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My Captor- Chapter 30
After a month, Cezar was let out of jail because there wasn’t enough evidence against him to press charges. Bette had a hand in that one making some pretty good papers disappear. Cezar was happy to see his daughter and accepted the fact that Shane would most likely become his daughter in law. Carlos was definitely not living with them any more. Cezar kicked him out the day he came back from the hospital, but gave him some money for him to start over again. Jenny departed to New York saying she couldn’t stand seeing the two love birds cuddling up in front of her. She promised to come back ever few weeks to hang out with everyone. Dana and Alice hooked up after falling head over heels for each other. Bette and Tina are more open with their relationship. They’re not hiding it anymore at least. Bobby and Tidwell frequent the Planet trying to court Kit. It was hilarious to watch. Shane and Carmen were in love more than ever. They’re always seen cuddling in some quiet corner living in their own little world. Shane still got to keep her job as a detective; she just wouldn’t be working on cases that were connected to the Morales family. Carmen was DJing some nights when she had free time. Otherwise Shane made her stay home and rest.
Carmen: I can go out you know. The doctor said so.
Shane: I didn’t hear him.
Carmen: Shane you’re being unfair!
Shane: It’s not called being unfair, it’s calling being safe.
Carmen pouted and crossed her arms.
Carmen: I’m just going to hang out with Dana and Alice at the Planet. Nothing can happen to me.
Shane: Alice is already a handful for Dana, so she won’t be able to keep an eye on you.
Carmen: Fine, then you come with me.
Shane: You know I have to get some paperwork done.
Carmen: Please, we haven’t gone out all week.
Shane: But you still had fun.
Shane gave her a sexy smile referring to their adventures together around the house.
Carmen: I still need to go out you know. I’m going whether or not you want me to.
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awesome chaps!!! holy hell waiting for carm to wake up and the gang should have known what overprotecive shane would do, heck of a surpirse….can’t wait for the sequal
YESSSSSSS!!!!!Great job!!!
fantastic fic…u had me rite from the beginnin and i’m glad it turned out this way!!!!