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    My Captor- Chapter 30

     

    Shane: I love this type of cake. It got a present inside. A sexy present.

     

    They girls partied all afternoon and night until they were stuff and sleepy. Carmen washed up at the Planet and they raced home. Carmen in her car and Shane on her bike.

     

    Shane crashed into the house to find Carmen sitting there in her oversized dress shirt.

     

    Shane: You nearly ran me into a light pole!

     

    Carmen curled her finger telling Shane to come over there.

     

    Shane: You’re totally going to pay for that Ms. McCutcheon.

     

    Carmen: I like the sound of that.

     

    Shane: Get used to it, cause I’m never letting you go.

     

    Shane climbed onto of Carmen and started to kiss her. Each kiss leaving a hot path down Carmen’s body. But she wanted to see Shane’s eyes. The same eyes that captured her heart.

     

    Carmen: Babe… Come here.

     

    Shane went back up and kissed her around her neck. Shane pulled the button shirt off of her with urgency and Carmen striped her of her shirt too. Shane’s hand pulled down the lacy thong Carmen had just got on before Shane came back home. Carmen could feel her body burning. Carmen ran her tongue over Shane’s teeth taunting her. She unzipped Shane’s jeans and pushed them off her legs. Carmen’s hands roamed over Shane’s defined abs and then slid her hand into Shane’s gray briefs. Shane’s breath got caught in her throat. She let out a moan feeling Carmen’s finger working her. Shane did the honor of giving Carmen the same great treatment by doing the same.

     

    Shane: Fuck…

     

    Shane was shivering under Carmen’s touch who was teasing her slowly. As retaliation, Shane did it even slower.

     

    Carmen: You’re… evil.

     

    Shane: Learned it all from you.

     

    Their breathes were ragged and they pumped faster into each other’s body. A thin film of sweat covered their body as they went faster and faster.

     

    Shane: I’m coming.

     

    Carmen: Me… me too.

     

    They both peaked together and Shane fell on top of Carmen exhausted. Shane wasn’t down for long. She kissed Carmen and initiated the start of round two.

    Shane showed Carmen a night to remember. They were both exhausted by morning. Carmen cuddled into Shane as the sun’s early rays peeked into their room through the curtains. Carmen’s hand was draped over Shane’s body and she was resting with her head on Shane’s shoulder.

     

    Shane: From the first day I met you, something clicked in me. I voluntarily became captured by you.

     

    Carmen: You did?

     

    She said groggily. Shane kissed her forehead.

     

    Shane: Yes my captor.

     

    They snuggled warmly into each other’s arms loving the moment. And wishing it could last like this forever.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    End

     

    The sequel will tie up loose end and there’s going to be a wedding! :D I hope :] hehehe. Had to write closing words here because I didn’t want to spoil the surprise proposal. But please look forward to the sequel! It will be here soon! Like super soon! And don’t worry; Cherrie Jaffe will be addressed in the sequel. And Carmen will talk to Shane about seeing her mom and Shay. It’ll all be there. :]

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    1. awesome chaps!!! holy hell waiting for carm to wake up and the gang should have known what overprotecive shane would do, heck of a surpirse….can’t wait for the sequal

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