sexual healing..is good for me.. sexual.. healing baby.. is good for..” That love making will bring all those feeling body and soul back! 10 stars for you :)
Congrats on the award!!! Loved this chapter!!!
WOW! That was so Hot I love it Mates Thank you I can really keep up to catch up to comment I still alot to read for all fanfic writer and the Story it’s really make my mind crazy but I really like your Story and also Congrats on the Award your DESERVED it.
Hey Mates congratulation on your award, your story is amazing and you deserved. This chapter is amazing and beautiful, I feel so bad for Tina and her fear. I hope someday soon the miracle will come to her and help her to able to walking again and her love to Bette will be stronger and forever. Love it post soon, thank you! 5 stars!
mates, the way you have taken us thru this wonderful story, has been great You so deserved the award. Congrats
i love this story…i have been hooked from the very brginning…
congrats on the award
Mates, this was great. Sorry, again, for not commenting recently. Just been busy. Sometimes when I’m reading trying to catch up, I just want to get to the next chapter, and I don’t comment. But, I’m here, I always read your updates, on all your stories. If days have gone by, I feel you won’t see my comments on the past chapters, anyway. But, just know that this is great. Obviously, I’m not the only one that thinks so. Congrats, on the award. This is a great story. Looking forward to that mindblowing, earthshaking, limbs awakening (is there such a thing?! (smile)) sex, between these two. You just gotta love ’em. Awaiting your next installment.
AWESOME CHAPTER..CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWARD..PLEASE POST SOON
Wow I finally caught up with all the chapters. I love this story, you’ve had me drawn in since the beginning! Do continue!
no words,… congratulations once more
Omg I can’t believe I missed this chapter, thank god someone told me you updated!! lol I’m sorry haven’t updated in a while but i’m hoping to change that this weekend =0) Thanx for another amazing update… i’m off for a cold shower ;)Oh and you really deserved the award, both your stories are AMAZING and i always do my *happy dance* when i see an update =0)
Awwwwww……i just read this one. It’s so beautiful. And your last paragraph is just so touching. Okay…moving on to the next one.
Hey Mates…Ahhh..that was just so Tender..and so full of love..it actually felt like i was transported to their bedroom…u so rock babe… : ) and before i forget..
*CONGRATULATIONS* on the award…ur the best!!!!
EXCELLENT! I love your story mates so so so much! It is the only reason I ever posted anything on here. Thanku and welldone, you deserve the award so bloody much its unbelievable. Take care and I will drop you a line asap. k xx
Congrats Mate! I loved the chapter.
Mates, after seeing you won the award I decided to read this story from the start and it’s clear why you won it. It is exceptionally well written and has the reader experiencing a range of emotions. I managed to finish (well up to this chapter) before I went to be last night, this morning I woke with puffy eyes from all the crying I did reading your story. Like others I will be constantly checking for updates. Your award was well deserved.
i have been hanging for this and it was absolutely wonderful.im so glad you recieved an award.. there is justice on this site,, cheers to you matey and dont get any ideas of hanging up ..fifty more chapters at least ok
An award well deserved! Love this story.
First of all Mates congratulation on the award…you deserve it girl with all you cliffhangers and surprises you have given us in this story.
This story is just getting better and better as you go along. Keep up the good work Mates. Post soon
MATES! Congrats on your well-deserved award! This chapter was just what I was waiting for! Thank You and Please post again soon!
Congratulations on the award i’m so happy for you well done..
This chapter was fantastic B&T finally reconnecting with each other very nice…
Have a nice weekend.
Mates, congrats on your award!! It’s truly well deserved.
This was an awesome chapter. I’m so happy that Bette and Tina were finally able to reconnect. Thanks!
I’m a bit slow at catching up with your story Mates. And i must tell u, i was with u every word! This was amazing! Absolutely amazing! Thank u.. and a well deserved congratulations for the award!!!
I just wanted to let you know that you are a very gifted person to beable to write such beautiful stories, and I hope you continue. Flames of passion was the very first story I read. I look for new chapters of yours everytime i get on here. Keep up the good work.
Mates,
Hope all is well and you will be updating SOON!!!!
this is a wonderful story please continue.
thanks
Please Mates, this story is beautiful,continue and post an update soon.Please