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Moving On Chapter 43
Tina moaned softly, God babe.I can feel that!
Bette looked up momentarily meeting with her lovers intense stare, (whispering hoarsely) Does it feel good Tee?
Tina: MmmmHmmmm..keep going Bette, please keep going!
Bette moved on, wanting to worship Tinas body, to show her the unquestionable love she had for her, before she took Tina over that edge. She began to kiss the sensitive area between Tinas stomach and her mound; gently licking the expanse of bare skin that she knew would elicit a longing, craving from her wife.
Tinas body shivered in response as she tried to pull herself up, her need for release increasing every second; attempting to hint where she wanted Bette to worship next.
Tina pleaded, (a hint of frustration evident) Babe, please!
Bette: Be patient baby, let me love you!
Tina knew that determined tone in Bettes voice and resigned to her request, relaxing back onto the headboard, watching intently as her ***** wife loved her.
Bette continue on her journey stopping fleetingly at Tinas pert, rounded *****, teasing her tongue around the hardened nipples, one at a time, gently sucking them into her eager mouth, before releasing them just as quickly.
She moved her heated body between Tinas legs feeling her wifes desire rubbing against her thigh and it drove Bette mad. Moving swiftly back up to Tinas lips, she bought their mouths crashing together in a passionate frenzied kiss, her hands wandering, her mind beginning to lose all self-control as her desire for the woman in front of her took over.
Bettes hand steadily snaked down Tinas body, her fingers gliding over Tinas engrossed ***** before entering her moist core with two fingers, starting a slow steady rhythm. Tina initially gasped at the contact, (breathlessly) God babe, that feels so good
Tina dizzily broke away from their scorching lip lock, searching Bettes eyes, seeing her eyes clouded with the incredible lust and want that she was trying to contain.
The moment she saw Bette holding back, trying to make it all about Tina, trying to (momentarily at least) deny her own wants and needs, Tina decided she wanted to make this all about both of them, and she didnt want to climax alone. She quickly guided her hand down to Bettes lips, opening them up, feeling the wetness seep onto her fingers as she entered Bettes wet, hot core with two fingers as well, matching the rhythm set by her wife.
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(69 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
Very nicely done…glad to see that they were able to overcome their trepidation about who makes the first move, as well as the ability to overcome Tina’s fear. (Nice, also, that Tina remains an active participant, so to speak, in this part of her life.) ‘grats on the award.
Mates, I havent read this chapter yet….but I just wanted to congradulate you on your award….you soooo deserve it…….keep em comin…….
Mates!!! congratulations for the award!!! I’m really proud of you… because in my opinion you deserve it… Love the chapter, well written as usual… can’t wait for the next post…
OH OH Oh I just can’t tell you how great this is. I am positively tingling myself. You have the two of them so good together thanks for posting early. Congrates on your award it is so so well earned.
That was well worth the wait, and very HOT!! I just reread the previous chapter this afternoon, and I was pleasantly surprised when I loged onto the site tonight. Thank you, and the award was well deserved!!!
Woo, nice. I totally love this story. More!
Woo, nice. I totally love this story. More!
Mates congrats on your well deserved award. As I read this installment I found myself wiping beads of perspiration from my brow. This was so sensual, loving and spicy hot. Your writing is always on target. Thank you for everything and most importantly, sharing your diverse talents with us.
Congratulations on your ff award. It is well deserved. And this story…..whoa so hot and amazing. thank you for writing and please continue.
Thanks for another amazing chapter. Glad to see these two moving forward and reconnecting. Can’t wait for the next one!
Congratulations on your very well deserved honour! You’re the tops Mate!
Great chapter here. Very hot!
Wonderful chapter – and congrats on the award – thanks for giving us all your fabulous stories.
Fantastic, as always. Congrats on the award. Keep up the great work.
“Sexual healing..is good for me.. sexual.. healing baby.. is good for..” That love making will bring all those feeling body and soul back! 10 stars for you :)
Congrats on the award!!! Loved this chapter!!!
