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New feelings – Chapter 9
Bette you gonna come and sit down or what? Brian asked. Bette snapped out of her trance. She was still standing in the doorway.
She smiled and walked over to him.
Ten minutes later everybody were enjoying their food and company. Well, almost everybody. Bette and Tina were both miserable. Tina by Jacks side and Bette by Brians, both longing after each other. After 15 minutes of torture, Bette couldnt handle it any longer. She silently stood up, and started walking out of the room.
Bette you okay? Jack asked.
She stopped in her tracks, but without turning to face him. Yeah, Im just going upstairs for a sec!
Okay, just checking. He said and went back to his conversation.
Tina watched as Bette walked out, and heard the sound of her footsteps rushing up the stairs. She patted Jack lightly on the shoulder and whispered in his ear. Wheres the bathroom?
Upstairs! I can show you if you want!?
No, Im sure Ill find it! She smiled. She stood up, and started walking upstairs.
Bette stood looking at herself in the full-length mirror beside her bedside, deep in thoughts. What have I done? What the ***** was I thinking!!!? Thats the point, I wasnt! Its all so wrong, but damn.. It feels so ***** right. Im going crazy!
She leaned her forehead against the glass. God! Oh my ***** god, that kiss was so hot. She ran her index finger lightly over her bottom lip. I can still feel her. She thought.
Tanned arms found their way around Bettes waist. Tina lightly kissed the mocha colored skin of her neck. Bette jumped at the touch. She turned around in the blondes arms meeting a par of beautiful hazel orbs. Hi! Tina smiled.
Bette formed a big grin. Hi! I didnt hear you come in.
You seemed to be deep in thoughts! Tina said caressing Bettes cheek.
I was! Bette said.
What were you thinking about? Tina asked.
Ummm.You! She winked.
Tina smirked. Oh really?!
Bette rested her hands on the blondes hips. Yeah, really!
Care to elaborate?
I would rather show you T! Tinas heart raced with Bettes words. She pulled the blonde closer, their bodies tight together. She brought Tinas lips to her own kissing her softly. They shared a slow and sensual kiss, both enjoying the pleasure of each others soft lips.
Suddenly Tina felt a tear running down her cheek, but it wasnt her own. She leaned back noticing that Bette was crying.
She traced her thumb across the brunettes cheek. You okay babe? She asked her voice full of concern.
Bette let out deep sigh. She looked up at Tina, her dark orbs filled with tears. I cant do this! Bette said, her voice shaking with emotion.
Cant do what baby? Tina asked.
Bette broke away from the blondes arms and stepped backwards. I cant do this! She said motioning between Tina and herself. A new set of tears started rolling down her cheeks.
I dont understand! Tina said, her eyes pleading for answers.
Bette was biting her bottom lip, looking down at her feet. Im in love with you, but I cant be with you. Im sorry! Bette started sobbing. I cant do it! Its too hard! Bette sighed. II think its best if you go
Tinas heart was breaking into a million pieces. She furrowed her browns in frustration, then turned around and stormed out the room.
Bette closed her eyes shut. See you Monday T She whispered after her.
TBC..
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(62 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Nooooooo Bette, what are you doing??? Go back. Trust us, you can do it!!! (Tina, hurry and grab her and don’t let her leave.)
Damm, that has to be hard for bette. still very much enjoying your story and I took you hint, and look I’m leaving a comment. LOL Well may be they can be closet lover, I can’t even begin to imagine what would happen to the both of them if the rumors spred around the high school. been out of high school 5 yrs now and I hear it’s brutal place now.
K
Well damn, it was so good for a while lol. Great chapter. HOpe Bette comes to her senses, love is love, no matter who it’s with. Can’t wait for more.
Megga- YIKES! Well, glad you’re back writing! I really look forward to your updates, please post again soon!
Hey Sophie Thanks for posted again I love it OMG! It’s getting Intense Yes thats really hard to Bette she LOVE Tina but she thinking about her brother WOW! I love your Story keep it going Please post soon and HAVE A GREAT 4TH OF JULY.
Bette go after her………damn why are they so many obsticles there………..good post ……..post soon!
OK lady, i went half bald last time you posted, but now you really do have to buy me a wig.. WHY IN HELL BETTE IS DOING WHAT SHE’S DOING?? I mean it’s Tina who should be scared and confused, cuz it’s new to her.. but if i come to think about it, i understand Bette, it’s hard to be in love with someone that you know you can’t be with.. or that if you are with this someone many ppl that you love will get hurt.. but WTF why care about the others, none of them will be ur partner for life..
OK oK i will stop rambling.. Great update.. ;)
I hope you can read spanish!!!
El capÃtulo no era muy largo. Asà yo lo tuve que leer dos veces. Pero lo era bueno. Espero que usted tenga un feliz cuarto, quinto, sexto o cualquier es usted celebra personalmente.
Damn! That was intense! I could feel Bette’s inner turmoil! I’m really enjoying this story and so glad to see that you posted this chapter…I’ve been looking for it ever since I caught up on the others that I’d missed while I was gone. Thanks, you’re writing is so refreshing!
