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New feelings – Chapter 7
Tom had light curly brown hair and deep blue eyes behind a par of light colored sunglasses. And the last one was the most gorgeous of them all. Brian looked like a younger son of Brad Pitt. His skin had a beautiful tan, and his smile showed pearly white teeth.
Just then Bette walked in the room. Tina noticed every guy except relative ones in the room following her every movement, mesmerized by the sight.
Hi guys, sorry it took so long, Melvin can be a real pain in the *****! She said.
Hi Bette, come over here and sit with me! Brian pleaded.
Bette looked toward Tina and noticed Jacks arm around her. She felt jealousy running through her veins. Sure Brian, I would love too She said in her most flirtatious voice. She went over and sat on Brians lap with her arm around his shoulder.
Jack looked over at his sister in confusion. Didnt she say she didnt like him? He thought.
The guys started talking about their upcoming football match, while the girls tried their best to show interested. Bette often felt Tinas gaze on her, and when she turned Tina quickly pretended to look somewhere else.
Im starting too get hungry. Jack said. Is anyone up for Thai food?
He looked around the group, everybody agreed. They all stood up and walked to the front door.
Okay, lets see We are 11 people and its all the way downtown, so its gonna take at least an hour. So who wanna come? A few raised their hands. Okay so, Alice and Michael, and we gonna have to take you car Brian, mine is too small?
Okay, but Im driving. Brian said.
Well, the rest of you can you outside to the pool! And Bette can you fix some ice cubs for the sodas?
Of course! She turned her back and started walking to the basement. But I need someone with me! She informed.
Tina can you help her? Jack asked. Bette stopped in her tracks and closed her eyes shut, praying she would say no.
Sure! Tina smiled. Bette felt her heart drop.
Jack and his gang left to get the food, while the rest went out to the pool. Bette and Tina stood alone in the hallway. Its this way Bette informed Tina, never turned towards her. She started walking down the stairs to basement with Tina in her heels. Both girls feeling their heart race faster by each step.
They walked inside to the pantry. Bette headed towards the freezer. Hold the door open, the doorknob is broken. She told Tina.
Tina didnt hear her. What? She asked walking inside the room, the door closing behind her.
Bette turned. NOOO! She ran towards the door, but didnt make it…
TBC.
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(42 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
This looks promising. I wonder what they can do for an hour ;-) (arguing probably)
oh man this has gotta be good. stuck in the basement for however long. Somethings gotta happen between these two, IT JUST GOTTA, AND NOW IS THE TIME !!!!!!! (I hope).
omg :D i so knew that was going to happen, but so exciting. OMG i need the next part now :D
So good! Please post soon. I don’t know how long I can wait!!!
uuhhh…oohhh…. lol! it’s getting interesting every chapter my friend!!! looking forward to the next one…i can feel it’s going to be a very long night for the mighty Porter.
YESS! Locked in the freezer…time for the true feelings to come out. Wow an awesome twist, never saw it coming!
Just got caught up on this story and it’s great can’t wait for more.Please have something good happen with B&T
Now is the time for Tina to get a mild case of closterphobia and Bette has to hold her to get her to calm down. Then….one thing leads to another…and a new romance blooms. Great story…post again soon, can’t wait to see how you handle this one!
Ohh man you can’t stop there. I really like bitchy Bette, I don’t know why. Great story and please post soon.
I just read all 7 chapters of this story and i gotta tell u i’m LOVING IT..
WOW now Bette and Tina alone in the basement.. this is going to be FUN.. ;)
aboslutely awesome.. PLEASE continue.. im dying without ur updates
Yippy! Yippy! Yippy! Can hardly wait for more!
Great story. Hope they open up to each other.
never leave two hot lesbians in a locked area alone. I know what will happen from experience. can’t wait for the next chapter.
please post like now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it! post again sometime soon!
Damn I love this, and it will be so much fun. Bette and Tina is alone in the basement and this moment is will show every problem between them out and let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!
OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG !
this is gona be gOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd….please please please post soon….*on my knees begging*
This is going to be great, please post soon and please don’t turn Bette into her scary monster bitch self when their stuck down there!
Oh yeah, you set them up girl!! Great post, glad to see you posting often!! Thank you!
fav line:
“Tina can you help her?†Jack asked. Bette stopped in her tracks and closed her eyes shut, praying she would say no.
“Sure!†Tina smiled.
LOL….
Great Chapter
I simply adore your story from the very beginning. Your writing is great and you have a true gift for subtle psychological depiction. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story ! … god, that’s so hard to wait for the next chapter now !!
You enjoy doing this to me.WHY!!! great chapter the nice bette will come out to play with tina soon right.Post soon
I don’t know how it happened but i was reading this story and then lost it somehow after 3 chapter. and today such a nice suprise, I’ve found it and read everything I missed. hehe, so now they have to stay close to each other if don’t want to be frozen;)can’t wait for next chapter.post soon!
Tina, just grab Bette and throw her against the wall and kiss her. You know she wants it. She’ll slap you later, but who cares. she’ll be under your spell by then. :-)
this is great .now we will see a fight followed be make up sex :)
K
Very interesting, can’t wait to see what happens. Just love it.
:-)
HAHHA, AWESOME! but after bette yells at tina for not listening, they’re going to have fun, right? ;) confess suff… :)
That’s it i’m addict now! Just can’t wait for the next post!!! Hope to have it soon!!! You’re awesome!
That’s not fair. How am I supposed to concentrate on work now….just thinking what will happen next. great job!