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My Captor -Ch2
Carmen: What the fuck do you think you’re doing? You just beat up the person who got me out of trouble. Where were you two? Sleeping together?
The two bodyguards had their head down.
Carmen helped Shane up. She placed her hand around Shane’s waist and threw Shane’s arm around her neck.
Carmen: Either get out of the way or open the car door.
The two obliged quietly. Carmen drove quickly back home.
Shane’s thought: Easier than I thought.
She smirked a little. Carmen caught it.
Carmen: What’s with the smile?
Shane: I’m being taken home by a sexy girl. Why not be happy?
Carmen: Because you got the living day lights kicked out of you.
Shane: It’s worth it.
Carmen: Are you always like this?
Shane: No, only towards attractive girls like you.
Carmen rolled her eyes but couldn’t help smiling at Shane’s comment.
Carmen: I’m Carmen. You?
Shane: Shane. I just got here from New York.
Carmen: I see. What did you do there?
Shane: I was a bodyguard.
Carmen frowned.
Carmen: I hate bodyguards.
Shane: You like me.
Carmen: Who said I liked you?
Shane: Because you’re talking to me after I saved you. Because you yelled at those poor guys back there. Because I’m here in this car with you and your heart is beating at a
faster pace than normal and you’re sweating on a cold day.
Carmen gripped the steering wheel a bit tighter.
Carmen: So what if my heart is beating a bit faster. It doesn’t mean it’s because of you.
Carmen lied. Shane intrigued her. Her every move, every word. Carmen had seen many kinds of people in her life. But not someone like Shane. She captivated her, mesmerized her
even. Carmen slowed her car in front of some black iron gates. Men dressed in black opened the door for her and she drove in. Shane watched and remembered where Carmen was driving
carefully. If she needed to make a swift escape at least she knew where to run. They stopped in front of the house, well more like mansion. It was definately a Victorian styled
mansion. Again, men in black suits came and opened the door for them and took Carmen’s bags.
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(26 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
excellent chap!!!!!!!
Loving this!
ahhhh que dulce capÃtulo… sigue escribiendo!!!
sweet very sweet. I am already worrying about what will happen when Carmen will discover why Shane is there? Just hope a miracle will happen and they will work things tho. PPVS
Hah, Bobby as a thug. . . hilarious. XD He’s awesome. I like that he and Tidwell (well, mostly Bobby) made an appearance. I loved watching Life. So bummed out about it getting cancelled. :( Anyway, I just finished reading chapters one and two and I’m really liking this story so far. Shane’s really trying to tell herself that she’s doing it for the job, eh? I love that Carmen kicks her bodyguards’ asses, and that she reamed the two bodyguards for not being there to save her when she was the one who ditched them. Heheh.