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My Captor -Ch4
Carmen: Get away from me!
Shane: Can’t, you’re my job.
Shane kneeled down in front of Carmen to retrieve the keys.
Shane: Scoot over or else I’m going to sit on you.
Carmen: What?
Shane: I’m going to drive you home.
Carmen: I don’t want to go home.
Shane sighed.
Shane: Where do you want to go?
Carmen was silent. She was still angry at Shane. She didn’t want Shane being so open with them and flirting. Shane got in the passenger seat.
Shane: I’m not going to let you drive. So either let me drive or we’ll sit here forever.
Carmen hit the button that raised the roof of the car. All in one motion, she got over the paking break and the shift and onto Shane’s lap. She pulled the lever on the side and the chair fell backwards.
Shane: So I guess we’re staying?
Carmen kissed Shane sloppily to shut her up. Her mind was buzzed but she knew what she wanted. She wanted Shane. Carmen pulled Shane’s tie off and threw it in the back of the car. She pulled open the vest and kissed Shane roughly. Shane pulled away. She knew Carmen wasn’t in her right mind. Even though her mind and body wanted Carmen, she couldn’t. It was a job. She couldn’t get caught up in it. Carmen started pounding her fists on her.
Carmen: Why?! Why are you like this?!
Shane caught her small fists in her hand. She held Carmen in place.
Shane: Because we just can’t be. I know you like me. But we just can’t.
Carmen got her hand free and slapped Shane across the face. The slap stung her face but something else hurt. Shane wouldn’t believe what she felt. She hadn’t felt it for so long.
Carmen: You knew but you just had to play with me!
Shane needed to shut her up before other people started noticing. It was a soft kiss. Slow. Shane held Carmen away from her, just making Carmen even more frustrated. She wanted to feel her skin on hers. She wanted to keep Shane to herself, but Shane broke away.
Carmen: I want you.
Shane: I don’t do relationships.
Carmen opened the car door and got out of the car. Shane pulled the seat back up. She exited with Carmen.
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(27 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
gunna be hell to pay with shane leaving a drunk carm alone
Gangster’s daughter is always ch armed and a bodygaurd is in love with her? Perfect drama!! I looooove this chap. Please keep going.
I like the flow of the story so far. Keep it coming.
ugh! i am soooooo dissapointed with this chapter! i can’t believe it! I am sooooo very dissapointed that i just cannot wait for more! so, in order to put an end to my dissapointment, i’d say another update would do just fine :P . . . thanks for the shout out! and thanks for taking an interest into my fic. i am totally hooked to this story! i love the way Carmen is written and also Shane. So super interesting! I love this fic… it’s on my top 10 favorite fics! can’t wait to read more! oh… one quick thing: I was super excited when i saw an update cuz i wasn’t expecting one ’til next week or something. sooo, yay for you… and me too! haha! and no need to rush back after the ball, wouldn’t want you to get hurt. we need you well and uninjured so we can get updates for sure! lol! great job again ‘smexysharmen’! PPVS! ya know i love it!
ugh! i am soooooo dissapointed with this chapter! i can’t believe it! I am sooooo very dissapointed that i just cannot wait for more! so, in order to put an end to my dissapointment, i’d say another update would do just fine :P . . . thanks for the shout out! and thanks for taking an interest into my fic. i am totally hooked to this story! i love the way Carmen is written and also Shane. So super interesting! I love this fic… it’s on my top 10 favorite fics! can’t wait to read more! oh… one quick thing: I was super excited when i saw an update cuz i wasn’t expecting one ’til next week or something. sooo, yay for you… and me too! haha! and no need to rush back after the ball, wouldn’t want you to get hurt. we need you well and uninjured so we can get updates for sure! lol! great job again ‘smexysharmen’! PPVS! ya know i love it!