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    My Captor -Ch2

    Story written on May 6, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    Thank you, I need you.

    Bobby: Get her.

    The three undercover police officers detained Carmen, but not before she put on a fight. They were bruised and scratched all over. Carmen wasn’t really trained, but a cornered

    mouse could put up a fight and that’s what she did. The police were all shocked to see her throwing fists and kicks crazily. Finally, they pushed her up against the wall.

    Bobby: Behave and this can all be painless. If you don’t I’ll make sure you’re not going to like it tonight. I’ll make you scream.

    Shane was running by she almost missed them. Skidding to a stop she had to retrace her steps. She nearly burst out laughing seeing Bobby. She recognized Tidwell too. The guy

    must’ve thought all thugs had chains or something.

    Shane: Get your hands off her.

    All of them turned their heads to look at the scrawny raven haired girl. Bobby’s face who was turned towards Shane gave her a wink and a quick smile. This was going to be fun. 

    Bobby: Or else?

    Shane: I’m gonna kick your ass.

    Bobby held onto Carmen as the three guys charged at Shane. Shane cracked her knuckles and breathed out. Their bodies crashing up against the walls. Shane even got to flip Tidwell

    into the trashcan. The guys hadn’t gone easy on Shane, instead they seriously nearly took her head off with on of their little knife. Bobby knew it was his turn. He let go of

    Carmen and rushed at Shane. He could only land one hard blow on Shane before being knocked unconcious by her.

    Shane’s thought: Bobby, you gotta lay off the donuts. There aren’t any left when I get to work, this is karma.

    Shane looked up at Carmen. Green met brown. Carmen’s beauty left Shane speechless, she wasn’t going to say anything to begin with. Shane turned to leave hoping she could avoid

    getting her ass kicked by a girl. A pretty girl.

    Carmen: Wait.

    Shane’s thought: To stop and get ass kicked now or get ass kicked later by Bette. That is the question.

    Shane didn’t turn around. She was still thinking intently and didn’t notice Carmen approaching. Pretty girls did that to her. Make her all confused.

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    4. sweet very sweet. I am already worrying about what will happen when Carmen will discover why Shane is there? Just hope a miracle will happen and they will work things tho. PPVS

    5. Hah, Bobby as a thug. . . hilarious. XD He’s awesome. I like that he and Tidwell (well, mostly Bobby) made an appearance. I loved watching Life. So bummed out about it getting cancelled. :( Anyway, I just finished reading chapters one and two and I’m really liking this story so far. Shane’s really trying to tell herself that she’s doing it for the job, eh? I love that Carmen kicks her bodyguards’ asses, and that she reamed the two bodyguards for not being there to save her when she was the one who ditched them. Heheh.

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