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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 9
”God, Tina.” Bette cried, while taking her hands and holding Tina’s head to her breast.
”Now, subject A, you are not following the rules, you are supposed to be keeping your hands at your sides,” Tina explained again with a smile across her face and tangled blond hair cascading around her shoulders. Tina took Bette’s hands and tucked them palms down under Bette’s hips. “This should remind you to keep them in place,” said Tina.
”Mmmm,” was all Bette could manage at the moment.
Tina continued her worship of Bette’s ***** by taking one into her mouth and greedily sucking while massaging the other with her hand until Bette’s moans were filling the room.
Tina stopped and kneeled next to Bette’s splayed body. She lifted one arm at a time and encouraged Bette’s hands to grab a post from the headboard.
”Tina, please, this is cruel,” Bette begged.
”Sacrifices must be made for scientific advancement,” teased Tina.
She lowered her head and again began her tortuous assault on Bette’s body. Bette’s nipples were outrageously hard and raw pink from the previous ministrations. Tina once again traced the perimeter of Bette’s *****, not touching her nipples, while Bette squirmed below her, lifting her hips in an effort to bring Tina’s attention a bit lower than her *****. Tina gasped at the sight of Bette, her legs spread, her hips rocking and her liquid warmth seeping from inside of her body. Tina held herself back from touching in between Bette’s inviting legs, and continued her scientific experiment.
”How does it feel, subject A,” asked Tina. “Did you like position #1 better, or do you prefer position #2,” breathed Tina in Bette’s ear.
I like them both, panted Bette, becoming increasingly frantic for her lover to touch her.
”Oh, sorry, we will have to continue until you can give a clear answer, position #1 or position #2,” Tina smiled while bringing her head back down to lick and suck Bette’s *****. Each flick of Tina’s tongue across Bette’s nipple sent a tingling shock through Bette’s body causing her womb to contract.
”Position #2 Tina, position 2, definitely, please baby,” pleaded Bette.
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(43 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
i thought i read this already?
I know I read this before.
did you post the wrong chapter? still great and I love reruns!
I hope that your second job is as a firefighter,cause this chapter is burning up the screen. Come on Tina put out this fire,poor Bette has been third degreed. NO MORE TORTURE! Well maybe just a little moore,but not much.. This was Wonderful,come again soon..
Sorry for confusing some of you! Yes, you may have read this before. I posted this chapter late last year. It was the first fan fiction I’d ever attempted, and didn’t even think that I would develop it further. I then wrote the 8 chapters leading up to this segment. I posted this one again, because if I skipped it new readers might have been lost. Hope that clears it all up! Thanks for the wonderful comments! Maureen.
my goodness, this was heartwrenching and wonderful, the emotion, DANG so powerful i have no words, please continue!
DON’T GO TINA
Wow that was so beautiful. It was fun and sasy, and definatiely hot. However you really felt Bette’s loss and Tina’s confusion. Amazing and so well written.
It’s Chapter One.?
Readers, I think it was a stand alone piece originally and she has built this story around this piece. So now it has become one of many chapters. Horray for us! Awesome writing!
I know I have read this before but it is god. Post soon
I liked this the first time I read it and I liked it worked into this larger story – excellent.
Poor, poor Bette and her poo sandwiches…….. that woman really needs a break!!! thanks for the update and more really, really soon
I windered when this chapter was going to be played in again……….now Tina can’t let Bette go now can she??
Yeah, it was hot, but I’ve read this before.
Well I haven’t…and it was incredible and heartbreaking at the same time. Thank you.
I read this already.
excellant!!! even better the second time !
What a remarkable chapter and I am so glad you decided to make a series out of it. I’m enjoying this so very much.