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New feelings – Chapter 10
Let me give you one advice. Ms. Austin said. When painting use your every emotion to create the art, but when presenting it make it anonymous. Explain the feelings in the painting, but give it an identity of its own. Do you understand?
Bette smiled. I think I do. She exhaled slowly. For me the painting represents what you want, but cant have. The person in the room is in the real world, but is longing for a different reality which the mirror represents. The darkness represents the sorrows and loneliness, while the light between their hands are the hope in all the conflicts and confusion.
Ms. Porter you just got yourself an A. Ms. Austin said.
Thanks! She said surprised. Thank you so much.
Getting an A was nothing unusual for Bette. It was mostly what she got. But this one felt truly special, because of what the art piece represented. She had put her emotion on display and was being accepted for it. She knew only she really saw the true meaning behind the painting, but she so desperately needed some approval, even if it was a false one.
Bettes art class ended early, so she went to their usual table in the cafeteria, also known as the popular table. The room was almost completely empty except for a couple of students sitting on a table a few feet away. She looked at her watch. 15 minutes till the bell rings. She thought. She took her English book up to do some homework to make the time go.
Hi! A soft voice broke the silence. Bette looked up from her book, meeting the sight of hazel eyes.
Hi T. Bette smiled warmly.
Tina sat down on the opposite side of the table, smiling shyly at Bette. They sat in silence staring at each other, neither one knowing what to say.
Bette was the first to break the silence. I got an A in art class today.
Wow, congratulation. Tina smiled. I didnt know you like art.
I dont like art, I love it. Bette said gloving with excitement.
So you wanna be and artist or something. Tina asked.
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(67 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
I like this story.Please post soon.
Great update! Can’t wait for the next, please post soon.
Hello! I just wanted to say that I actually found and caught up with your story yesterday. I LOVE it and I am HOOKED! I’m so glad you posted today, yay! I was afraid you weren’t going to post anytime soon since I saw the posting dates of your previous chapters. So glad you did! :)
Ditch the boys, girls.
They’ll just have their hands all over you as soon as the lights go down in the theater.
Oh and teasing continues!
This is so complicated. I love it!
SO GLAD YOUR BACK….BETTE AND TINA IN A MOVIE THEATRE IN THE DARK!!!!!ALRIGHT BRING IT ON…THANKS FOR UPDATING A WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOON….
Hahaha good to see you back and what a wonderful chpater. Bette and Tina so cute, and can’t wait to see they go to the movie. Post soon, thanks!
Oh i love this story soooo much. Can’t wait to see when they finally come true with there feelings! Please post soon!!!!
Oh no…this is going to get good…YIKES!! I can’t see how with all these new people sitting at the popular table that that is going to fly…That alone makes things interesting..poor Bette…
Pls more love this story!!!
i don’t know how long these 2 can pretend with their little charade….FRIENDS??? C’MON! YOU BOTH LOVE EACHOTHER TOO DAMN MUCH TO BE JUST FRIENDS…..LOL
Hey sophie where did you been LOL! Thank God you’re back I’m just glad that you posted again It’s about time LOL! Hey you know I’m waiting for this for a long time I’m just so happy to see your Story Thank you anyway this is getting Interesting Bette and Tina they both have a date WHOA! I’m just gonna wait next chapter I guess Okay Please don’t take too long LOL! I’m just kidding I’m just really happy to see your Story thats all matter Thanks.
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT! My favorite part was definetly when they walked the wrong direction in the hall, soo cute. On a deeper level I loved the description of Bette’s painting…totally awesome how you came up with a fictional piece of art to express her feelings. Sorry you have a tight schedule, I’m just relieved you write this story at all. Can’t wait for the next post…THEIR FIRST DATE!!!
so sweet yet so sad. Thank you for posting I missed u!!
yes a date! i am soo hooked
oh what a fun/cute/awesome chapter. “it’s a date” :) so cute!
great update …hope to see some more soon!!
I’m very glad to see you back…your story is very sweet. The girls can fool themselves with trying to be just friends, but we all know how this will end up. Please continue soon!
WAW!! Do you speak like every language in the world..? french and spanish..hehe impressive!! Nej jeg er ikke fra Norge, men Danmark. Jeg har boet i Norge (Trondheim). By the way, very cute story this one:)
fantabulous fic…i just love it!
