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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10 THE COME BACK
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Louise: “Fine, we will wait here for a little while and early in the morning we will inspect the damage down earth”
New Pasadena, 11:30 p.m Thursday, February 17, 2056. Arroyo Park Cyber observatory border with Old Los Angeles ruins
The emergency generator has started working and the electrical power has been re-established the lights are on; in a bed in a corner, Sharon is sleeping, after hearing the news about the big explosion in the RZ, she collapsed due to the emotional pain and the feeling of losing her partner and fiancé Louise; Phyllis and Angus gave her a soporific shot because she was frantic and crying uncontrollably and hysterically; her body was peacefully resting but her mind wasn’t; Sharon was dreaming, as we dream when we have those strong emotions that break our hearts and souls.
In her dreams Sharon was walking in an unknown and arid field, no animals not even bugs, no vegetation, just sand, and far away, the sea, no rivers or springs; she couldn’t identify the place, she felt lost and alone, suddenly she feels a hand on her arm she turns and see her former wife, Dina.
Sharon: “oh darling, how is that you are here…? what is this place?”
Dina: “I know, you can’t recognize it, but Louise could… this is old LA”
Sharon: “what…? what are we doing here?”
Dina: “I’m always here since they killed us; and you…, you are looking for Louise, but she is no longer here”
Sharon: “are you angry that I was with her after you passed?”
Dina: “not baby, I feel fine with what you two have, is something so right…, I’m grateful that she is looking after you and Maxine and Kristen are happy that you take care of her and that you two are together for each other and for our daughters”
Sharon: “I don’t understand…, but Louise…, she is dead… isn’t she?”
Dina: (smiling) “no, she is not in this land of the dead, she is too smart to die, and she is protected”
Sharon: “protected…?”
Dina: “she was and is loved especially by her two lovers…, she will come to you, and I will be satisfied with your wedding, because she could give you what I can’t…; honey, don’t despair, Louise is on her way back”
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Ah man, you can’t stop here! You tease!
A fantastic update! And i am happy that Louise and Tasha made a safe landing. I knew Tasha is a good girl and is on Louise side.
Being catched twice by Louise, poor Bette and Tina, but she is happy that they are a couple.
Update when ever you are able, i will wait patiently!
Hi Bibi:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I had a little bit of overload work in my job, so I wanted to have a little bit of fun, I was afraid that it could be boring; but telling the truth I really want to post more frequently because the chapters are making a long-line in my brain and they want to be released asap.
Thank you again.
P
Enjoyed it. Glad they got home safe. Thanks
Hi wkm:
I’m glad you liked the chapter, I hope to update soon. Thanks for reading and commenting,
P
Hi proteonomics,
Thank you for this interesting chapter, looking for your new update soon!
Hi laileng36
Thank you for reading, I will be posting in the next two days.
P
Wow! finally managed to read the tenth chapter!
The melody of a couple is essential for the relationship to be right, and
Bette and Tina reached this level. I believe that most, if not all, people who start a relationship intended to something close to perfection.
This strong family bond that Bette and Tina have with Louise, it’s because he created a
very large family affective environment with them. And being an atmosphere of affection and friendship makes us safer, motivated and felizes.Eu have this link with
my family and that’s wonderful.
And I read that the scientist Stephen Hawking published a new theory about black, very interesting holes.
My friend has to sleep, it’s too late, and tomorrow have a medical examination.
entire universe.
Forgive my English, it took nearly forty minutes to write and makes compreencível my comment.
“Love ,” says science is nothing more than a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain.
Hi my friend:
I agree with you about family, congratulations for your family. Stephen Hawking came into reason changing his old point of view about black holes (~1970s) which proposed black holes will destroy information (like something just disappear or loses its individuality) but in 2004 he modified his theory accepting that information won’t be lost in a black hole, which by the way gives support to the existence of wormholes and white holes (I will use this in chapter 12 where Tina and Buckley will argue about it). And my friend ‘Love’ may be, as some scientists say ‘a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain’, but we are not only brain and each of us is different, and reactions are different depending of the composition of your body, the surrounding environment and a very big amount of factors, finally we could even be just a hologram (or like in the movie THE MATRIX) or as Calderon de la Barca said in “la vida es sueño” “Life is a dream”
¿Qué es la vida? Un frenesí.
¿Qué es la vida? Una ilusión,
una sombra, una ficción,
y el mayor bien es pequeño.
¡Que toda la vida es sueño,
y los sueños, sueños son!
or in english:
What is life? A frenzy.
What is life? An illusion,
A shadow, a fiction,
And the greatest good is small;
For all of life is a dream,
And dreams, are only dreams.
My dear friend, thanks for reading and commenting, you’re uma muito agradável amiga.
Bear hug