WOW! That was so Hot I love it Mates Thank you I can really keep up to catch up to comment I still alot to read for all fanfic writer and the Story it’s really make my mind crazy but I really like your Story and also Congrats on the Award your DESERVED it.
Hey Mates congratulation on your award, your story is amazing and you deserved. This chapter is amazing and beautiful, I feel so bad for Tina and her fear. I hope someday soon the miracle will come to her and help her to able to walking again and her love to Bette will be stronger and forever. Love it post soon, thank you! 5 stars!
mates, the way you have taken us thru this wonderful story, has been great You so deserved the award. Congrats
i love this story…i have been hooked from the very brginning…
congrats on the award
Mates, this was great. Sorry, again, for not commenting recently. Just been busy. Sometimes when I’m reading trying to catch up, I just want to get to the next chapter, and I don’t comment. But, I’m here, I always read your updates, on all your stories. If days have gone by, I feel you won’t see my comments on the past chapters, anyway. But, just know that this is great. Obviously, I’m not the only one that thinks so. Congrats, on the award. This is a great story. Looking forward to that mindblowing, earthshaking, limbs awakening (is there such a thing?! (smile)) sex, between these two. You just gotta love ’em. Awaiting your next installment.
AWESOME CHAPTER..CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWARD..PLEASE POST SOON
Wow I finally caught up with all the chapters. I love this story, you’ve had me drawn in since the beginning! Do continue!
no words,… congratulations once more
Omg I can’t believe I missed this chapter, thank god someone told me you updated!! lol I’m sorry haven’t updated in a while but i’m hoping to change that this weekend =0) Thanx for another amazing update… i’m off for a cold shower ;)Oh and you really deserved the award, both your stories are AMAZING and i always do my *happy dance* when i see an update =0)
Awwwwww……i just read this one. It’s so beautiful. And your last paragraph is just so touching. Okay…moving on to the next one.
Hey Mates…Ahhh..that was just so Tender..and so full of love..it actually felt like i was transported to their bedroom…u so rock babe… : ) and before i forget..
*CONGRATULATIONS* on the award…ur the best!!!!
EXCELLENT! I love your story mates so so so much! It is the only reason I ever posted anything on here. Thanku and welldone, you deserve the award so bloody much its unbelievable. Take care and I will drop you a line asap. k xx
Congrats Mate! I loved the chapter.
Mates, after seeing you won the award I decided to read this story from the start and it’s clear why you won it. It is exceptionally well written and has the reader experiencing a range of emotions. I managed to finish (well up to this chapter) before I went to be last night, this morning I woke with puffy eyes from all the crying I did reading your story. Like others I will be constantly checking for updates. Your award was well deserved.
i have been hanging for this and it was absolutely wonderful.im so glad you recieved an award.. there is justice on this site,, cheers to you matey and dont get any ideas of hanging up ..fifty more chapters at least ok
An award well deserved! Love this story.
First of all Mates congratulation on the award…you deserve it girl with all you cliffhangers and surprises you have given us in this story.
This story is just getting better and better as you go along. Keep up the good work Mates. Post soon
MATES! Congrats on your well-deserved award! This chapter was just what I was waiting for! Thank You and Please post again soon!
Congratulations on the award i’m so happy for you well done..
This chapter was fantastic B&T finally reconnecting with each other very nice…
Have a nice weekend.
Mates, congrats on your award!! It’s truly well deserved.
This was an awesome chapter. I’m so happy that Bette and Tina were finally able to reconnect. Thanks!
I’m a bit slow at catching up with your story Mates. And i must tell u, i was with u every word! This was amazing! Absolutely amazing! Thank u.. and a well deserved congratulations for the award!!!
I just wanted to let you know that you are a very gifted person to beable to write such beautiful stories, and I hope you continue. Flames of passion was the very first story I read. I look for new chapters of yours everytime i get on here. Keep up the good work.
Mates,
Hope all is well and you will be updating SOON!!!!
this is a wonderful story please continue.
thanks
Please Mates, this story is beautiful,continue and post an update soon.Please