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New feelings – Chapter 9
New feelings – Chapter 9
Previously.
I guess so. Bette smiled. She leaned in capturing Tinas lips ones more. Bette wanted to test new territory, and the blondes mouth was an area she didnt mind exploring.
The kiss got more passionate and hungry by each second, both girls enjoying each others lips and mouth. Bettes left hand found its way under Tinas shirt, traveling up her stomach, neither one of them hearing the footsteps outside the door.
Suddenly the doorknob turned..
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Its stuck! Bette and Tina jumped away from each other at the sound of Alice voice.
You have to put more pressure on it! Jack informed her.
Tina pulled away smiling warmly at her friend. Yeah Al, Im fine!
Tina looked confused. What?
Youre so warm! One would think hanging out in a freezer would make you a bit cold.
Tina blushed. Really, thats so weird. Wewe really should get out of here! She grabbed
Jack went over and hugged his sister. I was so worried. How did you managed to get locked in? Didnt one of you hold the door?
I dont know It just happened. She said looking down at her feet.
Please say you were nice to her sis!? He asked with a pleading face.
Bette looked up rolling her eyes. Yeah, I was nice! Nice being an understatement. She thought.
Jack didnt look too convinced. Huh uh Well, I guess I just have to take your word for it um!
I guess so! Bette smiled. Now come on! Lets go upstairs and eat!
As soon as they walked into the living room Jack went over and sat next to Tina putting his arm around her. Bette stood still in her tracks. She could still taste Tina on her lips, and now her love was in someone else embrace. She felt helpless where she stood. Even with 10 other people in the room she felt completely alone. What was I thinking? She thought. What did I expect? That I would be the one holding her when we got out? Like spending a few minutes in a goddamn freezer would change anything.But, it did It changed everything.
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(62 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Nooooooo Bette, what are you doing??? Go back. Trust us, you can do it!!! (Tina, hurry and grab her and don’t let her leave.)
Damm, that has to be hard for bette. still very much enjoying your story and I took you hint, and look I’m leaving a comment. LOL Well may be they can be closet lover, I can’t even begin to imagine what would happen to the both of them if the rumors spred around the high school. been out of high school 5 yrs now and I hear it’s brutal place now.
K
Well damn, it was so good for a while lol. Great chapter. HOpe Bette comes to her senses, love is love, no matter who it’s with. Can’t wait for more.
Megga- YIKES! Well, glad you’re back writing! I really look forward to your updates, please post again soon!
Hey Sophie Thanks for posted again I love it OMG! It’s getting Intense Yes thats really hard to Bette she LOVE Tina but she thinking about her brother WOW! I love your Story keep it going Please post soon and HAVE A GREAT 4TH OF JULY.
Bette go after her………damn why are they so many obsticles there………..good post ……..post soon!
OK lady, i went half bald last time you posted, but now you really do have to buy me a wig.. WHY IN HELL BETTE IS DOING WHAT SHE’S DOING?? I mean it’s Tina who should be scared and confused, cuz it’s new to her.. but if i come to think about it, i understand Bette, it’s hard to be in love with someone that you know you can’t be with.. or that if you are with this someone many ppl that you love will get hurt.. but WTF why care about the others, none of them will be ur partner for life..
OK oK i will stop rambling.. Great update.. ;)
I hope you can read spanish!!!
El capÃtulo no era muy largo. Asà yo lo tuve que leer dos veces. Pero lo era bueno. Espero que usted tenga un feliz cuarto, quinto, sexto o cualquier es usted celebra personalmente.
Damn! That was intense! I could feel Bette’s inner turmoil! I’m really enjoying this story and so glad to see that you posted this chapter…I’ve been looking for it ever since I caught up on the others that I’d missed while I was gone. Thanks, you’re writing is so refreshing!
Aaah, dear Sophie, I enjoyed this new “recipe” of yours so much ! An other delightful waking… and breakfast(lol)thanks to you !
More than ever, your wonderful story caught my heart and makes the waiting between two chapters soooo hard to bear ! However, the best recipes always need to be carefully concocted, so I’ll do my best to be a patient reader (*wink and smile !*).
Few words more : as always, you’re truly so gifted depicting feelings’ subtle and painful hidden tortures… and god knows how much this particular life’s period is an ideal territory to explore the worst of them – and the more intense too.
Thank you so much, you are such an exquisite writer. With all my warmest and grateful thanks – once more !