Aaah, dear Sophie, I enjoyed this new “recipe” of yours so much ! An other delightful waking… and breakfast(lol)thanks to you !
More than ever, your wonderful story caught my heart and makes the waiting between two chapters soooo hard to bear ! However, the best recipes always need to be carefully concocted, so I’ll do my best to be a patient reader (*wink and smile !*).
Few words more : as always, you’re truly so gifted depicting feelings’ subtle and painful hidden tortures… and god knows how much this particular life’s period is an ideal territory to explore the worst of them – and the more intense too.
Thank you so much, you are such an exquisite writer. With all my warmest and grateful thanks – once more !
I hope you can read french too!! :)
J’aime ta façon d’écrire, je suis sous le charme… J’attends avec impatience le prochain chapitre, ne nous fait pas trop attendre. MERCI !!!
Damn I can’t believe I missed your story and your 2 chapters but glad to catch up. Damn this is sad for them, it hard for Bette to come out of the closet and be with Tina, but she can’t she can’t hurt Jack. I think she just don’t know what to do right now, it’s just too much for her to handle right now. Well hope she’ll think clearly and find out whatever or do whatever to be with Tina. Ok please post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter, 5 star for you!
Alright alright, although Bette did get harsh I will let your crime slide only because i know you will not have her stay “bitchy” forever, Tina will just have to break those walls down. I mean this is a story, what would it be without twists. I remember when I was in high school (pretending to be nostalgic like it was a long time ago when in fact it has been 3 months) and we teenagers are emotional, hormonal messes. I like this story because I feel like you get that high school vibe just right. I mean, there is love between them obviously but they are both still young, a little naive, and obviously scared by what they are feeling. Having this see-saw back and forth is awesome, I’m loving every minute and waiting for more. Have a great weekend!
porter, porter, porter….you haven’t been doing your assignment by reading our comments….coz if you do, you’ll definetely know what you should do! hmmpptt….
regards to you sophie…keep it coming girlfriend!
Ohhhhh….so close.
I really like where you’re going with this story. The characterization is great and realistic for how teenaged Bette and Tina would deal with high school, friends and love. There is one thing, though; some of the chapters have an excessive amount of exclamation points. And while they’re appropriate in some instances, they are hardly necessary in every sentence. Just FYI :) Other than that, the fic’s great. Keep up the great work and post more soon.
I am in love with this story!
ahh, bette! what’s going on? and poor tina, i hope she doesn’t go trying to make better feel crummy by being all lovey-dovey with jack…on second thought, maybe bette needs a wake up call? :) great chapter! don’t leave us hanging too long!
just got back from a 6 days trip to New Zealand and the 1st thing I read was ur fan fic…awesome chapter…hehe but please please don’t keep bette & tina apart…its just so wrong
I’m surprised Tina would be using “babe” and “baby” so soon, and be outward enough to put her arms around Bette like that. Then again, I could be old fashioned? :-)
NOOOOO Don’t bring back the “Bitch Monster” we were just starting to get somewhere! Please post soon and don’t let T be to upset and make damn sure Bette gets it all right sonner rather than later!
WOW!! yeah again…Can’t wait for the next post…c’mon Ineed my fix… Post very very soon PLEASE!!!
No way, that is so mean. You can’t do that. that’s to sad. please let things work out.
I’m believe in you sophie…these two will be together eventually. And with all these twists they will learn to appreciate each other even more. I was just watching S2 where Bette is escorted home by Alice and Shane after having a few too many drinks and that broke my heart. But even there we can see the light at the end of the tunnel.
waiting for this chapter caused that I know how much I really like your story, but hey don’t delay posting too often, this is not what I mean! LOL I’m with others that Highschool is a very interesting time- full of exciting and painful moments too. And for me this time has a special meaning;)Thanx for an update!
oh come on, you cant do that! but im sure its going to be ok! at least i hope so! thanx for posting! it makes my holiday even better! post soon please! i just love your story!
please post soon! i love this story so much!!!!
Well Sophie I am very glad to be back. I am enjoying your new post as well as the Live 8 concert. I hope that all the fans of the fanfic archives are following this historic event!
Your story was like always a cliff hanger and I could hate you for it… =) but I love the pace!! Your are the expert here. I agree with all the other comments that being out in highschool must be brutal! Specially for someone like Bette… she has a reputation to keep.. sucks!
Ok I am rambling… post soon!!
Man that was great but i think you starting to enjoy leaving me hanging like that!!!!!! PLEASE DON’T LEAVE US HANGING TOO LONG PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
DAMN IT BETTE..DON’T GOOOOOO TINA…..FABULOUS CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON…….
This story is just so great, but what´s up with Bette??.Post soon!!!
Kan forstå at du er fra Norge..Veldig bra!!
Damn! I thought Bette would make her a cheerleader and become her best friend! lol
I love this fic so much! I hope you post soon!
Nooo! … Bette better get her act together and go after her or somethin LOL … great story , cant wait for the next chapter :)
Playing catch up… Wow, I love this Bette! I love the drama! Let Bette do her things! Good Job!