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Never Say Never: Chp.3 Holding On
That night Carmen had gone home with Shane. They walked quietly through
the house as to not wake a grumpy Jenny. Finally reaching Shane’s room,
Carmen got comfortable on Shane’s bed. Already, she had felt the
pounding of the hang over she would have to deal with next morning.
Shane was getting ready for bed and for some reason Carmen was
comfortable with that. She sat up watching Shane move from one end of
the room to other, putting away her clothes, and random things, back
from the washroom to her closet, and so on. It was obvious to Shane
that Carmen was looking and she felt nervous. How could she possibly
tell Carmen that she didn’t want to sleep with her tonight, but to
simply hold her and watch her as she drifted off into dream?
Shane approached Carmen with a ***** smile that was honestly returned.
“I think we should call it a night. You look tired and I’m a little
tired myself.”
Carmen was already happy with the progress she had made with Shane that
night, with the whole “it wasn’t you” confession. If Shane had asked
her anything, she was ready to pour out her whole world. Carmen nodded
biting her lip. She wanted to feel Shane’s body but even before she
attempted to reach for her, Shane was already in front of her while she
sat on the foot of the bed.
“Let me help you.” Carmen let her. Reaching for her zipper, Shane
slowly undid her jacket neatly putting it to the side and continued
with the rest until she was down to her draws.
“Do you want something to change into?” Shane had asked while she was
searching through her drawers but by the time she turned around, Carmen
was already fully naked, her underwear and what ever remained piled on
the floor. Eye contact was all it took and Carmen’s words.
“Come here.” Carmen pulled in Shane by her finger and seductive
look. She wanted it. They both did. Without hesitation Shane made her
way to Carmen immediately placing her hands on her hips caressing
whatever she felt as she kissed her passionately. Carmen threw off
Shane’s beater and placed her arms around Shane’s neck. She couldn’t
help but smile as Carmen did this. With a little force, Shane got
Carmen to sit up on the bed as she kneeled between her legs. Breaking
the kiss was hard, but she needed air. But, even this didn’t stop her.
She made her way down Carmen’s neck and collar bone as she lightly felt
her *****. Carmen’s eyes rolled back in satisfaction and her body was
already moving to a little rock. Placing both of her hands on either
side of Carmen; she slid her palms down to her knees all the while
still kissing Carmen. She rubbed her on the inside of her thighs
teasing her before she made any gesture towards her center. She placed
a soft kiss on her knee and made her way up until she found that really
gentle spot that made Carmen moan. Making her way to the center, Carmen
finally felt shane’s tongue play with her in unimaginable ways and
right before she was about to release Shane stopped and looked at
Carmen. She was still teasing her. But honestly, Shane wanted to see
Carmen’s eyes. But Carmen picked it up quickly, by pushing Shane to the
floor and getting on top of her. Finally after to much teasing, and
Carmen saying,
“I can’t take it.” Shane let one hand slide past the line she has
been managing to keep her hands away from. Her thumb made contact and
Carmen who grinded against it right away. Shane was beginning to lose
all control when she managed to get two fingers to work her the same
way she did earlier that day. Shane couldn’t help but notice how
beautiful she was. Carmen’s hair was falling in front of her face as
she held on to Shane’s shoulders. Carmen fell close to Shane, bodies
leaving no space in between. Shane placed kisses on her neck and
whispered,
“Carmen” into her ear. It was that one thing that sent Carmen
over the edge while she remained to keep eye contact with Shane. She
was lost in the very depths of her eyes and it was here where she felt
the happiest, the safest, and the most loved. After riding on the last
waves, she kissed Shane sweetly in such a way, that she was almost
saying thank you and curled up on top of her.
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(36 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
don’t run talk too each other great update make the post longer
Great chapters! i hope they talk more about their feelings. Post soon.
Yea, 2 updates!! This is my favourite Sharmen fic:) I love the angst between them. It would be great to see other girls hitting on Carmen for real, would Shane act cool and flirt with other girls or?Anyways..love you and you fic.Update soo!!
Great update. :D Yep, talking is good, no running away lol. But things are still very new; they’re both dealing with the fact that they do have something between them, but sometimes it’s good to let things settle in a bit, get used to things before rushing to the next stage. Anyway, those are my thoughts about this. So I think it’s good that Carmen waited with asking Shane about where they stand.
Back to back update, real cool. They both are at the same place & don’t even know it. Great update, keep ’em comin’.
gosh, great. I read the 3 chapters and I´m totally impressed! Good job!