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My Captor- Chapter 23
Shane chuckled. She didn’t want Carmen to catch her agreeing with Alice but too late.
Alice: See, Shaney agrees.
Shane quickly put on a straight face just in time before Carmen to turn around.
Carmen: Not you too Shane.
Shane: No comment.
She took a sip of her coffee to wake herself up.
Alice: So how’s life with Shane? Hot steamy se-
It was Carmen’s turn to blush and Shane nearly choked on her coffee.
Carmen: Alice!
Coffee dribbled out the corner of Shane’s lips and she coughed nonstop. Carmen turned her attention towards Shane.
Carmen: Babe, you okay? Alice, look what you did!
Alice was laughing hysterically off to the side.
Alice: Totally not my fault. I’m going back to work love birds.
Carmen took a napkin and wiped off the coffee from the corner of Shane’s lips.
Shane: She’s quite a piece of work.
Carmen: Yeah, she has a good heart.
Shane: That’s good.
Shane coughed a little before finally the itch had gone away.
Carmen: Thank goodness you didn’t choke to death.
Shane: She said you came here often?
Carmen: Not often, but I knew her so I guess? I don’t know. Just sometimes?
Shane: What do you like about here?
Carmen: For one, this café turns into a nightclub at night.
Shane: Owned by your dad?
Carmen: Actually no, he only has a part of the rights to it. Kit, has most of the rights.
Shane: So you come here to party a lot?
Carmen: I deejay here when I have some free time.
Shane: I never knew that.
Carmen: Well there is a lot of things you don’t know about me.
Shane: I bet there is.
Carmen smiled sweetly at Shane. Shane watched her eat her breakfast of a bowl of healthy cereal and orange juice. There were so many things she still hasn’t gotten to know about Carmen yet. Maybe it was time to let go of all the police stuff like Carmen had wanted. Carmen would be safer this way, and Shane wouldn’t have to worry about Carmen remembering any of the horrible incidents that wiped out her memory and caused her to have nightmares.
Carmen: What are you thinking about?
Shane: Nothing. Just how beautiful you are.
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(21 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
whew shane is going to give up everything for carm..love will do that to you
Lovin this!
I can’t wait either.I am unhappy there is only some chapters to the end but I am also eager to know what had happended to Carmen!!
Wow! Shane’s willing to give up her life as a cop for Carmen. Now, that’s dedication.