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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 9
”Ah, you see, the book was right all along,” grinned Tina. “I guess we can stop right here.”
”The ***** we can,” growled Bette, removing her hands from the headboard and rolling over Tina, the strength of her desire apparent in her eyes.
Bette readjusted the headphones over her ears, turned up the volume of the Melissa CD, untied the string to her yoga pants and slipped her hand between her legs.
***
Tina pulled up to the house slowly. She wanted to make sure Bette wasn’t there before she went in to retrieve her clothes. She saw with relief that Bette’s car was not in the driveway and that the blinds were all drawn.
Good, she’s out, Tina thought, but she also acknowledged feeling a pit of regret in her stomach that she would not see Bette.
When am I going to stop feeling like this, she wondered. I can’t stand to see her and I can’t stand not seeing her. Tina thought back to last night. From the moment she saw the daisy sitting in the box she wanted nothing more than to celebrate the evening with Bette. But she couldn’t. She had drawn the line in the sand and she was going to stand firm. She did this, not me, Tina reminded herself as she knocked lightly on the front door, not expecting an answer.
”Bette, are you here,” Tina called while entering the door. The house looked completely empty and neglected, as though no one lived there anymore.
As Tina made her way to the bedroom she heard a noise coming from inside. “Bette,” she called again, a bit louder than before.
She heard another noise, a moan, coming from the room. She took another step towards the bedroom, but then started to back away quickly. “Oh my God,” Tina thought, “she’s in there having ***** with someone. In our bed.”
Tina turned and was making her way quickly to the door.
”Tina!” she heard her name as an anguished cry being called from the bedroom.
”Bette, are you okay?” Tina answered, her mind and body wracked with conflicting emotions and thoughts.
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(43 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
i thought i read this already?
I know I read this before.
did you post the wrong chapter? still great and I love reruns!
I hope that your second job is as a firefighter,cause this chapter is burning up the screen. Come on Tina put out this fire,poor Bette has been third degreed. NO MORE TORTURE! Well maybe just a little moore,but not much.. This was Wonderful,come again soon..
Sorry for confusing some of you! Yes, you may have read this before. I posted this chapter late last year. It was the first fan fiction I’d ever attempted, and didn’t even think that I would develop it further. I then wrote the 8 chapters leading up to this segment. I posted this one again, because if I skipped it new readers might have been lost. Hope that clears it all up! Thanks for the wonderful comments! Maureen.
my goodness, this was heartwrenching and wonderful, the emotion, DANG so powerful i have no words, please continue!
DON’T GO TINA
Wow that was so beautiful. It was fun and sasy, and definatiely hot. However you really felt Bette’s loss and Tina’s confusion. Amazing and so well written.
It’s Chapter One.?
Readers, I think it was a stand alone piece originally and she has built this story around this piece. So now it has become one of many chapters. Horray for us! Awesome writing!
I know I have read this before but it is god. Post soon
I liked this the first time I read it and I liked it worked into this larger story – excellent.
Poor, poor Bette and her poo sandwiches…….. that woman really needs a break!!! thanks for the update and more really, really soon
I windered when this chapter was going to be played in again……….now Tina can’t let Bette go now can she??
Yeah, it was hot, but I’ve read this before.
Well I haven’t…and it was incredible and heartbreaking at the same time. Thank you.
I read this already.
excellant!!! even better the second time !
What a remarkable chapter and I am so glad you decided to make a series out of it. I’m enjoying this so very much.