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New feelings – Chapter 7
New feelings – Chapter 7
Previously..
They smiled at each other before Jack lend in for a kiss. It was sweet and tender. Pulling back he caressed her cheek. Ill call you tomorrow Tina! He smiled and went inside.
Tina stood still for a few seconds running the tip of her index finger across her lip. Jack is a great kisser, but there was absolutely no spark. She thought. Not even a tingling in my stomach when our lips meet. Not even near the fuzzy feeling I get from only looking at Bette. She sighed, and started walking away from the door. Just as she turned back for one last glimpse of the house she saw the outline of a head of brown curls turning away from the second floor window.
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The next morning Bette woke up with a hammering headache. The first thing entering her mind was the vision off Tina and Jack kissing. She let out a frustrated sigh. This sucks! She said and pulled the sheet over her head.
She went down to the kitchen seeing Jack already eating breakfast. She went do the refrigerator, ignoring her brother.
Hi sis, what ya doing tonight? He asked with a big grin. He waited for her response, but got nothing but silence. What, arent you talking to me this morning?
Bette started making her toast, ignoring the question.
Oh I see! You are giving me the silence treatment. If anyone should be given any silence treatments its you sis. You were such an ***** yesterday to Tina, and I dont appreciate it! Like it or not.
Bette finished making her toast, got a glass of milk and walked out of the room. Not ever looking in Jacks direction.
Jack rolled his eyes. I guess not.
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Tina was sleeping when her cell began ringing in all its polyphonic glory. She groaned and reached for the source of the noise.
Hallo. Tina said in a sleepy tone.
Tina sighed. Hi Al!
Im standing outside your bedroom door! Your mother let me in, so you get your lazy ***** out of bed and let me inside.
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(42 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
This looks promising. I wonder what they can do for an hour ;-) (arguing probably)
oh man this has gotta be good. stuck in the basement for however long. Somethings gotta happen between these two, IT JUST GOTTA, AND NOW IS THE TIME !!!!!!! (I hope).
omg :D i so knew that was going to happen, but so exciting. OMG i need the next part now :D
So good! Please post soon. I don’t know how long I can wait!!!
uuhhh…oohhh…. lol! it’s getting interesting every chapter my friend!!! looking forward to the next one…i can feel it’s going to be a very long night for the mighty Porter.
YESS! Locked in the freezer…time for the true feelings to come out. Wow an awesome twist, never saw it coming!
Just got caught up on this story and it’s great can’t wait for more.Please have something good happen with B&T
Now is the time for Tina to get a mild case of closterphobia and Bette has to hold her to get her to calm down. Then….one thing leads to another…and a new romance blooms. Great story…post again soon, can’t wait to see how you handle this one!
Ohh man you can’t stop there. I really like bitchy Bette, I don’t know why. Great story and please post soon.
I just read all 7 chapters of this story and i gotta tell u i’m LOVING IT..
WOW now Bette and Tina alone in the basement.. this is going to be FUN.. ;)
aboslutely awesome.. PLEASE continue.. im dying without ur updates
Yippy! Yippy! Yippy! Can hardly wait for more!
Great story. Hope they open up to each other.
never leave two hot lesbians in a locked area alone. I know what will happen from experience. can’t wait for the next chapter.
please post like now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it! post again sometime soon!
Damn I love this, and it will be so much fun. Bette and Tina is alone in the basement and this moment is will show every problem between them out and let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!
OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG !
this is gona be gOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd….please please please post soon….*on my knees begging*
This is going to be great, please post soon and please don’t turn Bette into her scary monster bitch self when their stuck down there!
Oh yeah, you set them up girl!! Great post, glad to see you posting often!! Thank you!
fav line:
“Tina can you help her?†Jack asked. Bette stopped in her tracks and closed her eyes shut, praying she would say no.
“Sure!†Tina smiled.
LOL….
Great Chapter
I simply adore your story from the very beginning. Your writing is great and you have a true gift for subtle psychological depiction. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story ! … god, that’s so hard to wait for the next chapter now !!
You enjoy doing this to me.WHY!!! great chapter the nice bette will come out to play with tina soon right.Post soon
I don’t know how it happened but i was reading this story and then lost it somehow after 3 chapter. and today such a nice suprise, I’ve found it and read everything I missed. hehe, so now they have to stay close to each other if don’t want to be frozen;)can’t wait for next chapter.post soon!
Tina, just grab Bette and throw her against the wall and kiss her. You know she wants it. She’ll slap you later, but who cares. she’ll be under your spell by then. :-)
this is great .now we will see a fight followed be make up sex :)
K
Very interesting, can’t wait to see what happens. Just love it.
:-)
HAHHA, AWESOME! but after bette yells at tina for not listening, they’re going to have fun, right? ;) confess suff… :)
That’s it i’m addict now! Just can’t wait for the next post!!! Hope to have it soon!!! You’re awesome!
That’s not fair. How am I supposed to concentrate on work now….just thinking what will happen next. great job!