I hope you can read french too!! :)
J’aime ta façon d’écrire, je suis sous le charme… J’attends avec impatience le prochain chapitre, ne nous fait pas trop attendre. MERCI !!!
Damn I can’t believe I missed your story and your 2 chapters but glad to catch up. Damn this is sad for them, it hard for Bette to come out of the closet and be with Tina, but she can’t she can’t hurt Jack. I think she just don’t know what to do right now, it’s just too much for her to handle right now. Well hope she’ll think clearly and find out whatever or do whatever to be with Tina. Ok please post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter, 5 star for you!
Alright alright, although Bette did get harsh I will let your crime slide only because i know you will not have her stay “bitchy” forever, Tina will just have to break those walls down. I mean this is a story, what would it be without twists. I remember when I was in high school (pretending to be nostalgic like it was a long time ago when in fact it has been 3 months) and we teenagers are emotional, hormonal messes. I like this story because I feel like you get that high school vibe just right. I mean, there is love between them obviously but they are both still young, a little naive, and obviously scared by what they are feeling. Having this see-saw back and forth is awesome, I’m loving every minute and waiting for more. Have a great weekend!
porter, porter, porter….you haven’t been doing your assignment by reading our comments….coz if you do, you’ll definetely know what you should do! hmmpptt….
regards to you sophie…keep it coming girlfriend!
Ohhhhh….so close.
I really like where you’re going with this story. The characterization is great and realistic for how teenaged Bette and Tina would deal with high school, friends and love. There is one thing, though; some of the chapters have an excessive amount of exclamation points. And while they’re appropriate in some instances, they are hardly necessary in every sentence. Just FYI :) Other than that, the fic’s great. Keep up the great work and post more soon.
I am in love with this story!
ahh, bette! what’s going on? and poor tina, i hope she doesn’t go trying to make better feel crummy by being all lovey-dovey with jack…on second thought, maybe bette needs a wake up call? :) great chapter! don’t leave us hanging too long!
just got back from a 6 days trip to New Zealand and the 1st thing I read was ur fan fic…awesome chapter…hehe but please please don’t keep bette & tina apart…its just so wrong
I’m surprised Tina would be using “babe” and “baby” so soon, and be outward enough to put her arms around Bette like that. Then again, I could be old fashioned? :-)
NOOOOO Don’t bring back the “Bitch Monster” we were just starting to get somewhere! Please post soon and don’t let T be to upset and make damn sure Bette gets it all right sonner rather than later!
WOW!! yeah again…Can’t wait for the next post…c’mon Ineed my fix… Post very very soon PLEASE!!!
No way, that is so mean. You can’t do that. that’s to sad. please let things work out.
I’m believe in you sophie…these two will be together eventually. And with all these twists they will learn to appreciate each other even more. I was just watching S2 where Bette is escorted home by Alice and Shane after having a few too many drinks and that broke my heart. But even there we can see the light at the end of the tunnel.
waiting for this chapter caused that I know how much I really like your story, but hey don’t delay posting too often, this is not what I mean! LOL I’m with others that Highschool is a very interesting time- full of exciting and painful moments too. And for me this time has a special meaning;)Thanx for an update!
oh come on, you cant do that! but im sure its going to be ok! at least i hope so! thanx for posting! it makes my holiday even better! post soon please! i just love your story!
please post soon! i love this story so much!!!!
Well Sophie I am very glad to be back. I am enjoying your new post as well as the Live 8 concert. I hope that all the fans of the fanfic archives are following this historic event!
Your story was like always a cliff hanger and I could hate you for it… =) but I love the pace!! Your are the expert here. I agree with all the other comments that being out in highschool must be brutal! Specially for someone like Bette… she has a reputation to keep.. sucks!
Ok I am rambling… post soon!!
Man that was great but i think you starting to enjoy leaving me hanging like that!!!!!! PLEASE DON’T LEAVE US HANGING TOO LONG PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
DAMN IT BETTE..DON’T GOOOOOO TINA…..FABULOUS CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON…….
This story is just so great, but what´s up with Bette??.Post soon!!!
Kan forstå at du er fra Norge..Veldig bra!!
Damn! I thought Bette would make her a cheerleader and become her best friend! lol
I love this fic so much! I hope you post soon!
Nooo! … Bette better get her act together and go after her or somethin LOL … great story , cant wait for the next chapter :)
Playing catch up… Wow, I love this Bette! I love the drama! Let Bette do her things! Good Job!