Hey, missy…. yes, I’m still alive! (lol) Anyway, I adore this story! Heck, I wouldn’t mind going back to high school, after reading your story, it sounds fun! (lol) Another great chapter! Five Stars!
(P.S. If you’re wondering, I’m going to post soon. :) )
ARRG! Im loving this fic! Please! Im itching like hell for an update >:P
I just read your Story. It’s great. This story has much potential. It is really pity that you have not continued the story. Please come back to continue and finish this great Story.
Oh man…that was sooo wrong of you with the Norwegian reply!!!lol
The errors are where now? Did you say you were British? And you said something about Spanish but I don’t know what. I also think you said that you think I don’t speak spanish regularly….as in I’m not fluent or something…i don’t know.lol At least I understood the Spanish. Good payback.
Good chapter too….you had me worried for a minute tho.
Ah, what a JOY to find one of my very favorite stories back !!! THANK YOU !!
Yes, I pretty thought you should have other things to do (life’s duties, he ?) and I did my best to wait with patience… but god, that was really hard !!
Now, YOU make me blush with such a lovely “comment of my comments” (lol)… You know, when I love something I cannot manage but to express my feelings from the bottom of my heart, so I really mean everything I can write here. Now, about my way to express, well, I really think that the fact I’m a French-spoken girl can explain why my English is certainly a bit “exotic” ! All I hope is to be understanding enough.
Oh, I do write a lot indeed, it’s both a lifetime passion and a need. But not stories… and only in French, of course. Anyway, many thanks for your delightful kindness about it !
No, no, dear Sophie, I don’t mind your curiosity about my age at all : I’m a good old thirty-years thing, much closer to the Bette & Tina of the show than your lovely schoolgirls so – even if I can deeply relate to this so particular and intense period of life, for a lot of personal reasons.
Now, about maturity, I really don’t think it’s a matter of age. For me, there’s nothing best – or worst – than intense, heartbreaking events and feelings in your life to form a maturest way to think and feel everything. Our inward world with all its possible hidden scars and intense memories is something timeless… Like self discovery and acceptance too.
Thank you SO much for this new wonderful chapter, dear talented writer ! “For an artist to put every emotions and thoughts into a painting, for then seeing the result as an open book to their soul (…)” : I just adore that… You’re so right, arts are the best way one can ever express the very bottom of heart and mind. (That’s why I’m such a passionate about them – especially literature…)
And Bette’s so revealing, powerful and poetic picture sounds like a deeply beautiful depiction of her hidden desires and fears, for me. The unconfessed soulmate behind the mirror… One day, she’ll cross it and, like Alice, will find her Wonderland ! Cheer up, Bette ! (Ms Austin’s advice is excellent, by the way)
Great work, Sophie, really. Waiting for your next chapter with true impatience – more than ever – but however able to wait a lot for the best of your “recipes” ! (lol)
Excellente histoire, j’adore… J’ai déja hate de lire la suite… Il y avais tellement de beaux liens.. vraiment, vraiment intéressant. :)
P.S. : D’où viens-tu? (Québec, France, ailleurs?)
Your back in my good graces a little bit 4 pages!!!!!!! NICE OF YOU TO LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT please post soon
I am really enjoying this story, god help the other men, they don’t realise, that Bette and Tina want to be left alone, maybe on the date, they will sit next to each other. But there is problems arising between Bette and her brother. Looking forward to the next update.
hey, I’m so happy you’re back, I missed this story. great chapter. post soon, I mean really soon ;)
yeeeeeey finally what took you so long? i had a great time in spain, but i’m back home having a greater time now you posted! don’t leave us hanging for so long! post soon please!
Ha Friends. Yeah right!
Love the story.
lol YAY.. I had lost this story, but now I found it again!! Now youre being favourited so it doesnt happen again.
I like how Bette said “Its a date” while looking at Tina. Cute.
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for the date.
Sophie88…why are you torturing us? Please I need you to continue with this! Otherwise I will lose all my friends, because I am so cranky without getting the fill from you! JK!
Please Post Soon, I need another chapter
Please continue this when you have time. Another wonderful “beginning story”Thank you!