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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10 THE COME BACK
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Tasha: “Immediately ma’am”
The rumble and shaking around the ship was unbearable, a strong force was pulling them to the ground, Louise was praying ‘Tina, baby, please be safe…, oh my God…, we have to make it, we have…, we must’. Tasha was doing everything possible, but nothing was working.
Tasha: “Louise, is not responding”
Louise went to the control; she was asking herself, ’what is keeping us here…? is it like a force that is making us stay on the ground…? like a protective force…? whatever it is; perhaps, not all the portals are closed’; Louise thinks quickly and comes back to the htabs and using Tina’s program to locate magnetic fields, she started searching…, and there it was, a third magnetic field on the sea, on the coast of old LA, in the place where Dina, the former wife of her fiancé Sharon died six years ago. In Louise’s mind all the pieces of the puzzle fit; the place of origin and propagation of the portals, vortices, the big spot, the ’nest’ through which they enter to our world is there at shore; while Louise is thinking, she directed the target to that place and uses Maxine’s program to destroy it; immediately a big wave starts forming in the ocean.
Louise: “try again Tasha, NOW…! COME ON, DO IT…!”
The demoralized cadet is surprised by the strong orders from Louise and starts quickly the vertical takeoff, the ship begins ascending at very high speed, just at the same moment the ground below the vessel starts sinking and as the transport moves up; a large explosion starts as trying to chase the fleeing ship, which is already far above and free from any damage.
Tasha: “GREAT…, LOUISE…, WE DID IT, WE ARE FREE”
Louise: “yes Tasha we made it, I’m proud of you”
The vessel is now in the upper part of the atmosphere.
Louise: “which is our position, Tasha?”
Tasha: “we are at 74 Km above ground (~45 miles) on the border of the mesosphere and the thermosphere…, where do you want us to stay?”
Louise: “take us to the thermosphere and we’ll see what is happening down on the earth…; do we have satellite signal?”
Tasha: “… yes, and it’s better than before there is not interference”
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Ah man, you can’t stop here! You tease!
A fantastic update! And i am happy that Louise and Tasha made a safe landing. I knew Tasha is a good girl and is on Louise side.
Being catched twice by Louise, poor Bette and Tina, but she is happy that they are a couple.
Update when ever you are able, i will wait patiently!
Hi Bibi:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I had a little bit of overload work in my job, so I wanted to have a little bit of fun, I was afraid that it could be boring; but telling the truth I really want to post more frequently because the chapters are making a long-line in my brain and they want to be released asap.
Thank you again.
P
Enjoyed it. Glad they got home safe. Thanks
Hi wkm:
I’m glad you liked the chapter, I hope to update soon. Thanks for reading and commenting,
P
Hi proteonomics,
Thank you for this interesting chapter, looking for your new update soon!
Hi laileng36
Thank you for reading, I will be posting in the next two days.
P
Wow! finally managed to read the tenth chapter!
The melody of a couple is essential for the relationship to be right, and
Bette and Tina reached this level. I believe that most, if not all, people who start a relationship intended to something close to perfection.
This strong family bond that Bette and Tina have with Louise, it’s because he created a
very large family affective environment with them. And being an atmosphere of affection and friendship makes us safer, motivated and felizes.Eu have this link with
my family and that’s wonderful.
And I read that the scientist Stephen Hawking published a new theory about black, very interesting holes.
My friend has to sleep, it’s too late, and tomorrow have a medical examination.
entire universe.
Forgive my English, it took nearly forty minutes to write and makes compreencível my comment.
“Love ,” says science is nothing more than a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain.
Hi my friend:
I agree with you about family, congratulations for your family. Stephen Hawking came into reason changing his old point of view about black holes (~1970s) which proposed black holes will destroy information (like something just disappear or loses its individuality) but in 2004 he modified his theory accepting that information won’t be lost in a black hole, which by the way gives support to the existence of wormholes and white holes (I will use this in chapter 12 where Tina and Buckley will argue about it). And my friend ‘Love’ may be, as some scientists say ‘a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain’, but we are not only brain and each of us is different, and reactions are different depending of the composition of your body, the surrounding environment and a very big amount of factors, finally we could even be just a hologram (or like in the movie THE MATRIX) or as Calderon de la Barca said in “la vida es sueño” “Life is a dream”
¿Qué es la vida? Un frenesí.
¿Qué es la vida? Una ilusión,
una sombra, una ficción,
y el mayor bien es pequeño.
¡Que toda la vida es sueño,
y los sueños, sueños son!
or in english:
What is life? A frenzy.
What is life? An illusion,
A shadow, a fiction,
And the greatest good is small;
For all of life is a dream,
And dreams, are only dreams.
My dear friend, thanks for reading and commenting, you’re uma muito agradável amiga.
Bear hug