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    My Captor- Chapter 27

    Story written on July 15, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    I’m Right Here

     

    Carmen: Let her go Carlos, I’ll stay here with you. Just let her go.

     

    Carlos: The hell I would do that!

    Carmen: Why would you betray my dad like this? Carlos! Let her go!

     

    Carlos: He always did what was best for you. He never cared about me! He used me as his dog!

     

    Carmen: He treated you like a son!

     

    Carlos: Would a son have to go into enemy territory and fight for his life like dogs would? Would he have let you be cooped up in a room no smaller than a dog crate?

     

    Carlos shook with anger. Cezar had used him all those years. All the dirty jobs he did. Cezar always acted like he cared, but never once was he exempted from going on some dirty deal. Unlike Carmen, his precious daughter, who didn’t have to lift a finger.

     

    Carlos: And you. I loved you all my life, but you fucking fall for a girl! What can she give you that I can’t?

     

    Shane and Carmen looked into each other’s eyes. Then Carmen answered his question without hesitation.

     

    Carmen: She gives me warmth and kindness when I need it most. And knows when I need to be held and pampered. Knows when I want to be left alone. She loves me and adores me unlike no other. Her gaze bathes me in adoration. She wants to get to know who I am and isn’t after me like a piece of meat or property or a way to gain power. She loves me for me along with all my mistakes and flaws. And I love her. That’s what you can’t give me, love.

     

    Shane smiled at Carmen. Their eyes did the talking. Shane wiped away Carmen’s tears with her hand.

     

    Carlos: Don’t touch her! I hate you!

     

    The gun went off. Smoke came out of the nozzle of Carlos’ gun.

     

    Carmen: Shane!

     

    Shane: I’m fine…

     

    Carlos was an expert marksman. His bullet grazed Shane’s shoulder.

     

    Carlos: Get away from her or I’ll aim next time.

     

    Shane cracked a crooked smile.

     

    Shane: You useless piece of shit. You can’t even fight like a man.

     

    Shane placed the gun down on the floor next to Carmen.

     

    Carmen: Shane.

     

    Shane smiled at her. She took off her leather jacket and placed it around Carmen’s shoulder.

     

    Shane: Here, it’s cold in here.

     

    Carmen: Shane.

     

    Shane leaned her forehead into Carmen’s and closed her eyes.

     

    Shane: Just cheer me on in your heart.

     

    Carmen: No, Shane. Get out of here. Please.

     

    Shane opened her eyes and took the blindfold in her hands.

     

    Carmen: No! Shane!

     

    Shane: Shhh. It’s okay. I can’t have you see this part, but I’ll be okay.

     

    Carmen’s eyes pleaded for Shane to stop. Shane’s calm demeanor didn’t put Carmen’s mind to rest at all. Shane tied the back and kissed Carmen on her head.

     

    Shane: I’m right here.

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    1. But Cherie was drunk, wasn’t she? Shane’s plan was to get her drunk then tire her out. But couldn’t she get her drunk then kick her ass? Well, what’s done is done. And now we have Carlos to worry about. I hope Shane kicks his ass. And how helpless Carmen must feel now that Shane has blindfolded her again. :(

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